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Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
Oh how I love protective Texward! Sexy!!!! The office intrigue is driving me nuts. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
Wow. Fights and make ups, good chapter.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2011 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
Am I a bad person if I admit I liked Edward punching Sanchez? Michael seems to be such a tool and Lauren seems to believe a hot exterior can get her everywhere - ha! Loved the Emmett-Rosalie-reunion!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
Excellent chapter!
I loved how Edward dealt with Sanchez. Classic!
I'm glad that Emmett and Rosalie made up. Those two need each other.
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
What a chapter! Loved Edward giving it to Sanchez. I love your Emmett.... can I have one?
I can't wait for more! So, the BBQ is next? Who will win beautiful Emily's heart? hmmm lol
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
First, I think Esteban should send Edward flowers...of apology! And I think Bella is going to kill him when she finds out how he manipulated her career choices! And lastly, that was a shocking way to end a chapter! Poor Rose, such low self worth!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
Loved jealousward and that was sweet with Em. He truly is one of a kind. Thanks for such a wonderful story.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
Yes! Done with Esteban!!!! I can't wait till Lauren is caught red handed!!! Poor Rose :(. I hope she'll marry Emmett
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
Wow.
So Lauren just needs to be fired.
Sanchez totally had it comin.
Jasper's gonna do great runnin that place!
Bella and Edward are just too cute of a couple
Wow just wow on Rose... Poor girl, though she has Em, whether she wants him or not.
and Angela's friggin lucky, Hawaii, I mean come on! Take me with you!!!
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
...definitely worth the wait! Maybe I'm learning patience.....hehe...NOT!!
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
loved this chapter as usual! Way to go Edward from teaching Esteban a lesson!!!! I can't wait to read more about the office mystery.
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2011 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
i really hope that edward got his point across and sanchez stays away! and i hope that rose says yes sooner or later! how long will it take for emmet to build a house? and will edward be able to figure out what lauren's angle is, soon?
Reviewer: bella2699 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 14 - Welcome to Cullens Corner
This was a perfect chapter it was just hilarious
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2011 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
I think Bonny needs to get his ass kicked by Edward. Loved the lemony goodness at the end. Looking forward to the next one.
Reviewer: bella2699 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 12 - Quid Pro Quo
Wow that's so cute
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 11:24 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
Sanchez is really getting on my nerves and I assume on Bella and Edward's, too. His pursuing her borders on stalking and sending even more flowers and his comment on Edward's supposed financial situation is neither imaginative nor classy. Bella should stop being civil towards him and tell him to his face that a guy like him doesn't stand a chance in hell with her, good-looking or not.
Look forward to the getting-to-know-event on the ranch and to find out what Emmett is going to achieve with Rosalie.
And of course im DYING to know who is behind the spying out!
Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
i wonder what it will take for estaban to back off? i hope that he and jake get the hint!
Reviewer: krystens (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
I LOOOVEE this story!! :) I love pretty much everything about it! Amazing :) Please post again soon!! Is Esteban a plant? from the "Banner's"?? His next grand gesture should be buying Bella something crazy expensive and wayy over the top... say a new car perhaps? Edward's retaliation should be buying another one plus something else, at which point Bella goes apeshit on both of them :) haha sorry but I love your characters!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
Jealousward how nice. That's just creepy that bonny is taking her class. What happened to Tanya. Love your story.
Reviewer: TerryGirl (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
You're doing a wonderful job with this story. When I read the earlier chapter about Edward reading Bella's romance novels I thought "Wow. I've read stories similiar to those!" It wasn't until your notes at the end that I realized I had actually HAD read those stories! And loved them all! Saving you as a Favorite Author! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
I just love a man with persistence, and I love a man who protects what's precious to him! And if anything proves how important she is, it's him dropping everything to go to her!
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 04:42 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Friendly Persuasion
Go Bella!
I really hope that Edward finds out soon who's trying to find out the business stuff, and i hope that Angela makes it out to the ranch to hang out with Edward & Bella.
Now i'm off to catch up!
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 02:59 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
Holy cow! Can't wait to see what Edward comes up with to thwart Esteban.
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 02:37 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Meanwhile, Back at the Ranch...
"With regard to Bella's four books, yeah, I used my own stories. "
Yup, I noticed that....and *grin* I've read 'em all!
Reviewer: ear906 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2011 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
I sense the plot brewing for Bella's new book with Esteban's tactics. He seems to be the kind of guy that likes the chase & wants what he can't have. I do love that Edward heads him off at each pass. I always love your Edwards, that they are open & loving & know how to cherish their Bellas. Can't wait to read more!
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