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Reviewer: LovelyinLavender (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2012 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 32
What a chapter! So Bella is pregnant, and Chelsea is...well...crazy as shit. It's creepy how delusional she is. Did she actually cut out Edward Sr's heart? That's just sick. The whole thing is...which is why I'm kind of glad Bella mentioned that Edward was still alive! Though it makes me wonder if Chelsea's going to try to escape or something :-/ On to the next chapter!
Reviewer: cherromate23 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 33
awwwwwwie
Reviewer: Hayesmom (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 33
Why do I feel like a shoe is about to drop?
Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2012 06:46 AM · On: Chapter 32
No..Thank YOU for continuing to write! :D Chelsea is Looney Tunes..WOW!
Edward will be a fantastic daddy...Love Linda xo
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 10:43 PM · On: Chapter 33
very vey nice chapter
keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: alaskancoppertop (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 33
OMG, Charlie is being such an ASS!! He's going to be in for a world of hurt soon!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2012 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 33
I figured Charlie wouldn't take it well, now he's lost Tanya and Bella........ So proud of Edward for standing up to him :)
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 32
LOL. I'm so glad to get caught up finally! I eagerly await your next update!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 31
awe! naive Edward is so sweet!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 02:45 PM · On: Chapter 30
LMAO...wow! That was unexpected...and it was beautiful at the same time!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 29
I'm so loving this!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 02:29 PM · On: Chapter 28
who knew that exploring like that could be so sexy? Very nice chapter!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 27
Go Edward! WOHOOOO!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 26
...um....how interesting...*smirk*
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 25
LOL. That was very....interesting!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 24
*fans self* lol. wow!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 23
LOL I'm sorry, i know this is serious, but I was laughing my ass off this chapter!
Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2012 10:53 AM · On: Chapter 32
WOW - intense! Bella got the answer she needed and some closure, but not before getting a last stab in. Edward will be a great father and I think this will help him mature in ways no one could have forseen. Looking forward to more...
Reviewer: cherromate23 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 09:05 PM · On: Chapter 32
Omg! Love!! Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 32
Wow that chick is totally bonkers !!! Omg ! Preggers !!! Wonder how everyone is gonna take it....
Reviewer: cullenvamp_no10 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
I was liking this story until you went and made Bella get pregnant. Edward can't even understand common sense and now there's a baby? In real life Bella would be so hated. You don't sleep with someone who psychologically is about 9.
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 22
im perfectly ok with that!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 21
eeepppp!!!!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 19
I'm loving how this is going so far!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2012 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 32
I'm thinking pregnancy hormones have messed with her judgement. I don;t see how it was a good idea to let Chelsea know that Edward survived.
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