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Reviewer: crazykatwp (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 9: Nothing Left to Hide
Great chapter. Loved Charlie in this chapter. I wonder if he did see the tape after all. Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm going to be honest for a minute:
The amount of Charlie love I am getting for this fic is OUTSTANDING! I looooove that he is getting some major props! I love this charlie sooo very much and I am glad that everyone else seems to be too! **KISSES**
And no, I assure you Papa Swan did not see the recording. I could never do that to him. :P
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Thankfully, he met me halfway and our lips moved slowly together. "Good," he said, breaking away from our kiss.
The doors opened and Edward took my hand, quickly pulling me behind him down the hall to our room. I had to laugh when he dropped the key-card a couple of times, clearly feeling a little tipsy himself. Finally, he got it opened and we rushed into the room. He threw my shoes off to the side somewhere before gathering me in his arms and pressing his lips to mine.
Needing him naked, I slipped my arms between us and started to tug on his tie. Simultaneously, his hands moved to the zipper of my skirt and slid it down slowly, each soft tick of the zipper releasing sending a yummy tingle directly between my legs. My skirt fell to a fabric puddle around my ankles as I quickly pulled the undone tie from Edward's neck and discarded it behind me.
My fingers were a little clumsy from all the alcohol, making it a little more difficult to unbutton his shirt, so I appreciated Edward's assistance as he basically ruined his shirt ripping it off his body. Buttons flew in various directions and I moaned like that same porn star I channeled the first time he ever touched me intimately.
My body was on fire as he slipped his hands beneath the hem of my shirt and started to raise it. Not that I wanted to, but I parted our lips and lifted my arms so he could finish his task. With me now in nothing but my matching black lace lingerie set, Edward groaned and pulled me back into his arms before rushing us to the bed.
We fell into the down comforter, laughing as I struggled to find my way on top of him. Edward overpowered me though and rolled me onto my back so he was pressed solidly between my thighs. Through his dress pants, I could feel his arousal and I pushed against him.
"You need to lose the pants," I told him brokenly between shallow breaths.
Clearly, he didn't need to be told twice before he stood up and removed his pants, returning to me in his boxer briefs. "Better?" he asked, brushing his nose against mind before trailing light, teasing kisses down my jaw and neck.
"For now," I whispered, arching my back as Edward kissed along the line of my right shoulder, pulling my bra strap down at the same time. I could feel pressure building in my abdomen, my muscles tightening, the longer he continued to kiss and tease me. And then the tension released ...
... in the form of a hiccup.
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: Nevaeh Rae (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 9: Nothing Left to Hide
HAHAHA Charlie's little plot was hilarious!! How he got to mess with both of them was priceless and Edward's reactions at breakfast were so funny. I am so glad they don't have to hide anymore and they can be open about each other. Can't wait to see what happens next and how the weekend getaway to the wedding will be.
Author's Response: YES! I love that he messed with both of them too!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:
Thankfully, he met me halfway and our lips moved slowly together. "Good," he said, breaking away from our kiss.
The doors opened and Edward took my hand, quickly pulling me behind him down the hall to our room. I had to laugh when he dropped the key-card a couple of times, clearly feeling a little tipsy himself. Finally, he got it opened and we rushed into the room. He threw my shoes off to the side somewhere before gathering me in his arms and pressing his lips to mine.
Needing him naked, I slipped my arms between us and started to tug on his tie. Simultaneously, his hands moved to the zipper of my skirt and slid it down slowly, each soft tick of the zipper releasing sending a yummy tingle directly between my legs. My skirt fell to a fabric puddle around my ankles as I quickly pulled the undone tie from Edward's neck and discarded it behind me.
My fingers were a little clumsy from all the alcohol, making it a little more difficult to unbutton his shirt, so I appreciated Edward's assistance as he basically ruined his shirt ripping it off his body. Buttons flew in various directions and I moaned like that same porn star I channeled the first time he ever touched me intimately.
