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Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 29 Harvest

Aww - sometimes sappy is good, like here. After all they've been through they deserve happiness.

Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 29 Harvest

I loved this and the last chapter, oh what am I saying I loved the whole story! It was a great read literally the only thing missing would be an outtake from E pov about when B went off on him. Oh well, I look forward to whatever your next project is! Thank you for a wonderful story and thanks for the time you've devoted to get it too us!
Melly

Reviewer: jacobdoesntsparkle (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 04:16 PM · On: Chapter 29 Harvest

I had a really great time following your Edward and Bella through this story. The nice happy ending made me grin :)

Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 29 Harvest

Great ending to a great story! Outstanding job!

Reviewer: Intsu (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 29 Harvest

Thank you for the hours of enjoyment your story has provided. I really loved the balance of angst and joy for Edward and Bella and my favourite characters. Please write another story soon - a sequel would be wonderful - as I said, I love your take on these characters.

Reviewer: pmav (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2011 10:06 AM · On: Chapter 26 Return to NY

Love those small boxes... yippee. happy endings! or beginnings as the case may be.

Although I feel Edward in this story line will never get back to himself totally till his life is complete with wife and children. Hope it will end that way for him.

I read for happy endings! If I wanted strife - regret and sadness all I need to do is read the news. Thanks for your happy ending... loving this story!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2011 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 28 Bella

Thanks for the peek into Edward's troubled thoughts. At least he got something out of Bella's drunken confessions.

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2011 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 28 Bella

Now he makes a lot more sense, even if he based his opinions on bias rather than fact!

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 12:12 PM · On: Chapter 28 Bella

LOL....Edward has had a tough time with Bella from the very beginning. That usually makes for a solid marriage. Fate keeps throwing her in his path, and he can't avoid her, not that he wanted to in the first place. When two people belong together...they always seem to find each other in a crowd. These two are no exception. Can't wait to see what happens next. Loved it!! Send us more outtakes please.....Thanks for everything. Your writing is spectacular.

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 27 Bliss

Bella and Edward forever. I love how Edward gave it to Tanya. He is completely right. No friendship for those two. That would be disrespectful to Bella and trouble for them all. I was so happy to see Jane so excited and able to finally calm and convince Edward that he is making the right choice. Love it all. Can't wait for him to say the words...Squeeeee!

Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2011 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 28 Bella

Wow nice seeing Edward's side of things from the beginning. Great job there! Are you going to follow up with the wedding at some point?

Loved the chapter! can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 27 Bliss

Now I'm even prouder of Edward.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 26 Return to NY

He did very well! Loved the way he kept his poise when confronted with Aro and that he sent Tanya on her merry way.

By the way: I love that you mix up the pairings here, makes everything less predictable.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 25 Decisions

Thank goodness for Bella's friends!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 24 The Denalis

Wow, Edward's on a roll - so much progress on the relationship-front.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 23 Tanya

Tanya ... I have no word (shakes head in disgust and disbelief). Will there be a showdown between Bella and the bitch?

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 22 Jane

Why stop here, just that Edward found his courage to explain about Tanya? Cliffies are evil.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 11:49 AM · On: Chapter 21 Truth

ILY - finally!

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 20 Answers

I'm pretty sure that was Edward's sister at his house. It's sort of tragic how jealous Bella and Edward got over the other's company at the restaurant where they ideally should have gone together and enjoyed themselves.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 19 New York

After the way Peter's been acting Edward seems like a real good boy in comparison. Why doesn't Edward feel the need to fight for Bella?

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 18 San Francisco

I'm kind of thankful for Jasper to bring some of Edward's secrets out into the open. I bet there is still a lot to be disclosed.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 17 February

Edward's turning a little into Peter here, not thinking about the way Bella feels. He dind't want to be someone's secret, but Bella doesn't want that for herself either.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 16 Unexpected

Wow - what the f** did Tanay do to Edward that has him freaking out like this? He's an overthinker, too.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 15 Closure

As long as Edward doesn't reveal why he "doesn't do relationships" Bella just has to let things play out. She shouldn't overthink and shoe shouldn't feel inferior to the women he was dating before.

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 10, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 14 Surrender

Yess - they did it - and in the background I hear Rose whispering "told you so", he, he.

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