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Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 19

hmm Please update.. you are out there !

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 18

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

 

Bury Rose. I truly find her offensive.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 16

no love out here too busy crying for them. The Cullens could have given him the option of changing her. Oh no... we can't do that. How in the hell did they all get there? Osmosis?

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 5

Love? We need to spank you, well maybe not you might like it. We were all worked up to them being together and I kept thinking don't hurt her Ed.

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2011 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh now we now what, I cant ever see Bella again, says Edward. I can't change her HUMAN life. So we must ache forever without each other!   Better not.

Reviewer: zaphael (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2011 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 19

Please finish this story I absolutely love it.

Reviewer: Rahveryn (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2011 12:33 AM · On: Chapter 19

This story has me feeling desperate for them.  Honestly I wondered how long it would take for Edward to point out the idea taht he's already found his mate and they were idiots to think he could just walk away. 

I like that you have Alice as his maker too, that is cute.  I'm with Bella, just change her already, her life is pretty screwed at this point anyway.

I wish them luck.

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 19

I'm really glad that Alice had a chat with Bella.  Now she has something positive to think about.  Enjoyed this chapter!

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2011 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 19

Welcome back! Finally, Alice to the rescue!

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 19

Ha, the vamp boy has to rethink about vegetarianism, I believe.

Now, I had to re read two chapters back, in order to reconnect with the story. I am following many of them and if a chapter is late I forget (no vampire memory, sorry). Only, to re-read back is a luxury I don't always have. Since there are two of you, why don't you add a recap, if your updating is late again? It would help enormously.

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2011 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 19

well im excited to see how long this takes i cant wiat to see them together again 

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 18

well i hope it works out for him! 

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2011 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 18

Good idea Emmett.  Rosalie just pissed me off in this chapter.  Felt bad for Bella, but she knows now what he is so, I guess she'll have to get used to him bolting at times.

Reviewer: Camilla (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 18

Oh, Alice to the rescue. I am sure she can be such a comfort to Bella. But Edward has to re-think his diet, if he wants to be able to be near her sometimes.

Reviewer: dougsgirl (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 18

Finally! She saw him but now what? Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 18

Loved the chapter! So, now they have a plan!

 

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 18

So does this plan mean Bella's going to live w/ the Cullens once Edward has overcome the power of her scent?

And what about her job & other obligations?

Reviewer: mcamastow (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2011 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 17

that was good them meeting but still so sad she still ends up alone.

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 17

well im intrested to see how he stays ! keep the updates comming

Reviewer: dipsydoodle (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 17

Well, this chapter pulled on the old heartstrings.  So now I'm thinking Edward is going to reconnect with the Cullens.  Probably stop killing humans?  Seems that Bella doesn't care either way, since she's still thinking that humans are his only source of food.  Interested to see what goes down in the next chapter.

Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2011 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 17

OMG.  Bittersweet.  Loved this chapter.  They need eachother.

Reviewer: Nat3628 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 17

I wonder if he will go on hunting like he has been in the past or not.  I hope that Bella can learn to be understanding with him that he may on occasion need some space.  I wonder if he would move her in with the Cullens because he is really the bigger threat not the others.  I can't wait to find out what happens.  I wonder if she will keep her job or not.

Reviewer: dougsgirl (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 10:23 AM · On: Chapter 17

I agree. Finally! But trouble is just around the corner. I think the Cullens will be pissed when he goes back. But they will get over it. Great story!

Reviewer: peregrin (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 07:58 AM · On: Chapter 17

Why haven't they offered to Edward to change her too?
Btw, if you figure out how to bring Nessie in the story, then you are probably a genius.

Reviewer: twilightmomct (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 17

Well Edward certainly is strong considering how new he is!

Poor Bella must really think she's losing her mind after Edward vanishing right before her eyes.

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