My body was on fire as he slipped his hands beneath the hem of my shirt and started to raise it. Not that I wanted to, but I parted our lips and lifted my arms so he could finish his task. With me now in nothing but my matching black lace lingerie set, Edward groaned and pulled me back into his arms before rushing us to the bed.
We fell into the down comforter, laughing as I struggled to find my way on top of him. Edward overpowered me though and rolled me onto my back so he was pressed solidly between my thighs. Through his dress pants, I could feel his arousal and I pushed against him.
"You need to lose the pants," I told him brokenly between shallow breaths.
Clearly, he didn't need to be told twice before he stood up and removed his pants, returning to me in his boxer briefs. "Better?" he asked, brushing his nose against mind before trailing light, teasing kisses down my jaw and neck.
"For now," I whispered, arching my back as Edward kissed along the line of my right shoulder, pulling my bra strap down at the same time. I could feel pressure building in my abdomen, my muscles tightening, the longer he continued to kiss and tease me. And then the tension released ...
... in the form of a hiccup.
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: glock26girl (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 05:55 AM · On: Chapter 9: Nothing Left to Hide
Now that was fun poor Edward I'm glad that they are out in the open and hey you have to protect your daughter as best as you can since i have one Thank God just one) they can give you a run for your money.Can't wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Yeah, I have a step daughter, thankfully no biological ones :P Just my two boys! Those girls can be a handful...trust me, I am one ;-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:
Thankfully, he met me halfway and our lips moved slowly together. "Good," he said, breaking away from our kiss.
The doors opened and Edward took my hand, quickly pulling me behind him down the hall to our room. I had to laugh when he dropped the key-card a couple of times, clearly feeling a little tipsy himself. Finally, he got it opened and we rushed into the room. He threw my shoes off to the side somewhere before gathering me in his arms and pressing his lips to mine.
Needing him naked, I slipped my arms between us and started to tug on his tie. Simultaneously, his hands moved to the zipper of my skirt and slid it down slowly, each soft tick of the zipper releasing sending a yummy tingle directly between my legs. My skirt fell to a fabric puddle around my ankles as I quickly pulled the undone tie from Edward's neck and discarded it behind me.
My fingers were a little clumsy from all the alcohol, making it a little more difficult to unbutton his shirt, so I appreciated Edward's assistance as he basically ruined his shirt ripping it off his body. Buttons flew in various directions and I moaned like that same porn star I channeled the first time he ever touched me intimately.
My body was on fire as he slipped his hands beneath the hem of my shirt and started to raise it. Not that I wanted to, but I parted our lips and lifted my arms so he could finish his task. With me now in nothing but my matching black lace lingerie set, Edward groaned and pulled me back into his arms before rushing us to the bed.
We fell into the down comforter, laughing as I struggled to find my way on top of him. Edward overpowered me though and rolled me onto my back so he was pressed solidly between my thighs. Through his dress pants, I could feel his arousal and I pushed against him.
"You need to lose the pants," I told him brokenly between shallow breaths.
Clearly, he didn't need to be told twice before he stood up and removed his pants, returning to me in his boxer briefs. "Better?" he asked, brushing his nose against mind before trailing light, teasing kisses down my jaw and neck.
"For now," I whispered, arching my back as Edward kissed along the line of my right shoulder, pulling my bra strap down at the same time. I could feel pressure building in my abdomen, my muscles tightening, the longer he continued to kiss and tease me. And then the tension released ...
... in the form of a hiccup.
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 9: Nothing Left to Hide
Loved it, that had me giggling so much I had to hold my tummy lol!!! Oh yeah & the sexyness was so good!!!
Poor little me doesn't get any Boyfriend sexyness tell my B-day on the 10th. :(
Author's Response: HAHA! I know what you mean! Try writing through the tears of laughter! LOL!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:
Thankfully, he met me halfway and our lips moved slowly together. "Good," he said, breaking away from our kiss.
The doors opened and Edward took my hand, quickly pulling me behind him down the hall to our room. I had to laugh when he dropped the key-card a couple of times, clearly feeling a little tipsy himself. Finally, he got it opened and we rushed into the room. He threw my shoes off to the side somewhere before gathering me in his arms and pressing his lips to mine.
