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Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2011 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

Good Chapter.....

Reviewer: OperationSeth (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 18: Back in the Saddle

That Timm'y reference made me kind of happy. Lol. And I know, I love that place so much that I never care if there's a line, I just care if I get it. Lol.

And yeah, spicy perogy pizza is amazing as well.

I guess this has become one of my favourite chapters, probably for the home advantages. Lol.

Anyways, jsut wanted to say that. I had another review (which was a lot more eloquent than the above) but Twilighted signed me out, and wouldn't let me post. :( And I can never remember what is was that I first wrote...

But anyways, I'm rambling now, so I should get going, and possibly read another chapter before I go to sleep. I's already pretty late anyways, what's another hour? Lol.

Byea. :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

So glad they reconciled their fears & differences!
Great job!

Reviewer: LadyAngel (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

i have read Yuletide Canticle and loved it so far, just as I have loved this story too. This was a great chapter can't wait for yout post more of it.

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

Glad they decided to stay and continue to work things out together. Edward letting her have the following day off all to herself while he covered for her.  Wanting to call off and on all day, but withheld himself to give her the necessary time alone to herself.  Bella and Edward agreed to have everyone over for dinner the night of her doctor's appointment to tell everyone.  Who would know Esme would be at the same spa and over hear the conversation between Bella and Rebecca make her weekly massage appointments.  Esme knows and is so excited about being grandmother.  She already considers Bella a daughter-n-law.  Bella requested Esme to keep it a secret so she and Edward can tell everyone together.  Looking so forward to the doctor's appointment and the big announcement to the family.  Especially Charlie's reaction especially after Bella's big confession about the fight when she took a walk and wound up crying on daddy's shoulder.  Would explain the waterworks to Charlie.  I hope both Bella and Edward also mention the window open in the bedroom and some items moved and taken while they were camping.  Just to add to security.  Someone stole the necklace and moved the pregnancy test.  We know it wasn't Charlie because he doesn't know about the baby.

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

Loved the love & Bella bounding with Esme!!! :)

Reviewer: sparklymagpie (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

Another great chapter. Esme finding out first was a surprise. Looking forward to next chapter next week.

merrily

Kat

Reviewer: RandyWriter (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

I usually think it when I read one of your chapters....so I'll just say it...Wow!   I was so glad that they decided not to seperate for a few days...even though typically it would be fine...since her things are missing, and they don't know if someone has been in the house...too many unanswered questions.   I actually was surprised, happily, that Esme heard about the pregnancy.   It is great that they have been accepting the pregnancy slowly, especially if came along so unexpectedly.    They are now so in love with their baby, and I can't wait for them to hear the heartbeat, and then tell everyone at dinner.  Gush...such a sweet and understanding couple, who have both had some seriously damaging relationships in the past.        Time for true happiness.   Not sure who is screwing around with them...but if they are smart...get Bones some guard dog training, lol.     I have a Shepard, and can be the biggest baby, but the most protective of me.    I'm sure Bones will be there for Bella.   Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: writinginthemargins (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

Yay, I am happy :) I was so worried after Charlie's suggestion (and I totally agree, if he really knew what was up, he never would have suggested it) but I'm glad that Edward and Bella were able to come to a compromise on it.  And I LOVED the unexpected twist of having Esme accidentally discover the pregnancy!  Nicely done.  I love this story, it always makes me happy :) Except when you leave evil little cliffies, but then everything gets better and I'm happy again.

Reviewer: PeppahLouie (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

Great chapter :)
You've done a great job with the development of communication between Bella and Edward. And it's tres cool, how Esme found out about the baby!
So, someone broke in and stole her necklace, hm? I guess the suspects are Kate, Mike and possibly Jessica. But my money is on Mike. Of course, I'll probably change my mind a few times over the next chapters...speaking of which, I'm looking foreword to your next one :)
Peps

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2011 12:56 AM · On: Chapter 24: Accidental Admissions

I think Esme finding out was cute. What mother wouldn't be excited that their baby boy is having a baby, well not literally? lol Glad Bella and Edward talked and had some wild sexing lol

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 06:40 AM · On: Chapter 14: The Next Step

Your stoy fucking kiss ass.  I love it so much and glad that they are getting along so well.  I am glad that Rose came to get to have a nice day with Bella.  It will be nice for Edward's sister to get along with Bella.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: fdlicous (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 02:41 AM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

I'm loving how this is going! It has me hooked! I actually teared up for Bella when Edward was being so, mean, I guess you could say.

