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Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2011 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 22 Jane
Damn Tanya's a nasty bitch. Poor Edward. Good chapter, I liked meeting Jane.
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2011 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 20 Answers
of course Jane was his sister, but at least this mix up let them both admit that they were one the same page. great chapter!
Love this story and look for update annoucments in my email all the time!
thanks,
Melly!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 22 Jane
I have to wonder about two things... How did she remain standing? And who the hell would cheat on Edward? Lovely chapter!
Reviewer: TheSneakyFox (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 22 Jane
Dun-Dun-DAAAA! I wouldn't want to be Tanya if (when) Bella ever meets her face to face! Excellent story. It has enough romance and fluffiness to keep you sighing, but is detailed and realistic enough that you can really feel like you're part of it.
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 22 Jane
Oh... my... goodnes... Howwww could you leave it like that! OMG, I kept scrolling and looking for more but there wasn't any! So Tanya had been cheating on him... big time and had got pregnant by the guy... I'm thinkin the guy is someone really close to Edward...
I can't wait for more! The dinner with Jane was cute :) as was the plans afterwards XD
Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2011 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 22 Jane
did i mention that i love being blindsided? she cheated on him, seriously? on what planet does someone cheat on him?
i need to seek medical attention for the whiplash that just occurred= thank you!!!!
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 21 Truth
Squeeee!!! HOT HOT HOT! I can't wait to meet Jane she doesn't sound at all what I would expect!!! Post again soon just loving this story!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 17, 2011 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 21 Truth
Good chapter.....
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 05:29 PM · On: Chapter 21 Truth
This was so emotional, I was holding my breath! Well done!
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2011 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 21 Truth
*squeals happily* oh my goodness that was absolutely perfect!!!
Such an amazing and happy chapter! I ♥ it!!
I'm beginning to wonder if they used a condom... cause she said it was different and familiar and you never mentioned it... hmm *ponders the thought and if one wasn't used where it could leave the story*
Can't wait for more! :D
Reviewer: pmav (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2011 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 20 Answers
You left us hanging??? Any plans in this year to finish? It's been 6+ months Know life is busy but we are talking Edward here and answers are very much appreciated.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 20 Answers
OMG I am all caught up I just found yor story and it rocks!!! Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 20 Answers
OMG HE'S IN LOVE WITH HER!! YAYYY!! God can't wait for the rest of the conversation! XD
Love it! Can't wait for more! ^ ^
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 20 Answers
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh- that was a painful screech not one of relief how could you cliff us like that? i thought that you cared ok enough drama, you could have cut it at him waiting on the porch, please please please update soon the warm and fuzzy feeling is lingering i just need it to come to fruition
the chickie was his lil sis right, i always confuse myself when Alice isnt related to E
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 20 Answers
Good chapter.....
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 20 Answers
Yeah, his sister really could have done a better job explaining who she is! Well, at least Bella finally got to hear those words!
Reviewer: rtpobsessed (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 19 New York
Overreact much?? I knew he was with Charlotte, pig!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 19 New York
Good Chapter......
Reviewer: JacksonsGirl1 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 19 New York
Yay I can finally review from my iPhone!!! Sorry I have been complaining for months and could do a happy dance now!
Anyhow so loved the chapter guy friends are so handy when having relationship problems they can help u figure out what goes on in a guys brain. So I would have really like to have seen some kind of confrontation with Peter, what an ass to hold on to her and date some bimbo from the office then guilt her for breaking up with him. Seriously would have liked to see her confront him or rather let the bitchy new girlfriend know where he when he went to napa.
Anyway now hopefully we can see the happy couple move on though I wondering what E has been thinking all this time?
See ya Melly
Reviewer: vartan22 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 19 New York
yes, feeling a bit for Eddie and his situation, we've all been there, well not exactly there but ya know what i mean
she needs to cut him a little slack, i said little, she cant let him off the hook completely but Jasper, Jasper is the voice of reason that she needed, he was written perfectly. I actually expected Rose to be the one to offer this advice but, good job, it always comes better from a guy
i would have liked her to have sent Eddie a text after the Peter incident, nothing earth shattering just maybe, a thinking of you or mention that she thought he would have enjoyed the wine tasting aspect of jasper's party i believe in space but too much cultivates resentment, at least with Edward one last thought, why does he keep bringing up the statement, you said you wouldn't leave? i need more background on the Tanya situation see this is what pisses me off so much about women, one woman in their past destroys a large piece of them and then the girl they meet next has to deal with the aftermath rant over- great emotional emitting chap well done! xoxo
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 19 New York
yeah, I can see how it wouldn't have mattered with Peter....but I would have HAD to get my two cents in......"ya know Peter, when you were all wanting to hug up on me, were you dating Charlotte? Ya know Peter, when you got all jeakous and asked if I was fucking Edward.....you were already snuggled up with someone else....NOT TO MENTION WHEN I LEFT!!!!!!!!! You bastard! It's not the fact that I am hurt because you were fucking some smelly skank from your office...it was the fact that you acted like I was doing wrong....when you were the whole FUCKING TIME!!!!!!!
FUCK YOU PETER! I hope you get the gift of the HERP...ya know.....it keeps on giving!"
Yeah......that's probably what I would've said.
HAHA....man that felt good!
Thanks!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 19 New York
So, is he waiting for her? Or does he think she's moved on, went back to Peter? I somehow don't know if he will have faith in her!
Reviewer: MissJanuary (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 04:25 PM · On: Chapter 19 New York
Feeling pretty bad for both of them, but there's still some explaining that needs to happend.
Reviewer: kittiekatz34 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 19 New York
ugh! havent they had enough drama? cant we just let them be happy????
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2011 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 18 San Francisco
Amazing! Wow! I can't believe how Edward actually knew Bella before... well sorta. It's crazy how small our world is. I found your story this morning and I absolutely love it and cannot wait for more! I was pouting when I realized this was the last chapter that's put up... I really want the two of them to stay together and work it out. Edward has to do something to show that he wants to keep Bella. Him being married and her having to find out through Jasper is like a slap in the face... He better fix that. I think Bella should send Alice to Jasper's party or well bring Alice AND Edward with her. I think we all have an inkling Jazz and Alice will hit it off.
Edward really just needs to open up completely, forget about all his hurt and just tell Bella everything. She at least deserves that much. Then he needs to reflect back on what she said and realize she admit she was in love with him! Oh yes, most definitely! Can't wait for more! I absolutely love this story!
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