Needing him naked, I slipped my arms between us and started to tug on his tie. Simultaneously, his hands moved to the zipper of my skirt and slid it down slowly, each soft tick of the zipper releasing sending a yummy tingle directly between my legs. My skirt fell to a fabric puddle around my ankles as I quickly pulled the undone tie from Edward's neck and discarded it behind me.
My fingers were a little clumsy from all the alcohol, making it a little more difficult to unbutton his shirt, so I appreciated Edward's assistance as he basically ruined his shirt ripping it off his body. Buttons flew in various directions and I moaned like that same porn star I channeled the first time he ever touched me intimately.
My body was on fire as he slipped his hands beneath the hem of my shirt and started to raise it. Not that I wanted to, but I parted our lips and lifted my arms so he could finish his task. With me now in nothing but my matching black lace lingerie set, Edward groaned and pulled me back into his arms before rushing us to the bed.
We fell into the down comforter, laughing as I struggled to find my way on top of him. Edward overpowered me though and rolled me onto my back so he was pressed solidly between my thighs. Through his dress pants, I could feel his arousal and I pushed against him.
"You need to lose the pants," I told him brokenly between shallow breaths.
Clearly, he didn't need to be told twice before he stood up and removed his pants, returning to me in his boxer briefs. "Better?" he asked, brushing his nose against mind before trailing light, teasing kisses down my jaw and neck.
"For now," I whispered, arching my back as Edward kissed along the line of my right shoulder, pulling my bra strap down at the same time. I could feel pressure building in my abdomen, my muscles tightening, the longer he continued to kiss and tease me. And then the tension released ...
... in the form of a hiccup.
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 9: Nothing Left to Hide
Charlie is so mean....lol scaring the poor boy like that. but i'm so happy they don't have to hide anymore :) love the slice of lemon there :)
Author's Response: Yeah, he's a freakin' bully! LOL!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:
Thankfully, he met me halfway and our lips moved slowly together. "Good," he said, breaking away from our kiss.
The doors opened and Edward took my hand, quickly pulling me behind him down the hall to our room. I had to laugh when he dropped the key-card a couple of times, clearly feeling a little tipsy himself. Finally, he got it opened and we rushed into the room. He threw my shoes off to the side somewhere before gathering me in his arms and pressing his lips to mine.
Needing him naked, I slipped my arms between us and started to tug on his tie. Simultaneously, his hands moved to the zipper of my skirt and slid it down slowly, each soft tick of the zipper releasing sending a yummy tingle directly between my legs. My skirt fell to a fabric puddle around my ankles as I quickly pulled the undone tie from Edward's neck and discarded it behind me.
My fingers were a little clumsy from all the alcohol, making it a little more difficult to unbutton his shirt, so I appreciated Edward's assistance as he basically ruined his shirt ripping it off his body. Buttons flew in various directions and I moaned like that same porn star I channeled the first time he ever touched me intimately.
My body was on fire as he slipped his hands beneath the hem of my shirt and started to raise it. Not that I wanted to, but I parted our lips and lifted my arms so he could finish his task. With me now in nothing but my matching black lace lingerie set, Edward groaned and pulled me back into his arms before rushing us to the bed.
We fell into the down comforter, laughing as I struggled to find my way on top of him. Edward overpowered me though and rolled me onto my back so he was pressed solidly between my thighs. Through his dress pants, I could feel his arousal and I pushed against him.
"You need to lose the pants," I told him brokenly between shallow breaths.
Clearly, he didn't need to be told twice before he stood up and removed his pants, returning to me in his boxer briefs. "Better?" he asked, brushing his nose against mind before trailing light, teasing kisses down my jaw and neck.
"For now," I whispered, arching my back as Edward kissed along the line of my right shoulder, pulling my bra strap down at the same time. I could feel pressure building in my abdomen, my muscles tightening, the longer he continued to kiss and tease me. And then the tension released ...
... in the form of a hiccup.
