Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 07:05 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not
Good chapter.....
Reviewer: kvgamble (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not
Someone is always trying to hurt them, I wonder how Bella is going to react to Charlie and Sue having a baby.
Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 05:51 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not
oh no! i don't know if i'll be able to take esteban's plan!! i hope bella killz him this time!!!
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2011 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 38 - News...Sometimes Its Good...Sometimes Not
Please don't let anything come between Bella and Edward , no misunderstandings or anything like that , their stronger than that , we've been here before with the Heidi episode , we need something clever to be rid of Sanchez for good
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
man this is all really getting to him now.....i hope he can put it behind him soon
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2011 07:01 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
I think I'm getting paranoid more and more, suspecting everyone and everything conspiring against Edward. Is Taylor really a cowboy looking for employment? RB seems to be a weak link in operation bring Cullen down, he's doing it just for the money and now he is full of remorse for injuring people. Esme's idea of bying stock would cause them to get more expensive and thus counteracting the effects of the attac on the fertilizer plant. Can't wait to find out more.
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 07:51 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
Awesome update, thank you! Nice to see a vulerable side to our strong, confident Cowboy. Update soon, please!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 06:13 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
Great chapter, I loved it! So much is going on! I'm sad to see Quill and Embry leave. I'm happy for Emmett and Rose. I'm sure she's happy to be in their house. Seth is just the cutest thing!
I have an idea who's behind the plant explosion....
I can't wait to see what happens next! Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
Poor Edward! He doesn't like to lose, or quit and he can't get a handle on things. I'm not sure what Bella can do but support him, maybe his priorities have just shifted and his work just isn't it anymore?
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
Great chapter! I loved it!
I can't wait to see what will happen next!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
Is Crowley going to be a problem? I hated to see quil and embry leave the ranch. Maybe they will come back? Oh Edward does it take estaban to call to see that you have been neglecting your bride. Love the sisters they are such great characters.
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 04:55 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
Great Chapter! They're going to find Riley's lighter, totally.
Can't wait for more.
I'd comment more but its early in the morning and I'd like nothin better than to go back to sleep.
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 03:57 AM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
Hmmmm... where to start....So many unanswered questions!
Riley finding out that there were people in the factory... his lighter missing... will he cave and spill his guts about everything....
Is Tyler really Tyler? You seem to like to throw kinks in your stories sometimes...hahaha!!!!!!
I think I know who is behind everything... but then again sometimes I get thrown for a loop!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
Loved the chapter.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 37 - Two Puppies and a Goat
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: devilsgenie (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 10:30 PM · On: Chapter 35 - "Once I say I do, you start sayin' I don't"
AWWWWWWW...... :')
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives
is Big Jim buying up the stocks? i hope they can't pull a fast one on Edward....
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives
So I'm guessin' that Big Jim is gonna show up again? That all that is happenin' is because of him? can't wait for the next update!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 35 - "Once I say I do, you start sayin' I don't"
That was too sweet of Edward...He can be a smart man when he puts his mind to it!!!!!!! on to the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 09:34 AM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives
I liked how you skipped over the wedding and went back and gave us bits and pieces. Sounds like they really did do the right thing by getting married the day before. Now who is trying to get a hold on the Cullen company.
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 12:11 AM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives
Looks like Big Jim is oting for cruder and more violent methods on his quest to bring down Edward's company. Will we find out what drives him? Bella and Edward should spend more time in Dallas, closer to the grapevine. Bella can write there just as well, maybe get some more inspiration.
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2011 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives
More stress for our poor Tex. Can't wait for the next update!
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives
Well they are solid but Big Jim I'm sure is behind the fertizlier blow up and I'm sure he or some one associated with him is buying up stop.So I hope Jenks can find out who,what and put and end to that shit pronto.
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2011 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 36 - The First Chapter of the Rest of Their Lives
Excellent chapter!
I loved everything about it and I can't wait to see what will happen next!
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