Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
Oh good they're cleared and not suspected for the murder! Thank goodness! I wanna know who killed her, obviously she knew them... the phone call and all...
Hmm..
can't wait for more!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 07:35 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
This story just keeps getting better and better! You go Bella. tell that pathetic "Big Jim and Vicky off! I loved it!
Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 07:07 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
Great chapter!
I'm glad Edward and Bella are suspects anymore.
I still wonder who did. The twins? The guy and wife Alice spoke of?
I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
I am so glad that you updated so fast. I love this story; keep them coming!
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 30 - Chocolate
hmmmm, i'm thinking Jim and Viki could have a hand in the murder......
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2011 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 28 - Trouble Pays a Call
The Heidi thing was pure evil! I think Edward needs to use the latch on his hotel door from now on! I wouldn't blame Bella if she harbored some resentment!
Reviewer: missy peterson (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2011 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
OH I was so glad to see and read this update, please hurry with more chapters. The story is wonderful and I will be sure to check out your new story.
Reviewer: stwin315 (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
haa oohhh shitt hate freaking Heidi!!
Reviewer: bgwillis (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2011 03:28 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Wow. Didn't see that coming. And I'll be honest...not sure how I feel about it. Sure, I hated Heidi. But the whole murder thing just kinda came out of nowhere. Sort of like I'm reading a whole other story. Doesn't seem to fit here.
I'm still with you but honestly I really would like to get back to the relationship stuff.
Reviewer: ande (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 09:29 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Holy crap! Well, there's a twist to the story. Can't wait to see what's next!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2011 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Oh hell! My wild guesses: Heidi offed herself because she can't stand a life without luxury and wants to take Edward down with her (maybe she istoo selfish for that - hm), Heidi wanted to fake a suicide to guilt Edward in returning to her and she accidentally died or she started Plan B - the blackmail - and whoever was on the receiving end of that thought it was better to get rid of her than to pay.
Anyway, I'm glad Bella seems to have forgiven him for the most part, because there is so much going on with Heidi and the company, they don't need any more trouble.
Can't wait to find out what's really going on.
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Holy shit.
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Okay, this was action-filled, but please tell me it isn't taking a turn into the overly dramatic & ridiculous.
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
I love all the twists and turns.....what are saphire jackets....explain the whole jacket thing to me, please? Thanks!
Reviewer: arguien (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
I am going to say it again. Can't these 2 just catch a freakin break?? Who in the hell offed that bitch? Who ever it was, THANK YOU!!!
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
OH MYLANTA! I can't believe she's dead. And if Edward didn't kill her, then who did? Her ex from NY? I dunno what to think!
btw, i totally bonded with kitsu shel yesterday over your story! We were both fawning over your work on twitter. Are you sure you don't wanna get yourself an account? LOL
Can't wait for your next update!
Reviewer: pookinpie (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Shut the effing front door!!! Murdrer??? Really??? This is really getting good. A once a week update is not enough:)
Reviewer: vampiregirl72 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Love your story
didn't see this coming...... I cannot wait for each and every chapter!!! Great job.
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
OOOoooo...the plot thickens! You sure do know how to twist and turn the plotlines! Damn...now I've gotta wait for the next chapter....wonder who put her out of our misery?????
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 28 - Trouble Pays a Call
Somebody need to neuter that Heidi bitch!
Reviewer: Trysh (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
I love your stories!! This is your hobby!! And a kick ass one at that! I've been looking for this update for days and as usual...you did NOT disappoint! Ding dong the bitch is dead!! However...I don't think at all that Edward did it. Probably it was the wife of the other guy she had been messing with (her "back up plan"). I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
OMG!!!!! Sometimes even Edward can be rather stupid, dim-witted, maybe even slow.... but this one really takes the cake!!!!!!!!!!!
Eddie really? your going to go to lunch with the woman that Bella caught you with and NOT tell. Then you end up being taken down for questioning in her murder? With Bella part into it too? What are you thinking with because it can't be that area between your ears?
Now I just want to know what the hell is going on and why Heidi is dead?
until next time!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Doesn't the man ever learn? At the very least he should have taken Alice or Jasper with him. Still, I am glad she is out of the way!
Reviewer: briandelight (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2011 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Hot damn! I can't believe that Heidi is dead. Edward's ass is so on the line again for not telling Bella. They're going to need some serious help in getting out of this one. I'm sure everyone out there reading this, myself included, will be chomping at the bit to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: IrishArtist25 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2011 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 29 - How All Hell Breaks Loose
Ok, we know it wasn't Edward, so who killed Heidi? I'm gonna guess the wife of the Frenchman, or the wife of some other married man she was dallying with. How in the world are they going to get out of this mess though? Nobody saw Bella and Edward anywhere except for the other, and they will think they're just matching each other's stories to keep the other one out of trouble. How on earth did all this mess happen? You really were kidding with ALL hell breaking loose.
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