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Reviewer: Drunkonbooks (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2012 10:18 PM · On: Reunion - Take Two
i love this story!!!! I really enjoy how you are able to capture the good and bad feelings of each party and put a twist on the rosaile and alice dynamics. I hope that you keep writing cause i can't wait to read what happens next. :D
Reviewer: lustingforyou (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2011 01:02 AM · On: Reunion - Take Two
Oh! It's all so beautiful! I can't wait for the next chapter! I loved how you ended the chapter. It felt more rich. Rich in emotion, and oh it was just beautiful!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 04:11 PM · On: Reunion - Take Two
i like a good, tasteful lemon just like anyone else.. the emotion and passion behind intimacy is what needs to be written about..not necessarily the size of mle anatomy and the taste of female antomy. it work ok in some sories, others, not so much.
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2011 05:37 AM · On: Reunion - Take Two
This is a very well written story. I'm glad I took the initiative and went ahead an started to read it. Your chapters are nice and long and well thought out. The interaction between Bella and Edward is very much how I would expect. I have to say I was very surprised that he demoted Alice. It was wonderful that he kissed her. I am looking forward hearing more!!!
Author's Response: You just made my day with that review. If you have a facebook account, feel free to friend me http://www.facebook.com/mina.rivera, I'll add you to the TPG group I have over there, I tend to post teasers. ;)
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 11:28 PM · On: Reunion - Take Two
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 10:51 PM · On: Reunion - Take Two
this was very very good chapter keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 07:23 PM · On: Flying Free
I love your blog with the pictures!!! It adds so much to the story. It is fun to see Rosalie as a mentor to Bella. I had a thought that there was something to the way Renee treated Bella so terribly. Now this is like a mystery cool;) One more chapter I am so lost in your story.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Reunion - Take Two
finally! reunited!!!!! Wow, Alice is going to be impossible to get along with now that she's been demoted....
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Reunion - Take One
I'm glad he didn't find her right away. Caleb is so great. I like that he didn't know who Edward was and gave him a hard time at first. So she graduated and has moved already wow.
Reviewer: Jessa1326 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 06:45 PM · On: Reunion - Take Two
So excited to see an update! I LOVED the reunion! Very cute!
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Checkmate
I love seeing Rosalie as the love sick fool over Emmett. I am so glad he is giving her the cold shoulder till she does well by Alice.
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 05:34 PM · On: Google It!
This chapter was greatlots happening. I am surprised she found out who Edward is already. I wonder if she will just let it go now. I was ready to smack Renee for telling her she couldn't go to the art school on scholarship. Angela's picture of Bella was a great turn of events I'm sure he will see it or Alice will;) I really like how you put who is being written about very clearly. The way your chapters are divided makes it very easy to follow- how you put a line to show that it was what she put on the computer. Thank you for the fun reading.
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 05:19 PM · On: Choices & Duties
Loved the meadow scene in the beginning. It is so funny how scared he is of Rosalie. I know he won't forget her that easily. I hope Carmen catches up to him.
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 05:16 PM · On: Waiting
This is so great. It feels like Cinderella. The nasty mom and the prince who will have to try to find her and Carmen the fairy godmother. I hope they have several stops and starts;) I love angst with a happy ending.
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 01:41 PM · On: Reconnaissance
Ho no what a great way to end a beautiful date. The will never for get it;) I can really feel the way Edward and Bella are drawn to each other. Such wonderful writing.
Author's Response: You have no idea how happy you make me hearing you are enjoying this story! Thank you for your kind words. xoxox ~Mina
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 01:15 PM · On: Meeting Vs. Running
Awesome he is following her. I'm glad she doesn't know who he is.
Reviewer: HappyEndingLover (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 12:26 PM · On: Realities vs. Dreams
This story has a great start. I really like that you didn't tell us who Alice was talking to right away. Edward seems his normal emo self;) Great Bella trying to make the best of things.
Reviewer: bella2699 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 10:36 AM · On: Reunion - Take Two
That was a good chapter
Reviewer: bella2699 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2011 10:36 AM · On: Reunion - Take Two
That was a good chapter
Reviewer: bella2699 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 10:29 PM · On: Flying Free
That's a good story keep writing
Author's Response: I will keep writing, unfortunately RL is kicking me right now, but I hope to have a new chapter within the week. Thanks for reading and reviewing! xoxox ~Mina
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 07:30 PM · On: Realities vs. Dreams
So I take it that this Bella is still in highschool...of some sort?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Bella is a senior, about to graduate from High School.
Reviewer: ccslover22 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 06:31 AM · On: Flying Free
cna't wait till they meet. i wanna kill renee
Reviewer: Leenf (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 03:23 AM · On: Flying Free
wow very very good chapter keep up the great work and post soon
bye bye
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 02:00 AM · On: Flying Free
Wow with the whole Renee thing. Just wow.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 01:13 AM · On: Flying Free
Good Chapter.....
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