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Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 19: Full of Surprises

That was a great trip. I'm a sucker for the zoo too :). Bitter much, Mike.......lol. Can't wait for the camping trip!

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the chapter! I'd tease, but I figured me updating would be better. Yes??

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 19: Full of Surprises

I love the zoo & yay on to camping trip that'll be fun!!! :)



Author's Response:

The zoo rocks and the camping trip will be fun! I promise!

I was going to send a teaser, but just got my chapter back, so I'm gonna update instead :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: writinginthemargins (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2011 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

OMG so stressful!  I can't believe they can't remember what happened!  I would be having a heart attack!  But the two of them are so adorable together and work really well as a couple.  Diving right in to the next chapter!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

I get Bella's feelings, but I think they need to talk about things a little before their hidden anxiety ends up in hurt feelings! I'm glad they reconnected physically, no need to shut the barn door after the horses left, so to speak!

Author's Response:

They do need to talk about it... but that would take the morbid fun out of my little bit of drama I've decided to add to this story :-P

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A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2011 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

Great chapter. E/B are so cute together. Is Bella pregnant or will she be able to go back to competing next year? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

The answer to Bella's possible pregnancy will be revealed in a couple of chapters! And I hope it doens't disappoint!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

really great chapter!! was Edward just looking up restaurants or something else? not sure what Edwards surprise could be . LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I think I've ruined all my readers! LOL! You all seem so quick to assume ulterior motives! HAHA! I guess you'll have to wait and see!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

Bella taking Edward to Spruce Meadows to show him a piece of her past life of competing.  Edward have never seen a competition live very excited about going.  Bella having adoring fans wanting her autograph.  Making Bella want to rejoin this aspect of her life only to have Edward remind her that it might not be possible due to pending waiting period for hot tub pregnancy yes/no?  I can understand Bella resenting the fact of possible pregnancy but she does realize it's not Edward's mistake it's both of theirs if it happens.  Deep inside Bella wants to have Edward's children even his original 5 in number.  Both want their relationship to be on a more solid ground.  Since they have only known each other for such a short time they want to get a good foundation to build a permanent relationship upon.  If a baby arrives it would hurry things, but they both plan on being together for the long haul.  They enjoy each other's company in all ways even while fighting/quarreling.  They might not like it, but they would rather argue than be apart.  It was sweet that Edward wanted to check ahead for dinner restaurant for the following day to be prepared.  Instead of last minute settling joint.  Such a considerate and loving guy.  Not to mention one tracked, possessive, jealous, and loving man.



Author's Response:

You seem to understnad these two quite well :) So glad you are enjoying the story!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

Yes...blacking out is not a pretty thing, lol.   Some memories are clear and others, well...not all there.     I thought you wrote the chapter well, expressing the concerns and embarassment of what goes on when you believe sex is involved, and now....no idea if they were safe.   LOL!   Fun two weeks!     Emmett finding her bathing suit top, lol....and then....flash...crazy thoughts fill her head, lol.    Poor Edward though.    This situation seems a little familiar and he is rightfully so...feels a little freaked out.    Love the chapter and I'm moving on.   A little behind on reading this week, lol.   Good for me though.   I get another chapter.

Reviewer: rbdfan08 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

im loving it! thank you and please post soon!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2011 01:07 AM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

That pizza sounds amazingly yummy :) Did I catch a True Blood reference 'Vampires and werewolves and shapeshifters?" If I did, you rock. If I didn't...you still rock :) Can't wait for more of their Canadian getaway. What I wouldn't give to mount Edward?



Author's Response:

It is an amazing pizza

And yes, the reference could have been a True Blood and a Twilight reference. So glad you caught it ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

They are so cute, I giggled a lot!!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you giggled a lot! I tend to giggle a lot when writing this story!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: jemappellegenevieve (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 07:50 PM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

she totally is. can we say "mood swings..." i love your edward. if i could only be so lucky.

 

love your story.



Author's Response:

He is a pretty awesome Edward! and the mood swings won't be pregnancy related yet.. it's only been three days since their "oops"

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A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

it is very stressful going thru all that, i hope they can enjoy the rest of the trip and then face the unknown,,,together

Author's Response:

They'll enjoy the rest of their trip! Promise!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 02:25 PM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

Good Chapter.....



Author's Response:

Thanks!

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A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

Good chapter. I actually like how each are possessive of the other. Nice touch to have Bella be the celebrity!

Author's Response:

Yeah, it's the first time I've written her as the celeb! Well, even him. I've written him as the successful part of the relationship tons of times, so it was Bella's turn to shine!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

tired cranky  over emotional ....are you just teasing us .....but that unconcious  actions he has hands on the belly ...pop over beer ..my husband did that while we were trying and I hated the sad look of failure after each failed try i think they will both be a little disapointed   if she drams of little copper haired babies now her heart will be broken if it was just a scare  



Author's Response:

I didn't mean to tease you all! It's only been three days since the hot tub fiasco... so she has no real symptoms yet... and possibly never will ;) Only time will tell! haha!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser!

A slender hand wrapped around my wrist, pulling me roughly through the main door to the new barn. Before I could question what was happening, Bella had me pressed against the wall, her lips ravaging mine while her hands rapidly worked to undo my pants.

