Reviewer: MonkeyStar (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 04:34 PM · On: Chapter 27: S & M: Suspicion & Misunderstandings

Alice is one sneaky character!! And I just don't like James, lol.

Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2011 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 27: S & M: Suspicion & Misunderstandings

Ah! So we have a James added to the mix. Well, with a name like that, I'm not thrilled at him being a neighbour!!!

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2011 08:41 AM · On: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

Mike isn't talking about monetary in what he deserves. He wants Bella as his and having others on the side.  Working on the ranch instead of working for mom and dad.  The boy is delusional and seriously needs to grow up.  I'm more concerned about who was in the house and moved the pregnancy test from the cabinet to the sink.  I have a feeling it is the same person who doesn't know how to drive a truck with a horse trailer heading for a broken down condemned property next to the Swan property.  The person who has lost the most since Bella has come into the Cullens life would be "Kate."  She lost her best friend Rose, her delusion that she could win back Edward, become a Cullen and have access to all that money and name. When Bella went to Rose's wedding and received all the warm welcome and treatment of being part of the family that Kate had never received she was furious, jealous, envious, etc... She had lived with and known Edward longer than Bella.  Bella had only known and lived with Edward a very short time and she was part of the family already a new daughter accepted.  That's a mighty big pill to swallow for her to take.  Especially someone of her class that someone from a small town, the daughter of a chief of police of Forks, not elite station would be accepted, could win the heart of Edward, be considered family, and be good enough to be associated with the Cullens at all.  Jealous that Bella is pregnant now the place where her relationship with Edward all went wrong. I can't believe that Mike would have the nerve to break into Bella and Edward's home and steal a necklace.  Actually believe he was entitled to it because Charlie fired him.  Bella was right she wasn't the cause of Charlie firing Mike that was Charlie's decision.  Bella didn't mention the odd driver and trailer moving in at the ranch next door.  Lost track with all the shopping and good times with the girls.  Bones was alerting them every night that Mike was coming around.  Bones was frightening him off.  When Mike saw Edward come out of the house and start searching he took off, didn't want to deal with him.  I know they went to town and got the restraining order against Mike, but I hope they have mentioned all this information to Charlie as well.  Charlie would be on the alert as well.  He doesn't want his little girl in danger either.  How could Bella forget to give Edward the onesie?  She was so jazzed about it.  Did you mention about the crib being handled already?  They have no choice Esme is a very determined lady and once she has her mind made up -- there is no changing it. Still going to be a bumpy ride.  I think Alice already figured out while they were camping that Bella was pregnant and is just waiting to be told by Bella as confirmation.  That look between Alice and Rose at the meadow had them both thinking the possibility based on her symptoms.  Looking forward to the weekend in Seattle.

Author's Response:

so glad you enjoyed the chapter! Your questions about the onsie and the crib as well as the pregnancy test being left out will be in the next chapter!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: maggieblock (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

Ugh! Bitch! Lol... J/K... Well mostly... ;) More please!!!

Author's Response:

BAHAHA! I know, I know... ;)

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Fuzzyfurr1977 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

Love he story so far. Just spent a marathon catching up. It's been on my TBR list for a while. Looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response:

So glad you're all caught up and enjoying the story so far!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

So, I'm disappointed that Bella would use other people's opinions as an excuse for not marrying him! If she wants to be his wife, she could have just said yes and dispensed with the ring and the plans until she was ready. Regardless of when they marry after they have a child together, people will always have an opinion of he finally did the right thing or something like that! Now, I know you were expecting to hear stuff like this, so I don't feel bad about saying it! It doesn't change how much I like the story, I just like to spout my opinion! Wouldn't be much fun if you were predictable! So, was it Alice who found the pregnancy test?

Author's Response:

LOL! Yes, I was expecting it. Some people accepted her reasoning and other's didn't. I knew writing it that that would happen.

