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Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:40 AM · On: Pie's and Promises
I loved this chapter. As an Aussie, I don't really get the whole pie thing but now I'm intrigued. I'll see if I can get my hands on som, hehe.
Can't wait to read more. I loved the E/B interaction.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Hey there! An Aussie! Wow! I'm flattered...I'm in awe of your country...it's a dream to visit there! Pie...lets see, I can send you a good applie pie recipe if your interested, let me know. You can start a craze in your country, cause pie, is just YUMMY and a fix all...
I'm glad you're liking the story and I appreciate your time in both reading and leaving me the review! I really really do!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
Damn - this chapter with HOpe has me all teary!! :( sniffle sniffle....
And to boot, I'm almost out of chapters....
And Bella will resist him.....
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!! I feel for both B&E...I've been there.
Author's Response: :-) I'm sorry! don't sniffle!
I hope chapter 10 made you feel better!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Phase One
Emmett is being so sly!! hooray! >:> Put your seatbelt on, Edward....it's gonna be a bumpy ride!!
Reviewer: stargazer (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
I liked the hope analogy. Good chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you caught it!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
What a cute chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!!
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
Wow... I loved it. The only thing I don't like is that Edward seems like he is so willing to try and make an effort with Bella, yet, she's just extremely, extremely hesistant. I know there must be a reason for this, but it just kind of bugs me in the back of my mind. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And you're right, at this point, Edward is very willing to try. He's taken with her and intrigued where as Bella is scared and unsure. She's extremely hesistant...she so very afraid. She will be redeamed and all will be explained before it's over, this I can promise!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: Esquire (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 11:22 PM · On: Never Think
Very intrigued by Bella's story...what could be causing her angst??
LOVE RPat's music - sooo much of it on Youtube, as well as 8 billion super-hot pics and interviews.
On to your next chapter!
Reviewer: icrodriguez (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
A wonderfully delightful chapter. And totally surprising! Who knew pie could be so seductive? Please post more asap. It feels like forever since last you did. You KNOW how I love this!
Author's Response: Yeah...pie and Edward, forks and lips...I could totally see her staring at his lips and he hers....
I'm gald you liked the chapter! It was a labor of love! I hope to get the next chapter out in a more timely manner! I promise!
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:49 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
I'm completely in love with this story. Absolutely enamored. Wondering what Bella's backstory is though. . .
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I promise we will get her whole story, but it's gonna come slowly and in time but she will be explained.
Thanks for reading, I appreciate it!
Reviewer: Joico (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
very well done.....love the pie experiment! what is the next "lesson" entailed for Miss Bella?
love the story!
Author's Response: Next lesson...I'm not sure!! Got any ideas for me??
I'm glad you like the story, thanks for leaving me a review. I appreciate it.
Reviewer: jslpisces11 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:17 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
Oh our bella is thawing... and DAMN do i want a piece of pie really bad now or what???
Author's Response: Yes, Ms. Bella is thawing out. Pie is addicting! I wanted pie the whole time I wrote this chapter!!
Thanks for leaving me the review! I apprecaite it!
Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
Yeah - an update! (stupid RL) This might be my favorite chapter so far. I am glad that Bella is opening herself up more. I loved that Edward went to every library in Chicago to find the one she worked at. The entire pie scene was brilliant. Oh, how I love Pieward! yummy! It was too cute, sweet and endearing how he gently got Bella out of her comfort zone. Great job!
Author's Response: Yes, Edward was quite determined. I almost think he just WOULDNT give up, most people would have stopped but it became almost a challenge to him, much like Bella has been from the start with him!
Pieward...now that's funny! I've heard of every different xxxward there is, I'm so flattered to have my own now! Pieward...I'm flattered!
Reviewer: Missa (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
Ah, bonding over pie. I love it. I like that they're slowly opening themselves up to each other.
Author's Response: :-) Thanks! It is a slow process...I'm glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Pie's and Promises
Bella is starting to think about Edward, Jasper seems to be fishing for information about this and letting Bella hide.
Bella is also thinking she may work with Edward in the wedding a little more. We start to learn a little more about Bella, at least a time frame of why she feels so bad about herself. She really has a terrible opinion but something inside her is begining to stir and make her see things from another perspective maybe?