“Mmm,” I mumbled against her voracious mouth. “Bella, what are you doing?”

Bella pulled her face back and smiled up at me. “I’ve been watching you all damn morning, and I just can’t take it anymore,” she confessed, her voice soft and breathy as she yanked my pants open and slipped her hand inside.

My head fell back against the wall with a soft thud as her delicate fingers wrapped themselves around my cock and began to move up and down … up and motherfucking down. “Shit, baby,” I moaned, my hands reaching out and cradling her face to draw her mouth up to mine.

Our lips united passionately as my fingers worked their way into her loose hair, pulling her closer to me in an effort to deepen our already fevered kiss. As our lips assailed one another almost violently, she moaned and whimpered into my mouth, each one sounding even more glorious than the last … and I hadn’t even touched her yet.

That was when I realized: I hadn’t even fucking touched her yet! Without another thought, I pulled my hands from her hair, moved them down her body and cupped her ass to lift her off the ground and turn her around. Having no other choice when her feet left the floor, she withdrew her hand from my pants, leaving my dick shrouded behind my underwear as my jeans started to fall down my legs.

In order to ensure she didn’t slide right back to the ground, her legs wrapped around my waist as I pressed her against the wall and I pushed my hips forward against her. Panting breathlessly, she broke our kiss as she rocked her hips eagerly against my straining erection and pressed her face into my neck.

“Oooh,” she moaned, her hips moving persistently against my ever-hardening cock; the only thing keeping our bodies from joining being my boxers and her yoga pants—and I was hoping to rectify that right fucking quick.

“Oooooh… Shit…” As the sounds of her pleasure echoed in my ears, her long, precise movements against me changed slightly and her arms tightened around my neck. Her fingers began tugging at the short hairs at the base of my neck, and prickles of pleasure shot through my entire body until they settled in my groin. “Oh God!”

I couldn’t believe what was happening; save for my jeans now being around my ankles, we still had most of our clothes on and I was pretty sure Bella just fucking came. Her arms and legs began to tremble around me slightly, informing me that my assumption was likely correct, and I pulled my face back. “Did you just—?”

xoxo,
AG1981

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

hey i never got my teaser .....but i sse the next chapter is ready so I forgive you   i hope they start to remember soon  forget having sex with E oh my i dont think it could even be possible



Author's Response:

Ugh! I know! I totally suck! I must have been drunk and thought I did them... you know, that whole "black out" think I like to blame people's lack of responsibility on??? See what I did there? LOL!

I promise it won't happen again!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2011 10:49 AM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

Hmmm... what does Bella have planned for Sunday... Banff? Lake Louise? Or maybe the Calgary Tower?
Great chapter, you're spot-on about Tim's, and "Say it. Out loud..." love love love this reference :)
Great lemons, too! You rock, woman!



Author's Response:

I love that you review in both places! It always makes me smile!

Do I need to give you a teaser here too? Hmmm... Nah.

Thanks for all the love! and congrats on your wins!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: rbdfan08 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

thanks for the chapter...can't wait to see the outcome of these two shananigans lol post soon



Author's Response:

And Shenanigans are exactly what they are! LOL!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: LivingwithEdward (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 6: My Heart: Where No Man Has Gone Before

Love this story so much. Can't wait to read the rest!

Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

Uh oh....the timing is right but lets hope some sense of responsibility reigned!
Good chapter!

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it! Sorry for not getting the teasers out... Real life kind of kicked me in the ass this week!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

One of the problems of over indulgences  of drinking -- sometimes you lose memories of what happened the night before.  So Bella/Edward will have to wait out a few weeks until Bella's next cycle arrives.  The friends and family of Bella and Edward are blending very well together.  Taking a pleasure ride together sounded relaxing and fun.  Planning a multiple couple camping trip for a future weekend also sounded like a lot of fun  Emmett will never let Bella or Edward live down finding their swinsuits in the hot tub.  Looking forward to Bella and Edward's weekend away.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked the chapter! Sorry I forgot about teasers, though! I totally got caught up in real life! Now that summer's here, my kids have kept me pretty busy!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

Well, let's hope that Bella can figure out his fears and put them to rest! Then they can worry together over the same thing!

Author's Response:

they'll talk it out! Don't worry!

Sorry for forgetting teasers before posting. My week has been insane!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: missameilia (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

I have read lots of fanfic and many authors have proclaimed themselves the queen of cliffies but you really take the cake. As you say yourself, there's not a lot of angst but the drama, oh the drama!  In mho, YOU are the queen of cliffies!  Thanks for another great chapter.

Lynn



Author's Response:

Haha! Well, I humbly accept my crown *curtsys*

Sorry I forgot to send out teasers. This week has been crazy busy!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2011 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 17: Riding Bareback is Always Risky

I've never been drunk enough that I blacked out, so I wouldn't know lol. :)

The *What If's* are gonna drive them nuts!!!



Author's Response:

Oh man, being that drunk is insane. I've blacked out, and eventually most of the memories come back. I haven't been that drunk in a long time... But my 30th is coming up, so I'm sure it'll happen soon ;-)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

xoxo,

AG1981

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