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 9: Nothing Left to Hide
Absolutely loved this chapter. Charlie's involvement in this chapter was pricceless. Loved how he made Bella sweat it outm, and then how they kept Edward almost going crazy,,,,,wow. Love it! I can almost hear poor Edward's heart beating like a drum when Charlie came to breakfastm, and then Bella kisses him at the table. LOL! Love it. I also love the fact that they no longer need to hide their relationship. The wedding should be a blast too! I guess something about not having a gun in the house is going to be an issue. Just thinking. Keep writing please....
Author's Response: YES! Charlie is a pretty fun guy! I love him in this story and hope to give him a little more chapter time soon!
And no, there is no red herrign in regards to the gun. At least, that's not how I planned it... but sometimes these things just write themselves...
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:
Thankfully, he met me halfway and our lips moved slowly together. "Good," he said, breaking away from our kiss.
The doors opened and Edward took my hand, quickly pulling me behind him down the hall to our room. I had to laugh when he dropped the key-card a couple of times, clearly feeling a little tipsy himself. Finally, he got it opened and we rushed into the room. He threw my shoes off to the side somewhere before gathering me in his arms and pressing his lips to mine.
Needing him naked, I slipped my arms between us and started to tug on his tie. Simultaneously, his hands moved to the zipper of my skirt and slid it down slowly, each soft tick of the zipper releasing sending a yummy tingle directly between my legs. My skirt fell to a fabric puddle around my ankles as I quickly pulled the undone tie from Edward's neck and discarded it behind me.
My fingers were a little clumsy from all the alcohol, making it a little more difficult to unbutton his shirt, so I appreciated Edward's assistance as he basically ruined his shirt ripping it off his body. Buttons flew in various directions and I moaned like that same porn star I channeled the first time he ever touched me intimately.
My body was on fire as he slipped his hands beneath the hem of my shirt and started to raise it. Not that I wanted to, but I parted our lips and lifted my arms so he could finish his task. With me now in nothing but my matching black lace lingerie set, Edward groaned and pulled me back into his arms before rushing us to the bed.
We fell into the down comforter, laughing as I struggled to find my way on top of him. Edward overpowered me though and rolled me onto my back so he was pressed solidly between my thighs. Through his dress pants, I could feel his arousal and I pushed against him.
"You need to lose the pants," I told him brokenly between shallow breaths.
Clearly, he didn't need to be told twice before he stood up and removed his pants, returning to me in his boxer briefs. "Better?" he asked, brushing his nose against mind before trailing light, teasing kisses down my jaw and neck.
"For now," I whispered, arching my back as Edward kissed along the line of my right shoulder, pulling my bra strap down at the same time. I could feel pressure building in my abdomen, my muscles tightening, the longer he continued to kiss and tease me. And then the tension released ...
... in the form of a hiccup.
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 9: Nothing Left to Hide
Charlie cracks me up :) So glad Bella and Edward can be together now :)
Author's Response: I love charlie too!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:
Thankfully, he met me halfway and our lips moved slowly together. "Good," he said, breaking away from our kiss.
The doors opened and Edward took my hand, quickly pulling me behind him down the hall to our room. I had to laugh when he dropped the key-card a couple of times, clearly feeling a little tipsy himself. Finally, he got it opened and we rushed into the room. He threw my shoes off to the side somewhere before gathering me in his arms and pressing his lips to mine.
Needing him naked, I slipped my arms between us and started to tug on his tie. Simultaneously, his hands moved to the zipper of my skirt and slid it down slowly, each soft tick of the zipper releasing sending a yummy tingle directly between my legs. My skirt fell to a fabric puddle around my ankles as I quickly pulled the undone tie from Edward's neck and discarded it behind me.
My fingers were a little clumsy from all the alcohol, making it a little more difficult to unbutton his shirt, so I appreciated Edward's assistance as he basically ruined his shirt ripping it off his body. Buttons flew in various directions and I moaned like that same porn star I channeled the first time he ever touched me intimately.
My body was on fire as he slipped his hands beneath the hem of my shirt and started to raise it. Not that I wanted to, but I parted our lips and lifted my arms so he could finish his task. With me now in nothing but my matching black lace lingerie set, Edward groaned and pulled me back into his arms before rushing us to the bed.
