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Reviewer: mystery person who loves twilight and rhymes (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2013 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 1


Reviewer: ermireallydontcare (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2011 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Another great idea and I loved it :)

Reviewer: angel 057 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2011 01:36 AM · On: Chapter 1

I loved it I think it takes an extra talented writer to pull off something like this.  Kudos to you!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the compliment  :)  When these sorts of things invade my brain I have to play with them and work on them till they're ready to come out otherwise I can't concentrate on other things.  They are fun though  :)

Reviewer: spockdatabones (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 12:57 AM · On: Chapter 1

i liked it! i'm always looking for something a little more "unique" about the cullens and u nailed it on the head!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!  :)  This is what I do when writer's block interferes with the other things I'm trying to write.  I really hope I'll get unblocked soon...

 

Reviewer: gopher4953 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Hey sweetie!

How cute and very cleaver! I LOVE Dr Seuss! Very well done!

Hugs,

Ellen xx



Author's Response:

Thanks  :)  I don't know how these things get into my head, but it's fun to get them out and share  :)

Reviewer: Lunar Butterflies (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 1

This is good; I liked it. The only thing is I can't tell who's POV this told from. Sometimes you say she or he and sometimes you say we or I. 



Author's Response:

Yeah.  I know.  It skips around pov's.  Sorry about that.  I probably should have worked on that a bit more.

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