ooooooohhhhhhhh     i cant wait for the next update!!!!  i want to seee dwardx get his manliness on and find out how and what in the hell esteban sanchez was thinking.   have a good week.

That was so funny with bella trying to hide the flowers. But if you ask me if a guy sent me that many flowers it might just scare me off. Stalker
Much. Love your story

i got how bella was feeling ,but i gotta say all those flowers were pissing me off glad that edward could laughed about it many couldn't loved how he changed it up and got the flowers re delivered to esteban,i'm on team cowboy

Love this story and cannot wait for next chapter!!!!!

I absolutely adore this story!  I read and re-read it and love it every time!

I'm a sucker for a GentlemanWard. And when you add a southern accent??? I'm a goner. This one is a lovely specimen! :D

I'm not liking Edward or Bella right now. They are both in the wrong. I feel like Edward has no idea how to have a relationship. He used Bella at the Cattleman's club while meeting with a new potential client. He looks down the maids blouse and then he doesn't even break away from his old girlfriend to be with Bella. Yes, Bella was talking with Carlisle but she knows no one at the party except Edward's family so she was probably feeling out of place. Edward showed no effort on his part. Bella flirting with another man was juvenile but having sex with Edward in the pool house after a proposal that stems from Edward's jealousy was not very smart. Maybe Edward loves Bella in his own way but his actions speak loudly and he is too easily distracted from the person he supposedly loves.

Your cowboy is my favorite. Love cowboys but Edward as a cowboy is even better. Wow Edward did blow it with bella regarding not being at her side as soon as she appeared. Can't wait to see what happens between our 4 love birds.

Hmmm.... Let's see, a part of me thinks she overreacted and another part thinks she didn't. Shit I think they both screwed up. He could've given a little wave or something and she could've walked herself on over there to him. I have to say I was a little surprised by what both Edward and Emmett said to their women. I'm very curious to see how this turns out. :)

I just want to say that I love this story and all of your stories that you have written! Please keep sharing :)

Is it just me or did Bella over-react? I didn’t see that Edward did anything wrong.  I don’t understand why she just didn’t go up to Edward after she finished talking with Carlisle and Carmen and Eleazer?  Why all the jealous dramatics?  Is it cause she feels slightly inferior

I’m glad we are hearing a little about Emmett and Rose.

Man tough decisions these girls have to make

Hey and what’s with the Jacob shot? “Oh, forget Jacob Black.  I think Gustavo Alverez just got a little life breathed into him,” The poor guy’s not even in the story anymore, and you’re still beating up on him!  (Sorry I love Jacob’s character, I feel the need to defend him lol)

Keep up the good work, Take care, Dixie

This was great!

I can't wait to see what happens next!