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Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2009 12:10 AM · On: It's All About the Venue

I am so happy that you updated!  Again, another wonderful chapter!  I cannot wait for more!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! Thanks for sticking with the story and for still updating, it means a lot!

Reviewer: littlemissy1503 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:14 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

lovely just lovely but why do I get the feeling Bella is hiding a secret??



Author's Response:

hummmmmmm.....keep reading....all will be revealed!

Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 06:13 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

In a word...beautiful. Simply beautiful.

"We didn't talk about how I was sure this one drive was going to haunt me for the rest of my life as the angel passed me by and left me where I belonged," - exactly what I mean. Your writing style is gorgeous and intoxicating. I find it interesting how you chose to do B&E's encounter from Bella's pov. The temptation to do this from Edward's pov must have been excruciating, but I completely understand the reason for choosing Bella instead.

In making this a BPOV, we get to understand and appreciate Bella's feelings of inadequacy dn lack of self worth when it comes to Edward. This, I believe, is going to play an integral part in the developement in their relationship.

We're already aware of Edward's innermost desires. He wants "the beautiful" (I love that line by the way). And we want him.

I anxiously await your next chapter. Please post it asap. I'm starting to really, really love this.

Author's Response:

wow, thank you so very much for the well thought out review!  I LOVE these kind of reviews the best!

I'm flattered beyond words with your compliments...

I did feel it was more important to get this from BPOV, we already know more about Edward than her, and that's intentional but it's time we start to learn more about Bella and her demons.  Which we will as she reveals these things to Edward.  Slowly.

Thanks once again for your review, you make me smile!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:42 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

I really liked this chapter. I wish they had spoken more though. But they have five months to talk so it's ok. I liked Bella's thoughts in the last two paragraphs.

I'm looking forward to reading more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

I had to be awkward...how realistic would it have been all happy joy joy...they are both so used to being alone it's going to take a while before they are really comfortable with each other.

Reviewer: Pankakes (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 05:13 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

I love your story, I can't wait for a new update!



Author's Response:

:0) Thanks so much!  I try to post once a week!

Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:45 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

Thank you for another great chapter.  I can't wait to read more.  :)



Author's Response:

You're so very welcome!  But thank you for leaving a review!  I appreciate it!

Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 04:36 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

So sweet! I'm really excited about this story.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:54 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

Great, great chapter!!   I loved their interactions and conversations -- they were sweet, romantic and poetic.  I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Update soon! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Will do!  As soon as I can!  Thanks for leaving me some love!   I appreciate it!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Will do!  As soon as I can!  Thanks for leaving me some love!   I appreciate it!

Reviewer: tby789 (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:51 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

Bella is so sad. It' breaks my heart. What in the world happend to her? Edward was beyond charming. Rose and Alice are going to be in for it, but they did the right thing. You certainly did not disappoint.  Thanks

Christina



Author's Response:

As far as Bella, all will be revealed.  It will just take some time.

thanks for taking the time to read and leave me a note!

Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:37 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

Oh my God this is so very good.....Please please update soon



Author's Response:

As soon as I can!

Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 03:17 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

Wow... I really love this story... it just keeps getting deeper and better every chapter

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 02:45 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

That was a great chapter!!  Poor Bella!!  She thinks she's worth nothing!!  I really hope Edward can show her otherwise!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

:0) Thanks!  I can't say much without giving away to much...but I will say it will be interesting to say the least!

Reviewer: Greenever (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 02:42 PM · On: It's All About the Venue

I'm enjoying this...please update soon. Look forward to seeing where it goes.



Author's Response:

I'll do my best...the next chapter is off with the beta now...



Author's Response:

I'll do my best...the next chapter is off with the beta now...

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 09:41 PM · On: A Change

I liked the way you show the interaction between hope and Edward - I can appreciate the way he feels protective of her and yet knows exactly what her prognosis and future will bring to her.  Also like the play on Hope/hope in his life and the way she calls him on the lightness she sees in him now that he has met Bella. 

Glad I have caught up with your story - ;)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much.  Hope and Edward are very difficult / loving to write... I pine over them endlessly.  I'm glad they read well and connect with you.

Reviewer: booklover08 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Phase One

I'm really liking the way you are pulling the different characters out in this story.  I like the way that none of them has directly confronted either Bella or Edward so that they don't have to confirm or deny their feelings..

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think they all know how both of them would react, it's kind of like leading that horse to the water...you just gotta hope they start to drink.

Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 05:37 AM · On: A Change

I loved Hope's conversation with Edward! Keep up the great writing!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: kerrybell (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 12:15 PM · On: Never Think

Loved this chapter!  Hope makes my want to cry and laugh at the same time (she is a great symbol because that is what real hope makes you want to do) hope is like being happ that you have the chance at something in the first place but sad at the same time because you feel it could be all for naught!!

There better be some more Edward/Bella time in the next chapter, or I'm going to g on MY google hmepage and look up some unpleasant words to call you!!!lol

Reviewer: inlovewithavampire12 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:12 AM · On: A Change

Oh My This is so good



Author's Response:

Wow! Thanks so much!  I appreciate you reading!



Author's Response:

Wow! Thanks so much!  I appreciate you reading!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 02:10 AM · On: A Change

Good chapter!  Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

:-)

Thanks so much!

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 01:03 AM · On: A Change

Great chapter. I love Hope. I feel so sorry for her. I'm glad Edward and Hope are both there for each other though. I think she's helped him a lot. 

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Will Edward and Bella talk on the train? Or will they meet at one of the venues?

Please update soon.



Author's Response:

ah...there are things I must keep quiet about...even if I don't want to...

I'll say I think you'll like the next chapter. 

A LOT

Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:06 PM · On: A Change

It was very good. It's great Edward is feeling he is supposed to be with Bella, now all he has to do is get close to her and convince her that they both need this. Not exactly an easy job :)



Author's Response:

Nope, it will NOT be an easy feat!  But it will be fun to watch...

Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 06:07 PM · On: A Change

Love the Edward/Hope stuff!! She's such a great kid. And so damn smart too! Love the banter between them, and that she calls him on his shit. LOL

Can't wait for the next one!
~Cat~



Author's Response:

Hi Cat!  Thanks so much for the review!  I appreciate you taking the time to drop me a note!

Reviewer: Capricorn75 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 02:14 PM · On: A Change

"I just couldn't stop believing it was meant to happen."

Don't stop believin'

Hold on to that feelin'

 



Author's Response:

Oh Capi!  You always make me smile!

Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 01:37 PM · On: A Change

Oh man, they're so close to seeing each other again.  Hopefully Bella won't freak out this time.



Author's Response:

<----smiles while chuckling in the corner....

you'll like the next chapter...

Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 01:35 PM · On: A Change

This story is great.  You've created a lovely character in Hope.



Author's Response:

Why, thank you very much!  I appreciate your praise!

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