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Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 01:05 AM · On: Chapter 11
OK, please write more and finish your stories! They are both so good!! Please, pretty please with a cherry on top!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 12:38 AM · On: Chapter 9
lol! I love Seth. It is so like him to be listening from the bushes!
Now let's get back to Ness...I hope she's safe!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 6
Poor Jacob, I honestly hurt for him. I hope Nessie behaves while she is away!
Reviewer: mychild (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 3
Just started reading and I love it. You really are talented and I hope that you finish this story and String Theory.
Reviewer: tazz (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 4
this is the 1st nessie - jacob i have read - its good - cant wait to read more
Reviewer: maddylyn (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 11
Wow. Can't wait to jump off of another cliffhanger. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 11
Very intense! I like it! This story is getting really interesting - not that it wasn't before, but you get what I mean, right? :P
Yes, the cliffhangers do keep me reading, although they are pure evil!
I knew something was up with that whole rave thing and that Adair guy. Could he be the demon Sophia's after? Or is he working for him/her/it? Hmm... guess I'll have to wait to find out.
Please update soon!
Oh, hey, so when's Jacob coming into the scene? Will he be there to help get this demon guy? I know he's on his way there, or at least that was the case last time I heard 2 chapters ago. So just curious when he's arriving!?! :D
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Reviewer: hochexplosiv (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 11
Nice one. If I were Alice could I see Embry emprinting on a pixie in the future? Oh: I too think it would help the story to know in whoms POV a chapter is written. A lot of authors around here who change the narrator do that at the beginning of each chapter. More please.
Reviewer: cekh1908 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:02 AM · On: Chapter 11
Very interesting story, I'm enjoying it. Just one thought, sometimes it's hard to follow exactly who the speaker is. I understand not wanting to clutter dialog with a bunch of "said"s, but you may want to try for a few more clues. I got lost a few times.
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 10
Oh, certainly not long! Lol! Not long enough in my opinion! :D
So Sophia and Pablo are Pixies? Hmm... interesting!
Oh, I was so happy to see Zafrina! As soon as I read her name I shrieked in excitement! :D
Please don't take so long getting the next chapter up! Cliffhangers are the worst ever!
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Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 10
Nice cliffie cutting it where you did. I really hope it isn't so long of a wait for the next chapter. Please update again soon!
Manda
Reviewer: HayleyLoux (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 10
Ooo cliffhangerish, im liking!
Reviewer: HayleyLoux (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 6
Im loving this story :) Im not normally a Jacob fan but decided to read this on a whim and so glad I did. Keep up the good work :)
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 9
I anxious to know how this resolves. Two months is too long to wait for an update. Please, sate my curiosity.
Reviewer: TWILUVER13 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2009 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 9
Waiting for more
Reviewer: TWILUVER13 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 9
write more please
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 9
Damn, I really wanted to know who showed up behind Ness in the last chapter. Darn you pushing that cliffie on longer, ugh. but this was a great chapter, and i really enjoyed it. Can't beleive he's going down to cali, i wonder what Ness will think. As always i look forward to the next chapter.
Manda
Reviewer: laughingspider (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 10:03 PM · On: Chapter 9
This is a great story so far. I'm surprised you haven't received more reviews. Keep it up!
Shawn
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 9
Oh, poor Jake. He's so lonely without Nessie. And to give up his Alpha position, at least for the time being, to Sam again ... wow, he's really desperate to see her. I think it's sweet that both Embry and Seth would volunteer to go with him, especially Seth! He's so funny!
PLEASE update soon! I want to know what's going on with Nessie, and who that cold hand belonged to, and who that 'she' is that's on her way already! And also how her new friends know so much about vampires, or at least think they do!
Keep it coming! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: rob_on_a_stick (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 8
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH WHO IS IT?????????? WRITE MORE!!!!!
Reviewer: TwilightLove48 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Chapter 8
OMMMGGGG
how can you leave it like this
i love this story more than life itself... i think hehe
UPDATE PLEASEE
whenn????
Reviewer: Djanga (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
I just stumbled upon this story, but I'm glad I did! I did a marathon read and got through the whole thing so far, and I'm looking forward to reading more.
Reviewer: Panda1499 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 8
What the FUCK! This cliffie is just mean, like seriously, super mean. I loved the chapter though. Hmm, interesting about sophia and pablo's conversation. Poor ness, homesickness sucks. I can't wait for the next chapter to find out who the hand belongs too.
Manda
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2009 11:15 PM · On: Chapter 8
What in the world is going on? Who are Sophia and Pablo? And who does that cold hand belong to? And who was Alice talking about when seh said that "she already left."? Who is that she? Bella maybe? Hmmm...
And how did/would Sophia know about Nessie being a vampire (even though she's a half-vampire, but they don't know that) anyway? And what does the Rave have to do with this? Hmmm...
Jacob's secret gift to Nessie is so sweet! And the fact that he slept in her bed, and Bella actually let him! That was so funny!
PLEASE update soon with answers! Lol! Please Please Please! This story is awesome!
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 7
Great story! Keep it comin! I'm really interested in this Adair guy, and how long until Jacob shows up randomly in California, or Ness takes a visit to go see her family - although it looks like she isn't missing them at all that much.
Update soon! This is really good!
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