It is really interesting reading from Edward's point of view a story we know where it is going.  I like how you have handeled Edward's "coming of age" issues and how he experiences the act of lovemaking rather than watching it.

thanks for all your work on this- Xanath

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading! I'm glad that you are enjoying it even though the main part of the storyline won't be a surprise :) It is definiitely a new perspective for him and a life changing event. Meeting Bella was only the first. I think the reason that he has so many issues in this story is that he has major altering event after altering event and while he has time, he never really deals with the issues and so he is caught by surprise the next time he gets hit wiith something like this again.

Can't wait for you guys to get all of this :)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Awe! I love that last comment about the food bowls...and about adopting a puppy. :D

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Glad you enjoyed it :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!

I love how this is coming along! More please!

Author's Response:

The next chapter is already waiting to be approved :) Thanks for reading and reviewing ;)

Ah, hell! I ran outta chapters! Love this, BTW! I read the other story, but I find myself just as intrigued with this one!

Author's Response:

LOL... i love when people have that reaction ;) Means I'm doing my job.. hehe

I've already put the next chapter in queue. I really am trying to get this out to y'all - finally.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

I think they faked her death. She had to die in the news. Sad to say I think the Volturi have her and her baby.

Author's Response:

Did you know that Bella's side of this story is complete and available? You can find out by reading Consequences :)

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He is such a whiney little bitch. He should spend less time feeling sorry for himself, and more time feeling regret for his own behaviors.

If you do change your user name, will the alerts stop working? Do we need to change our settings somehow?

Author's Response:

I don't think you'll to change anything but I will double check when I hear back from the administrators. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Edward sure does a great deal of collapsing, crying, and running away. 

Author's Response:

Yep. This is Edward we are talking about. He beats himself up over every little thing. Imagine what he would be like with the big things. Stephenie hinted that he basically couldn't function without Bella during New Moon. Ya think he'd be better off now?

I just started reading this and love it!!!! I do hope you come back to it!!!!

Author's Response:

I will... the whole thing is actually written :)  I just haven't had time because of way too much work and trying to complete my master's degree. I hope to start posting again very very soon :)

You're right. vampire's they might be, but still imperfect. This was a harsh chapter to read but also neccesary. I hope the next chapter will be moving us closer to them reuniting.

Author's Response:

I know... I sometimes feel like authors paint them as these perfect beings. Yes they have more skill but it means they can make even bigger mistakes. Like this. I honestly feel a bit bad for Tanya too...

We are getting closer... not there yet though :(

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*growl* i know what's going to happen, but this chapter is killing me!

Author's Response:

I know... I wanted everyone to see how much pain he was in having to do this...

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Varner is such a sick perv. I'm so glad Edward was able to stop him. 

I loved the proposal the first time, but I still loved it alot!

Author's Response:

I know... I wanted the reader to really understand how much the Cullens know that no one else does. I want the contrast to be there when Bella disapears...

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:( Jasper, please help him, the guilt is eating him alive....

Author's Response:

Yah, Edward is a mess...

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This time skip was very well done.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I wasn't sure how people were going to respond to having Edward do something similar to what Bella did in New Moon. I figured that without something to guide him, he would fall apart just as much as Bella did.

I plan to upload the next chapter at some point today and you should have it in the next couple of days (I hope) ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!