Reviewer: word2dabird (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 08:12 AM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
I absolutely love this story! But, the chapters lately haven't been focusing that much on Edward and Bella, but alot of external stuff. You should put a chapter up of fluff for them, because when reading it seems like their losing all the spark in the marriage!
Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
Holy crap what a chapter! I'm so happy Alice was able to forgive her parents. I still feel bad that Edward had to be the one to tell her.
Poor Emmett, He always has to put up with so much from Rose. I'm sure in her mind she thinks Emmett will eventually leave her cause she can't have kids so she's protecting her self by keeping Emmett at a distance...no easy answers there.
Now on the the take down of Jim Banner! Take care, Dixie
Reviewer: Twi-Holoic68 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2011 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
Wow That was ALOT of stuff!!!!!!!!!!! OK what the hell is wrong with Rose? I just don't get that!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
Poor ol Emmett!! Roaslie needs her butt kicked!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
Poor Alice :( At least, she had a happy wedding and is starting fresh with everyone. Carlisle will always be her dad :) Can't wait for the plot to take down Big Jim to happen :)
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 08:26 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
Oh Em.... But I agree with Bella better Em. I was hoping rose would show up but the distraction was better for Edward. How did the Denali clan end up at the cantina? Love your story.
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
this was a doozy, but I enjoyed every word. Yes, Esme is a bit of a twit, but she tries. I hope poor Emmett gets a HEA as well, and not necesarily with Rosalie. Thanks! looking forward to the next one.
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
hmmm, maybe flirting with Paloma will be a little trigger to get Rose to wake the hell up!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
I can't wait to see if they can rid themselves of Jim Banner, or if he'll prove slippery as a snake!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
I can not wait to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
Evil tease
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
Good Chapter....
Reviewer: lain16 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
I think Emmett has just made the biggest mistake of his life and I wonder if rose really left but took the time to reevaluate her relationship with Emmett .im glad that Carlisle ,esme and Alice have worked through their issue of her birth but really how long did they think that skeleton was gonna stay in the closet , especially with big Jim on the scene. I really wish the sanchez's would just f##k the hell off , maybe someone should give the denali's the heads up so they can take the garbage out
Reviewer: awheeler7 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
lol you took the words right from me XD
Awesome chapter! Poor Alice, I'm glad she had the sense to get over it. I really hope Emmett and Rose can patch things up... And I can't wait until Jim Banner is caught and put in prison for lord knows how long! Can't wait to see that day come!
Can't wait for more! Awesome job! ^ ^
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 44 - A Whole Peck of Trouble
Darn that Rose. She doesn't have issues. She's got subscriptions. Come back and quit being insecure, girlie.
Wow @ the news about Alice. So many plot twists and turns here. Can't wait to see what happens at breakfast with Riley.
Reviewer: rocky2006 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2011 11:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine
love this chapter
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 21 - A Date With Scout
I love your cowboy too and Bella's Boldness!!!!
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 19 - A Little Lesson in Manners
Edward, got his revenge & Emmett got his gal!!!!:) woohoo!!!!
Reviewer: totallygone425 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2011 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 18 - Definitely Not the Teacher's Pet
Best chapter yet!!! I laughed so darn hard & moaned quite a bit too... Gotta love it!!!!
Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Unforeseen Gifts
I figured it would come out sooner or later that Edward has Bella followed... At least he didn't do it because he didn't trust her. As for Alice, they couldn't keep that secret either. Is Paloma still going to come to the ranch for the so called interview? Loved it
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 03:32 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Unforeseen Gifts
I'll help kick Esme and Carlisle for dumping their responsibility on Edward. I'm really curious about Alice's reaction. When the cat is out of the sack is there still enough reason left for the blackmail to work?
With all those attractive cowboys on Edward's ranch maybe Paloma could fall for one of them? That would be a nice way to get back at Sanchez without anybody getting hurt.
Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2011 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 43 - Unforeseen Gifts
Good Chapter.....
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Unforeseen Gifts
Edward had a face palm moment. What a dumbass lol. Love that Charlie and Sure are having twins. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Unforeseen Gifts
Obviously, Edward is not cut out for the spy business! I feel for Edward! I found out my father was married previosly to my mom and I had two sisters and I had to tell my older brother! He didn't take it too well, but all is good now!
Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2011 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 43 - Unforeseen Gifts
loved it as usual. i hope u have something good planned for paloma nd bonny.
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