If you're interested, the digital library through the UPenn library has an online copy of The Velveteen Rabbit. It's published on there: http://digital.library.upenn.edu


It's a legal copy, I promise :)

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 8: Spoken Answers & Untold Truths

This is such an awesome fucking story.  I certainly would have reviewed more but sometwimes Twilighted does not always work right regarding the reviews.  I certainly cannot wait to read about them finally succumbing to their passion.  It certainly should be great.  I guess that there will be a EPOV.  I certainly cannot wait for that.  THANKS FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING. Sher

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

Do you want the poor boy to be a total mess, I mean yeah some time away is good ( cause 24/7 with a person can cause issues as well) but he just freaked out when she was gone for an hour! I dunno, but for her to go away by herself..... What if she starts having problems or if she injures herself (this is Bella we're talking about here). And who is the freak sneaking in their house???? 1st the pregnancy test, now her necklace?????

Author's Response:

Come on, you know I don't! I can't control what Bella does though :P

Let's hope they talk about it before any decisions are made, huh?

The intruder will be revealed in due time. I can't just tell you ;)

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

Reviewer: JayNahNah (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

Hmmmm......I think it's good they cleared the air. Both had issues & conerns & fears so it's good they talked.
I think Edward needs to ask about the necklace. Its either Kate or Jake that's sneaking around, I think.
As for Bella taking time for herself?? Yes & no. Maybe a quick weekend away with Alice but that's it.

Author's Response:

Any time that Bella may or may not take would have only been a couple of days. I won't New Moon these two ;)

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

Reviewer: sherrilovesedward (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2011 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 1: Upside Down

Well.  this certainly looks interesting to me.  He is there only one day and she is already getting the "Edward" spell going on.  I am so looking forward to reading and cannot wait.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

Even with the explanations laid out on the table isn't going to solve all their problems/doubts/insecurities.  They both know where they stand now, but they both have issues that need to be addressed and buried/resolved/handled. Being apart might help them both force them to deal with those issues.  Also give them the time to get to know each other.  Go on dates, force them to talk, stop the sexual distractions.  Time heals all wounds and time gives them time to deal with the pain from the past and appreciate what they have together.  Charlie probably felt Edward was being to controlling constantly asking when Bella would return.  Maybe he thinks Edward needs to realize that Bella is a strong independent woman who has a father to protect her. All couples fight, but their fight had underlining issues from previous relationships that needed to be dealt with in order to continue building a firmer foundation with their loving relationship.  It couldn't hurt to have sometime apart to think through everything.



Author's Response:

Well, we'l see a bit of Charlie and Bella's talk in the next chapter.

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

Reviewer: writinginthemargins (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

Interesting!  I like how they resolved their fight and glad they finally got some things out in the open between them.  But Charlie's suggestion that Bella take some time away...that one was a curve ball!  I think Edward is gonna flip but if he hopes to keep building trust between him and Bella he won't fight it.  I still hope though that if Bella sees he's willing to give her time, she will decide to NOT go.  That would make me sad!

Oh and Happy 5 year Anniversary! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the anniversary wishes! It was pretty low-key, but we had a good day :)

Yes, well, let's just hope Bella and Edward have learned how to communicate so they can talk about Charlie's suggestion rationally!

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

Reviewer: samekraemer (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

Oh, man...Eddie-boy is likely gonna freak.  I think if the two of them would have had a damn conversation, a lot of the drama could have been avoided, but now, that wouldn't be fun for us, would it?



Author's Response:

LMAO! i'm glad you seem to understand the "fun" in forcing such a situation :P

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

Reviewer: olsson82 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

Good Chapter....



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it!

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

I'm uneasy about them having time apart, because I've got this sinking feeling Kate was the one who broke in.



Author's Response:

An interesting guess. The culprit will be outed soon ;)

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

Edward is such a bonehead lol. I loved storytime with Edward though. Can he come and read to me?



Author's Response:

*sigh* I'll send him over when he's done reading to me ;)

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

Reviewer: cruli (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 08:20 PM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

I love this storu!! can't wait for the next chapter........ The velvet rabbit is one of my all time loved book!!



Author's Response:

It's also one of mine :)

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2011 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 23: Unable to Let Go

Great chapter. Will Bella really leave? Can't wait to read more. Please update soon.



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it! I guess you'll have to wait for the answer to your question when I update in a few days!

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“For how long?” Edward asked, bringing my attention back to him. I watched as he looked at me painfully.

 

“Oh... Um, I don’t know. I’m guessing a couple of days?” Edward’s eyes dropped from mine and he nodded solemnly. “I’m not though... Going anywhere, that is...” That got him to look back at me. “I can’t. Not after everythi—”

 

Before I got the chance to even finish, Edward interrupted, sounding unsure in his own conviction. “Maybe he’s right?”

 

I quickly shook my head. “No,” I told him adamantly. “He’s not. Edward, we just made a huge breakthrough in our relationship and I’m not going to risk taking four giant leaps back over something like running away.”

 

“Bella, I know I can trust you,” he whispered softly.

 

xoxo,

AG1981

 

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