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Reviews For Impending Doom
Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 19- Seattle

Glad she got the job, I'm sure that she'll do great.

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 18- Introductions

Awww... Edward is such a sweetie

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 17- Explanations

Wow, that is going to be awkward, poor girl :) 

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 16- Worthless

Aww... even after the bad day she remembers that they're there for her...

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 15- Regrets

Good for her. She has support and even if she has to wait a while before she gets to teach again she did what was right

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 14- Secrets

Poor girl, wonder what will happen if they come back?

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 13- Renee

Oh man... better hold on to your hats... but what about Em, doesn't he need to know too?

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 12- Perfect

Wow... who let in the crazy? Why didn't he kick her out?

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 11- Together

What a sweet dinner :)

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 10- Burning

AHHHHH!!!! WHat's going to happen???

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 9- Friendship

I'm glad she has a friend on the teaching staff.. but what is happening to poor alice now?

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 8- Relentless

Woah... progress :D

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 7- Scars

Um yes duh! :) Great chapter :)

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 05:46 PM · On: Chapter 6- Edward

Awww, Charlie even noticed it! What a cute chapter! She better tell Charlie about Tyler's dad though...

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 5- Parents

Ooooo!!! Edward!

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 05:31 PM · On: Chapter 4- Alice

Poor bella, but at least she might get to meet Edward now!

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 3- Functioning

Wow, that would be difficult... Charlie is such a good dad...

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 27- Darkness

Renee...... Dun Dun DUNNNNNNNNN!  LOL 

OMG I am so worried did she get there in time to stop the rape... even if she did Bellas mental anguish will have convinced her regardless because she was malested...  I can't wait for more!!!  I am so addicted!



Author's Response:

Aww, thanks for the review!  I will feed your addiction soon :)

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 27- Darkness

That was an incredibly intense chapter. Thank God James is gone. Can't believe anyone could be so cruel. So sick....so twisted. She is so hurt and broken, but your Edward is so compassionate, he'll make her well again. I think your Renee finally got part of her soul back and took out James. I hope so at least. I hope Bella wasnt raped. Love your writing. Makes me feel so, so many emotions. Please write again soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely review!  I will promise to post soon :)

Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 27- Darkness

very very goos chapter keep up the great work and post soon

and can it be renee that shot him?

bye bye



Author's Response:

Maybe... answer coming soon!  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 2- Emmett

Awww.... Charlie's such a sweet softie... I just love him

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 Charlie

What an introduction... finding out your mom was crazy to someone else too... and you have a brother...

Reviewer: MissManda (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 07:24 AM · On: Prologue: Escape from Phoenix

Wow, what a way to meet your daughter...



Author's Response:

Yeah, not exactly the best reunion they could have hoped for.  Thanks so much for the review!  I hope you enjoy the story!

Reviewer: lmw (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 27- Darkness

This chapter was extremly well written.  You painted a picture of Bella's hell without going into many over the top details.  Great job.

I can't wait to read what happens next.  My bet is Renee shot him....or Alice.  i don't know why I think i alice.



Author's Response:

Yes, I didn't want to get too graphic about it.  Thanks for the compliment, it was obviously a difficult chapter to write. 

Answers to the shooter coming soon!  Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2011 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 27- Darkness

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Thank you, as always!

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