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Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

I don't know, it makes me uncomfortable that Edward has such strong feelings for Kate still. You know how they say there's a fine line...he wouldn't hurt Bella like that, would he?

Author's Response:

NO! He absolutely would NOT hurt Bella like that. I assure you...

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Chicsarah (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 12:18 PM · On: Chapter 2: Agree to Disagree

Lovely long chapters!  I am really enjoying your story so far.  I don't really understand some of the technical terms, but it doesn't get in the way of the story itself.



Author's Response:

So glad you're loving the story! All of the chapters seem to be longer than I usually write. Maybe I've just gotten wordy over the years :-P

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

Oh, how damn embarrassing!  she should be pissed at her dad for not telling her about installing the cameras.  That's too damn funny!



Author's Response:

Well, he meant to :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

Uh oh....the only thing they can hope for is the feed is on a 12 hour or less loop so Charlie won't have seen anything!
Great chapter! Hope Kate doesnt make trouble at the wedding. Sorry girl...the USS Edward has sailed & sunk into the Bay of Bella!

Author's Response:

HAHA! Right?!

BAHAHAHA! "USS Edward has sailed and sunk into the Bay of Bella" HOLY SHIT that was amazing! I am going to post my o/s for the pineapple awards contest (it's Emmett and Rosalie and absolutely crackficky ridiculousness) but Emmett comes up with all sorts of insane names for their "parts". I don't know if I have ever laughed so hard writing something before IN MY LIFE!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: stilly001 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

eeewww! God, I really hope he didnt see anything. No dads watching your homemade porn. Btw, I love this story! So cute.



Author's Response:

LOL! I assure you he DID NOT nor will he EVER see it!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

OMG ! Too funny I'm sure Charlie has already seen them  and WTF about the wedding Kate doing what she did to Edward is she gonna try and get him back cause you know everyone who's had Edward and gotten rid of him always wants him back  hopefully Bella can stand her ground to any bullshit she tries to pull



Author's Response:

Yeah, that wedding will be interesting. But fear not!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

Smokin :) Loved it! Can't wait for your next chapter, and of course Edward should get Bella naked at the hotel (maybe not at the wedding lol)... I hope Kate doesn't cause too much trouble, but something tells me your feisty Bella can handle her.



Author's Response:

BAHAH! So, Bella should remain fully clothed at the wedding. Damn, you ruined my chapter planning ;-)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry again for the late reply (among other things!)

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Rat_girl610 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

hahahaha BUSTED!!!  lol i've fooled around with my boy in the washrack a bit but nothing major lol.  don't really know him that well but damn i'll tell ya he has a nice ASS!!!  lololololol  and that started when he grabbed my boob on accident lol.  went for the hose in my hand and grabbed me instead so when i went to grab it back i grabbed his ass hehe.  all that jogging has its perks..i can feel it lol



Author's Response:

Mmm hmmm, I'm sure it was all "accidental" I see how it is ;-)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

no freaking way!!!! crap! talk about hand caught in the cookie jar....the earth would just need to open up and swallow me whole. That Kate bitch better not even try to talk to Edward during the wedding. Poor Edward, it's gonna be so awkward for him :(

Author's Response:

There was another reader who said the cookie jar thing too! I about LMFAO when I read it twice! Great minds! LOL!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

OMG.  This chapter was so good.  They have so much passion for eachother.  I am glad that Edward told the waitress of in the restaurant.  The ending with Charlies, there.  Oh, shit.  Did he see them?  Can't wait for next update.  Great story!  You have me hooked.



Author's Response:

Yes! they do! I love writing these two!! They're so much fun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

Looks like someone may be getting caught with their hands in the cookie jar. Loving the progress that Edward and Bella are making :) Bella should remember this though: "Save a horse, ride an Edward" :)



Author's Response:

Somone else said the cookie jar thing too! LOLOLOL!

BAHAHA! Save a horse, ride an Edward. I feel a song request at the wedding... JS ;-)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 09:21 AM · On: Chapter 1: Upside Down

Oh dear, sounds lke a whole world of trouble!  She'll probably forget and walk out naked tfrom the bathroom!



Author's Response:

HAHA! I love that this was your guess! Others thought the same thing... Though, wrong roomie :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: flesh36ff (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 07:55 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revenge is Best Served Wet

Ok so I did none of the things I had to do because I just couldn't stop reading your wonderful story. I haven't had a story draw me in this much since MOTU. Awesome job. Keep the chappies coming.



Author's Response:

O_O Did you just say nothing has drawn you in this much since MOTU??? Holy fuckballs them's some big panties to fill! I hope my future chapters don't disappoint now! *pressure pressure pressure*

I am BEYOND thrilled that you like the story that much and have even compared it's ability to draw a person in to one of the biggest fics in the fandom! WOW! I think I just fell in love with you! F'reals!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: flesh36ff (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 3: Grounded

Great story! Very original. My daughter is a competitive dressage rider at age 9 so this hits home for me. Very well written and the banter between them is great. Nice to see a mentally balanced Edward and Bella in the same fic. I hope you ride this out as far as possible. no pun intended.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I do try to make my stories stand out in some way, so I am glad to hear that this one does for you!

Enjoy the ride ... pun TOTALLY intended...

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revenge is Best Served Wet

Aw! Thanks for the rec!
Loved this chapter! It was a perfect first date :)



Author's Response:

You DESERVE the rec! Wild is amazing!!

Glad you liked the date! I wish I was on it *grumbles*

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 6: My Heart: Where No Man Has Gone Before

Loved your nod to New Moon! And girl, you know how to build the UST!



Author's Response:

HAHA! NM had to be mentioned. I throw in a nod to the books or the movies every so often :P

UST is fun for me. Keeps the readers coming back :P (You should know! Wild is NUTSO for the UST!!)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 5: This is Me

Why do I get the feeling Jessica would rather have Edward than Tyler? I have a feeling she's not done yet... Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I promise you Jess is happy with Tyler (sick, I know!)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 01:47 PM · On: Chapter 4: Playing House

This story just keeps me smiling and giggling!



Author's Response:

YAY! I smile and giggle alot when I write it! I'm glad that makes it still funny to others! :P

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 12:28 PM · On: Chapter 3: Grounded

It's getting better and better with every chapter!



Author's Response:

So glad you think so!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 2: Agree to Disagree

HAWT! I love your story - unique and fun!



Author's Response:

I was going for unique and fun! I do try to go outside the box when I write!! (that sounded kinda dirty!! LOL)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 1: Upside Down

Just started reading and I LOVE IT!!! Sexy, sweaty, cocky (!) Ranchward - swoon!! And I love a strong, independent Bella... on to the next chappie!



Author's Response:

SOOOOOO behind on replies it's not even funny! I'll keep this short and just say I'm glad you liked how the story started!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2011 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revenge is Best Served Wet

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revenge is Best Served Wet

Okay, take that hose they were using and turn it on me.  That was quite some sexy citrusy content there.  Nice to see the progression of their fast relationship!  Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Yes! their relationship may be progressing fast, but other things will take a wee bit of time ;-) Glad you liked the lemon wedge I offered up :)

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 09:19 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revenge is Best Served Wet

Awww that was sweetest date ever!!!



Author's Response:

YES! Writing it almost gave me a cavity! LOL!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!

xoxo,

AG1981

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