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Reviewer: mcjes (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2012 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Emerald
I cannot wait for this story to continue posting!
Reviewer: Winta (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2012 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Emerald
Wow. I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Emerald
Oh boy, very intense.
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 04:42 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Crimson
Youasa!!!! Tough cookie
Reviewer: artri (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 04:26 AM · On: Prologue - Gray
Bloody brilliant, hooked already.
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Emerald
That was intense! Edward is a bit forward here!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
Jeez - what the hell did Bella's mom put her through? poor thing! And Edward is adding to the stress!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Crimson
Wow! Bella is not one to screw with! I noticed she is back on the "Ms Swan" name calling with Rosalie --- not a happy camper!
Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 07:53 PM · On: Prologue - Gray
Great story! Looking forward to Bella's hacking skills!
Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Emerald
Omg it was so awesome! I love that we are getting edwards pov as well! Who was the sadistic fool that did this to her. Will she open up to Edward?
Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2012 02:13 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Emerald
Wow a lot to take in.
I was not expecting that at all.
Sorry about your laptop
Great chapter. :)
Reviewer: mindovermadness (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2012 05:00 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
Give me MORE!!!!!! Please?
Reviewer: goldseadragon (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
Oh, I really really really really want to see Bella rip his life's work to shreds! Arrogant prick.
Reviewer: jillapet (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
She's either schizophrenic or a savant. He's just not in touch with reality. This should be a hell of a ride!
Reviewer: Naerts (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
Please keep going
Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
I think it's more than good and just hope you will continue it please!!!!! Looks like we are all caught up to where you left off? Please continue. I want to know Edwards deal!
Author's Response: Pnkats! I think I'm too tired to notice that it's you reviewing 3 times (which I appreciated so much btw)
And again, I promise that the next chapter will be up during to weekend ^^
Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 02:50 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Crimson
I was reading on ff so I assume you won't be going back there. Please continue it here!!
Author's Response: Hello there,
Well I'll be posting here and on fanfiction... But honestly I prefer posting here because I'm not sure I'll be allowed to continue posting this on ff since there will be alot of angsty stuff and dark themes (there will be a little warning for that in the chapter notes)
Anyways, I'll stop my rambling here^^ Thanks for your review! It's much appreciated
Enjoy the rest, it will be up during the weekend
Reviewer: pnkats (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 02:49 PM · On: Prologue - Gray
Omg I am so glad this story is back. I was afraid it was stopped. Can't wait for more
Reviewer: monkeymom11 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
Please continue with your story! It is fascinating so far, and I'm excited to see where it might lead.
Author's Response: Hello! Thank you for your review, it's much appreciated! I hope you'll enjoy the rest, a chapter will be up during the weekend!
Reviewer: rubyred_fm_tx (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
Unexpected story. No idea what will happen next.....
Author's Response: Hello there^^
Thanks for your review! It's much appreciated since I barely get any feedback^^
Well... You all having no idea what happens is my goal actually... Everything that will happend will be pretty unexpected, some chapters will be pretty "angsty" but there will be warnings!
Well I'm gonna stop rambling^^ Enjoy the rest, it will be up soon enough
Reviewer: zahir (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2012 05:32 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
wow... i am trying to understnad what happened to Bella but I can't, based on the lines there is something related to Renee but the erst could be words from a lover and even a father...
i love your story, I hope you will keep posting.. you kept me waiting for long :)
thanks
Author's Response: Hello zahir!^^
Thanks for your review, it's much appreciated^^ I doubt you'll be able to discover what happened with Bella OR Edward on your own, it all complicated and angsty, but we'll get there soon enough!
Enjoy your rest, it will be updated sooner rather than later!^^
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2012 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Ivory
That was intense. I really want to see the back story on both of them
Author's Response: Hello Gelsamina!
Thanks for your review, it's much appreciated! Don't we all want to know their back story? ^^
Enjoy the rest! it will be up soon enough^^
Reviewer: honorata (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2012 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Crimson
Yeah can't wait for the following chapters
Author's Response: Hello Honorata,
Thanks for your review, it's much appreciated!
The rest will be up really soon, I hope you'll enjoy it (:
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2011 06:40 AM · On: Prologue - Gray
Good Chapter......
Reviewer: Lil Krocks (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 08:29 AM · On: Prologue - Gray
Intriguing indeed....your Bella seems to have a heavy past. It seems promising I just hope she won't be falling in love with Edward at the first sight .
I'm looking forward to the next chapter !
Author's Response: Hello Lil Krocks,
Thank your for your review! Its much appreciated...
Bella has a heavy past indeed. And my story goes a bit beyond the usual, I will leave that to answer your hopes
Next chapter is waiting to be submitted
Karyn
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