We fell into the down comforter, laughing as I struggled to find my way on top of him. Edward overpowered me though and rolled me onto my back so he was pressed solidly between my thighs. Through his dress pants, I could feel his arousal and I pushed against him.
"You need to lose the pants," I told him brokenly between shallow breaths.
Clearly, he didn't need to be told twice before he stood up and removed his pants, returning to me in his boxer briefs. "Better?" he asked, brushing his nose against mind before trailing light, teasing kisses down my jaw and neck.
"For now," I whispered, arching my back as Edward kissed along the line of my right shoulder, pulling my bra strap down at the same time. I could feel pressure building in my abdomen, my muscles tightening, the longer he continued to kiss and tease me. And then the tension released ...
... in the form of a hiccup.
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths
Great chapter. Oh oh, Charlie knows doesn't he? How mortifying would it be to have your parents see you with your boyfriend? Hope Charlie is okay with E/B together. Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.1
Author's Response: Well, I know you've read the last chapter, so I won't assure you if Charlie's ok with it ;-)
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths
Now, that's what I was talking about... other stuff! Yeah, they definitely needed some release.
High five to Edward for telling Heidi off! Where does she get off talking to Bella like she is beneath her? Bella, college graduate, co-owner of a horse ranch and girlfriend to one Edward Freakin' Cullen? And she's a high class... waitress? Pu-leeese.
Having to be around Katein the wedding will be highly awkward! If she tries to reconnect with Edward, I can see Bell's does-not-play-nice-with-skanks claws come out!
OK, why the HELL would Charlie need a security camera in the wash stall? Office - yes, barn - yes, indoor arena - yes, outdoor area - yes, but the wash stall? What, someone might try to steal or vandalize the sink or hose? Seriously Charlie, what could justify that expense? And he gets back from a weekend fishing trip and the first thing he's going to do is go watch hours of footage of security cameras? I wouldn't think so. Seems like his first priority would be to check in on the horses and on Bella and Edward to see how things went, plus unpack his gear, put up any fish he caught, and clean himself up. So... WTF is he doing sitting in his office?
Can't wait to find out! Thanks for the hella long chapters!
Kat
Author's Response: AAAAAND.. OTHER STUFF HAS COMMENCED! WOO HOO!
HAHA! I enjoyed Edward telling Heidi off too! Bitch, please!
Bella at the wedding is a trip. I'll tell you that much for SURE! ;-)
Cameras are everywhere. Is it his fault his daughter and ranch hand decided to get feelsy in the wash stall? :P
And no, he wasn't watching hours of footage. No worries there. Maybe he was just getting in and the phone rang. He had to run into the office to get it. Yes, I like that. Honestly, I didn't plot that part in great detail, I was going for shock value. It's a funny story, silly girl ;-) LOL! Glad you're liking the absurdity of it all!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 7: Revenge is Best Served Wet
Ahhh, the water fight was lots of fun, especially B and her wet t-shirt contest. Of course E in a wet t-shirt is drool-worthy! Wet, dripping Edward in a towel is swoon-worthy, and nomming on Edward in the meadow under the stars is priceless! And while they didn't have protection, there were a number of other things they could have done for relief, like giving each other a helping hand or a tongue lashing! lol
Author's Response: I LOVED writing the water fight!! It was a BLAST! And I think what I'm getting from your review is that Edward - in general - is nom-worthy. That about right? ;-)
Other things coming up in three... two... one...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: kathat (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 6: My Heart: Where No Man Has Gone Before
AG,
I'm not sure how I happened on this story, but had it on my TBR list. Anyhoo, I am definitely enjoying how real all of this feels when I'm reading it. Having been around horses a bit and on a farm growinng up, a lot of this sounds familiar to me. I only had a Palamino gelding and a shetland pony, but it was fun.