Alice is the popular guess at this point, and the answer is coming up in the next chapter!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: writinginthemargins (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

I was so happy when I saw this story had been updated this morning!  It made me smile like a little kid.  I love the twist that there have been two people in the house.  There's no way Bella just forgot about that test, someone else has been creeping around.  Something wicked this way comes...Keep up the good work!  Already looking forward to the next chapter :)

Author's Response:

I love hearing that people were thrilled to see an update! It makes ME smile like a little kid!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: fdlicous (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

I read and read and then hit the bottom and don't see a next :( It kills me!!!

I can't wait to see what's next!

Author's Response:

LMAO! Yeah, I hate when that happens to me too! Does it help that I post weekly without fail??

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2011 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

I don't like this kind of dry humping lmao. I'm liking Possessiveward :) I like fierece Momma-to-be-ella (Yeah, that works lol) :)

Author's Response:

I'm a fan of Possessiveward and MommaToBe-ella. They're fun!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

 

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

 

 

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

I still think kate has something to do with it but I could be wrong, it could be Jake or even someone we don't even know.

Author's Response:

All interesting guesses! All will be revealed in the next chapter!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

 

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

 

 

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 26: One Thing at a Time Here

teasers are like early christmas presents yea ....you and your secret endings your killing me .. i was really afraid for her this time and more mystery of who is her new neighbor ahhh!!!!

Author's Response:

LOL! Teasers are like early christmas presents! LOL! The new neighbour as well as other questions will be answered in the next chapter!!

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

It didn’t take much longer to finish my packing, and Edward came to the bedroom to grab our bags so he could take them to the car.  After making sure the alarm was set, I locked the front door and turned to see Edward loading the bags into the trunk as Charlie approached from the barn with Bones by his side.

 

“You kids drive safe,” Dad said, stopping by the car as I stepped off the cement walk.

 

“We always do, Dad,” I assured him. “Thanks for watching Bones again.” Kneeling down, I pulled my dog into my arms and nuzzled him. “You be a good boy, and no barking in the middle of the night.”

 

As if on cue, Bones woofed and took off down the driveway. “It’s nice to see you listen,” I muttered after him sarcastically, at first mistaking his actions for enthusiasm. It wasn’t until after I heard a vicious snarl come from him, mirroring another from a dog—a pitbull—I’d never seen before, that I took off after him.

 

“Bella! Stop!” Edward called after me, and I could hear his heavy footfalls behind me as I reached Bones at the same moment that the bigger, slightly older dog lunged.

xoxo,

AG1981

Reviewer: katiecave (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 25: Start Spreadin' the News

okay after two straight days of reading I've caught up the the last chapter and you leave me there!!! GAH!!! I'm an impatient bitch! God damn all you super talented cliffie loving authors! I can't wait for the next chapter. being a country girl myself I can't help but love this story. Though we ran cattle on our farm and not horses my cousin was the high school rodeo rookie of the year a few years ago and my other cousin has won her fair share of riding comeptions nationally. So this whole story is like a reminder of all of that. Keep up the excelent work. 

Author's Response:

LOL! Well, be thankful I usually update within a week ;) I mean, I could leave you hanging for weeks or even months!

 

Thanks for reading and reviewing! Here's your teaser:

With a laugh, I shrugged, moving forward to straddle him. "I don't know," I said, settling onto his lap and feeling him grow aroused beneath me. "I thought it was perfect. Anyone can propose in a crowded restaurant or on vacation in one of the more romantic cities in the world... This though? To me, when a person proposes, they're always at their most vulnerable. I mean, you never really know what the person's answer will be, so there's always a little bit of fear there. It doesn't get more raw than that... Add to that being naked and..."

A shiver moved through me as Edward's hands moved down my back and cupped my **. "I just think you like seeing me naked, Swan."

"Well," I rasped, my voice full of lust as Edward pulled me against him, causing my desire to spike. "I'm not going to lie; it definitely has its perks."

Unable to take it any longer, I pressed my lips to his and kissed him hungrily. As my hips moved forward slightly, settling onto his lap, he groaned into my mouth and his fingers dug into the soft flesh of my backside as he tried to slow down my expeditious actions.

"Make love to me, Edward," I murmured against his lips, opening my eyes to meet his intense stare as I lifted my hips slightly and aligned us to join.

xoxo,

AG1981