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Reviews For Twinlight
Reviewer: twilightluvaX3 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2011 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love your story. It has a really cool difference with Adam in it. It's awesome

Reviewer: Jazmine10 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 6

Hmmmm..... I Adam has figured it out.
Keep doing what you do and we'll keep reading :)
great fic!

Reviewer: marsy-cat (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 6

Loving the story so far... Wasn't sure about the twin storyline, but you've completely one me over... Thanks for taking the time and putting the effort into writing this for us...



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad every time someone accepts my twin twist!

Reviewer: EASEmama (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 12:51 PM · On: Chapter 6

I found your story today, and I must say that I'm really enjoying it.  My favorite thing about it is that the conversations are not stilted... they sound very natural.  Good job!

Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2011 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 6

just now finding your story ... what a difference having a twin makes to the story ... I'm really liking it

Reviewer: Beck (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 07:37 PM · On: Chapter 6

I really like the new chapter of Twinlight. You have me hanging off the edge of my seat waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Thank you! You're so sweet!

Reviewer: ZiggaZigAhh (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 6

I'm really loving this story so far & can't wait to see where it goes from here. I'm excited to see how Adam reacts to Bella getting close to Edward.

Reviewer: ginger_sith (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 6

I just found this story, and I have to say I like how its going.  Can't wait for an update!

Reviewer: twifantasyfan (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 6

Nice.  Looking forward to seeing Bella figure things out.  And for the Cullens to learn how much Bella and Adam actually know.

Reviewer: claireava (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2011 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 6

I love this story...its so true that the smallest detail (like having a twin) can turn an entire tale on its head....I love their twin telepathy and cannot wait to see how big a part Adam will have to play in the rest of the story..

Don't keep us waiting too long please xxx

Reviewer: crazy4Rob (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 6

So Adam is having the dreams and keeping it from Bella. Will he confront Edward himself? I bet he will go all big brother on her and try to protect her.

Reviewer: Emmett_Rocks (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Chapter 6

Another brilliant chapter, you have made Adam fit in like he was made to be there. Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 6

  The Sadie Hawkins, Edward ignoring Bella, her curiosity peaking with every oddity she got from the Cullens, the invisible eyes in the forest...  A very frustating week to Bella, huh?        :-]

  "Adam? Oh yeah, that's... cool..."        Poor disappointed Jake...        :-}

  So, Jacob told Adam and Bella about the connection between the Cullens and the Cold Ones.  Hmm...  In the book, Bella was already so in love with Edward that it didn't matter what he was.  Here, right now, she seems to be just pissed with him.  I'm curious to see how will it develop from this point on.  In fact, aside from the shiver it gave her at the moment, she doesn't seems very fazed by the legend.

  And it was Adam who had a dream after Jacob's indiscretion?  I wonder what was in it...

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oooo! An interesting chapter! You did a great job on it! Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 6

Still enjoying the story and very much looking forward to reading where you will lead us.

Reviewer: Twi lover 21 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 6

To be honest, I thought I'd hate this story because it's nothing like any other fanfic I've ever read - but it's surprisingly great. I love their "twinspeak" :)

p.s. when are we going to meet the sixth Cullen? or was that a typo in chapter 2?



Author's Response:

that was a typo! sorry! but i've fixed it now.

Reviewer: MelieB (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 6

Nice chapter.  Liked that Adam came up with the "out of town" idea.

Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

more more i like your slant on the legend!!!

Reviewer: starlight2287 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 03:19 PM · On: Chapter 6

great chapter! update soon!

Reviewer: archgirl (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 6

I really liked this chapter, and I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: ginger1983 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 6

so...i wonder if adam will cnfront edward instead of bella? interesting story. i really love it!

Reviewer: ruthhazelton (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 6

Different take on being asked out for the Sadie Hawkins dance. As well as Bella regularly jogging. Like having the brother to play off of.

Reviewer: I_heart_jacob__ (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 6

i like this story every other non all human story with a twin is a little disappointing but this is really good so far

Reviewer: sarah01 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

brilliant story. I love the relationship you've created between Bella and Adam. And the way you are bringing each character to life. I can't wait to see what you are going to do next. XxX



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2011 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 6

I am really enjoying the story so far...having Adam really puts a different twist on things and gives you more options on how to direct the story yet keep it somewhat canon at the same time.

I am wondering if there is Quileute blood somewhere along the Swan line?  Adam sure is acting strange.....



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! In my experience, big brothers almost always have a hot head and get protective over their little sisters... but, just keep reading to find out!

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