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Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

Another wonderful chapter, I can't wait for the dinner! So Lauren is a possible spy? I wonder if she will make a move on Edward. How stupid of Mike to use his position to get sex!

I don't think Bella has to worry about Jake anymore I think his ego was brused enough.

Take care, Dixie

Reviewer: oplok71 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 2 - Meanwhile, Back at the Ranch...

I am so excited to read this new story of yours.  I've read all of your other stories.

Reviewer: LiLi82 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2011 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

love it

Reviewer: boomerand (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

is it dinnertime???????

Reviewer: Cina24 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 08:38 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

I just love your story and cowboyward is so hawt. Looking forward to dinner

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

Now I'd really like to know who is spying on Edward. Newton is just  ... stupid? disgusting? ignorant? himself?

Yardley makes me smile all the time (what a name). Seems like Edward and her RL are creeping ito the book more and more.

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

I think it was Lauren who's trying to get info out of the computer and that Mike is an idiot for not saying she could've been the one. I mean he didn't have to tell the complete story. Why she's doing it is a good question.  I'm glad that jacob now knows that Bella's not interested. I'm wondering though if he'll end up being a problem.

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2011 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

Love is in the air :)

Reviewer: MaryMaryMary (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow

Love  this story. I like Cowboy Edward. Gentleman but strong and manly. No sissy here.

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

Can't wait for the next update.  Ranchward makes me swoon.  So sweet & sexy!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

What a way to wake up indeed! And to look forward to going to bed at night! I hope the shoes will ramp up his appetite at least!

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

Great chapter need more please ! I bet Charlie wants to talk to Bella about Sue and Jacob is such a pill. and theres some sneaky shit going on at the office Mike is such a tool.Kick Ass Cullen!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

Mike better spill his guts. it'll look worse if he's caught trying to hide it

Reviewer: farlilok (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

Just keeps gettin etter and better! You weave a good tale.



Author's Response:

You have no idea how much I like hearing that.  these things play out in my head, and I wonder if I just entertain myself.  I'm so glad you enjoy the peek into my crazy imagination.  Thank you.

Reviewer: Enchanting Lilly (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2011 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Back in the Saddle Again

Oh Edward you better  watch out hot Bella is on the way. Where did all the men go who send flowers? I sent them to myself once and said I didn't know who they were from I thought they were you. He said no they weren't from him. Well I guess that didn't work out to well for me. Story of my life. Can't wait for next chapter.

 

Lilly



Author's Response:

I agree with you that men don't send flowers anymore.  They see them as frivolous.  I see them as something that shows a woman that a man thinks about her and wants to give her a reminder that he's thinking about her.  Trust me...flowers will become a very important thing in this story...oops, I've said too much!

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:27 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow

perfect....just perfect for these to characters:)  Cant wait to read more!

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 8 - A Rascally Rabbit

wow....i usually love the A character in stories but I was truly rooting for E to kick her out:)  Anticipation.....

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:24 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Miss Congeniality, She Ain't

well hell....i have a feeling we havent seen the last of that bitch have we?  Thanks for someone except Tanya....get soooooo tired of read about her:)

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:22 AM · On: Chapter 6 - A Roll in the Hay

they just cant catch a break with charlie and the boyz around can they:)

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 5 - You Tell Me Yours, and I'll Tell You Mine

ruh roh....charlie aint gonna be happy about this is he:)

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 4 - "We should get somethin' out of the way..."

:)

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Guess Who's Coming to Dinner

awwww....he's such a smitten gentleman:)  Really enjoying both your E and B characters:)

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Meanwhile, Back at the Ranch...

funny how in life if we just opened our eyes we could see all the connections....great chapter

Reviewer: tears (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2011 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Writer's Block

interesting story idea....cant wait  to see how it pans out.  Glad to see another story from you:)  Have enjoyed the others

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2011 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Bow-Chicka-Bow-Bow

Finally the're alone and noone is disturbing them - they deserve that so much. Wonder if Edward can keep his mind on business at the club with Bella dazzling away by his side.



Author's Response:

Well, there's a bit of business that goes on before the actual dinner, but I can assure you that she does well.  We get a little more insight into what's going on at Cullen Industries,  Oh, and Bella has the 'talk' with Jacob...oops...I've said too much.

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