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Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 22

well that was a very lovey chapter lol. The Charlie scene I wasn't expecting at all like ever, thats the only weird one for me lol. Carlisle and Esme are just right though. 

Great thing Edward got all of his anger out. Now he can let it go and be more comfortable with things. like discovering what french kissing is lol and morning wood lolol. 

Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 22

Thanks for the uppdate.  Loved E & J's conversation

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2012 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 22

i think he needs a few more rounds with the dummy...

Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2012 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 21

That's so sweet, but I worry that it's a little kid kind of love. I mean, he's operating at what level socially and emotionally. He's still got a lot of growing to do... Great chapter!

Reviewer: luv4jake (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2012 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 21

Aw I loved it outside of Jake being a douche. Until next time.

Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2012 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 21

Edward is such a sweetheart! Charlie is a douche.

Reviewer: Purple Passion (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 21

Aaawww.......so sweet. Edward finally knows that his feelings he has for Bella is Love. Too cute ;-)

Reviewer: FanNan46 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 21

Thanks for the tissue warning!  It was much needed.  I'm glad he's progressing, even if it doesn't always seem like it.  So sweeeeet!

Reviewer: tonilexington (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2012 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 21

aaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww and I LOVE YOU for this wonderful story!!! LOL

Reviewer: cherromate23 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 21

Awwwwwww now I wanna cry lol

Reviewer: cynthia (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 21

lol as soon as she said the movie was gonna make her cry i thought " nicholas sparks movie '

Reviewer: Snowball Sniper (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 04:39 PM · On: Chapter 21

That was beautiful and heartbreaking. He told her he loved her!!!

Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 21

This is so sweet

Reviewer: wonnabcullen (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 21

aaawwwwwwwwwwwwwww! BEST.CHAPTER.EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Reviewer: Hayesmom (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 21

I always get so excited when you update! Thank you!

Reviewer: Tinagina (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 21

aww <3 I love this chapter it is so adorable. I am glad Edward finally figured out how he feels about his bella :)

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 21

Well, that ended on a positive note! I wonder if he'll start to wonder about other feelings he may be having around Bella!

Reviewer: bethy23 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 21

Aww!! This was so cute. I loved it. Charlie mad me mad but att of the Edward definatly made up for it. :-) I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 21

Awwwww!! I reread the chapter like 5 times cause it was sooo sweet! Utterly adorable! I'm so happy Edward's learned the meaning of love and is able to tell Bella! I was bein sappy for that part XD

Can't wait for more! I wanna see Edward progress more and their relationship as well! ^ ^ Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: Dydear (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 21

Hmm...  I guess I have mixed feelings.  I do like how this ended - so sweet - but in the context of where Edward is mentally it just seems, not wrong, but not quite right either.  Holding out hope.  :)

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 21

i want to wring Charlie's neck! but after i dry all my tears with a couple of tissues...lol awww, that was so sweet!

Reviewer: nothing_but_a_prayer (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 21

Bella loves Edward.

Edward loves Bella.

And I love this story.

:-)

Reviewer: 4ever17 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 21

Doing a happy dance right now!!!!! Ohhhh what a great chappie! Edward finally gets to learn more about his mom & dad. And he found The Word for his feelings towards Bella! Absolutely lovely job!!!!! Linda xo

Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 21

Very sweet!  I hope Charlie gets his act together soon!

Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2012 03:46 AM · On: Chapter 21

YAY!

But...BOOO. He's not ready for sex. Good or bad? Need next chapter...

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