Poor Edward he thought finding Bella would be easier, he didn't give up though, he almos blew it by snapping at her but he didn't and he got to share pie with her. I loved the pie trying, it was really sweet and I think a good way for them to get to know a little more about each other.
What will happen at the bar? will they all go?
Author's Response: You are very observant. Although I'm not sure that Jasper is really letting Bella hide...if anything he's helping her see what's around her, but he knows Bella...you can't make her see it. She has to get there on her own.
Edward is waking something inside of her...
The bar...well to be honest, I haven't got a clue! This wasn't in my outline...Edward just kinda took it there...now I gotta see where it's going to lead!
Reviewer: SinAndShame (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
This is a beautiful story. The characters are sincere and engaging. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I appreciate your kind words! I hope you like what's coming up!
Reviewer: freshonlybakery (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2009 07:51 AM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
I love this story a lot! It's wellwritten and I can't wait to see what happens next! xx
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I just posted the new chapter so hopefully you'll see it soon!
Reviewer: elemirehum (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
wow, i really dont want what i think will happen to happen with hope =[ i think it will b too much for edward to take, bt then again that is probably how him nd bella can become closer =]
love this fic x
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Hope...I know...that's about all I can say...I know.
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 05:49 PM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
Wonderful chapter! I'm afraid that Hope doesn't have much longer... but, I love the relantionship you have created between her and Edward.
Author's Response: Thank you. I love their relationship too. They really just get each other an she has forced him to open up more than he would have had she not been there...Hope helps Edward, Edward helps Bella...it's a circle.
Reviewer: Tears_of_Mercury (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
*sniffles* Hope is going to break my heart. I have a feeling that the end is drawing near for her... That's going to hit Edward like a bullet to the gut.
On the other hand, I'm glad that Edward is still able to be optimistic about Bella despite her less than enthusiastic front. I love that despite the fact that he's still completely flawed, this Edward is actually the one pursuing Bella and trying to help her - it's such a change from what we usually see in Twilight fics.
Great job. I hope to see more from you soon!
-Rachael
Author's Response: Thank you so very much. Hope..ah my Hope...I hurt already for her. She is a catalyst in the story kinda like a beginning to an end.
Edward has a kindship with Bella's pain which lures him to her more than anything. he is flawed and realistic and he is most definitely the one taking the lead. Because, honestly, this my Bella never would.
Once I get the chapter back it will be posted! Just waiting for the return!
Reviewer: Lead69 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2009 12:46 AM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
Very awkward situation but really well done, I like EagerEdward. I look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying the fic! Please stay tuned!
Reviewer: Padme1899 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
It's so sweet. My son has a lifelong friend who has CF. So much of what you wrote about Hope experiencing we have witnessed first hand. Its very well written and thought out.
Author's Response: Wow, in all seriousness, your review humbles me the most. I'm sorry for your situation. I'm so very proud to be doing the illness some justification, I've really tried to do a lot of research and would never try to glamourize or romanticize such a terrible disease. I want it to be realistic if nothing else.
I thank you from the bottom of my heart. And if I do anything stupid with this, please feel free to call me onto the carpet.
Reviewer: Lei-C (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 06:58 AM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
great chapter!!!
i was hoping that bella would let edward know that she'd seen him at the bar that one time.. but i'm sure, in due time!
have a great vacation!!
Author's Response: All in due time! All in time!
thanks for your well wishes! I can't wait!
Reviewer: mayams (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 05:55 AM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
Edward will put all he can think of to get Bella to like him and open up, lets hope he is able to do so before the wedding. With Hope's help I think it may be easier, lets hope that she will be around until then.
Author's Response: :-) I can't really answer to what you've said without giving away to much! But I think you'll like it. At least I hope you do!
Reviewer: The Wicked One (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 03:57 AM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
This story is just wonderful...
Author's Response: thanks so very much!
:-)
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2009 01:11 AM · On: Car Rides and Libraries
I am so glad that you updated! I love this story!
Author's Response: thanks so much! I appreciate you reading and leaving me a review!
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