Question on this chapter - just the day before, Bella was so completely worn out walking to the barns and then her pain meds were wearing off after the viewing gallery activity, so Edward carried her back to the house. How the hell did he agree to Alice taking her all the way to Seattle to walk around for a couple of hours or more? If she couldn't last more than she did at the ranch, how was she going to last longer and farther the next day?
I think Charlie is playing matchmaker. Papa knows!
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Hey! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story so far! I'll respond to your other review(s) in the am, I just wanted to quickly answer your question in this one!
The previous day, it was also really hot out and Edward suspected Bella was suffering from a bit of heat stroke. Plus, Alice knew what to watch out for and made Bella take a break when she started to show the signs :-)
Hope that helps a little!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!!!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 07:31 PM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths
I've had this story on my list of reads after my other story. once I started I couldn't stop I love both your Edward and Bella characters. This has been a really entertaining story so far :) can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Oh wow! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and Edward and Bella! They're probably the funnest E & B I've played with!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2011 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 7: Revenge is Best Served Wet
Great chapter. The date was really sweet. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you liked the date!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths
I think their secret relationship has been revealed to Daddy Swan. Especially their water fight in the stable. Daddy Swan already knew it. Now he has visual proof of it. Bella and Edward have gotten closer and admitted to a relationship between them. It's going to be hard on Edward at the wedding having to be nice to his ex. Her actions changed his love to hate. The love/hate fence can easily go either way. Edward has moved on and is involved with Bella. But will Kate make a move to try and get back together. I have a feeling she'll try it. Loved the way Edward put Heidi in her place at the diner. She deserved it for the way she was talking to Bella like Bella was unimportant and wouldn't be able to keep a hot man like Edward. Now they have their feelings out in the open, due to the film Charlie is aware of them together probably not in a way he'd want them to be. They can't change what happened between them. Will be interesting to hear Charlie's reaction and telling them together. An amazed/teasing expression on Charlie's face before reality hits them all.
Author's Response: So glad you're still enjoying the story!!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: ELM (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths
I only started reading this this morning, and have just finished the most recent chapter. I love it. The set-up is just so inventive, such a great way to have the story planned out around the ranch scene.
Cannot wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response: WOW! thank you so much! I'm so glad you love it!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 03:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths
LMAO, Edward & Bella are totally busted!!!
Author's Response: They really are!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: sfspeedy (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths
Another great chapter. Hopefully, Charlie will be understanding. As for the wedding/Kate situation: that should be interesting.
CAn't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Interesting indeed!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 6: My Heart: Where No Man Has Gone Before
Great chapter. Thank God Charlie hasn't killed Edward or Bella yet. I think he definitely knows something's up. These two aren't exactly subtle. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: HAHA! yeah, their deaths might abruptly end the story! LOL!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 5: This is Me
Great chapter. What does Charlie want to say to Bella? Does he know there's something going on? Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Well, because I'm late replying, I assume you've read the next chapter and know the answer :P
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 4: Playing House
And finally she gives in! Great chapter. Glad Edward got rid of Mike for Bella. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Gotta love a weak bella :P JK!
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 3: Grounded
Great chapter. Poor Bella. I'm sure everyone saw that coming. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Yes, poor bella! But Morphine helps!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 2: Agree to Disagree
Great chapter. Hope Edward and Bella learn to get along on more than a temporary basis. Omg naked Edward... *drool* I'm liking this roommate situation, well done Charlie. Did he say anything to Edward? Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: HAHA! Yeah, naked Edward is always awesome!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 06:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Upside Down
Amazing story so far!!! I think these two will have a great love / hate relationship that will make an exciting read.
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I'm so glad you're enjoying this story!!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: Chicsarah (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 4: Playing House
Edward to the rescue! Mike would have known he didn't have a shot in hell of getting Bella back now!
Author's Response: Yup! Here's hoping!! LOL!
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths
I love a scheming Charlie! He seems like he's doing everything he can to set Bella up with a good guy. :)
Author's Response: Schemey Charlie is my fave! *devil horns*
Thanks for reading and reviewing! Sorry for the late reply: my computer kind of got infected with malware... YIKES!
xoxo,
AG1981
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