So good! I love these characters.

What an ending! Loving it!!

she is such a nib nose now she has the damn thing stuck on her finger  thats funny  i wonderif he will see it that way   so much for a surprise 

Loving this so far!!

Good Chapter.....

I'm so happy for them, such a great 1st date!!! Makes me wish I had someone to share something like it :(

Any way, I can't wait to read more about Bella in love! This is such an awesome story I'm having a great time reading it, you're amazing girl!!!

Kisses.R.

Just started reading this fic and I'm completely hooked with it. I have a lot of catching up to do before your next update and I'm sure it's gonna be interesting. Can't wait to see how this new leaving arrangement is going to work, it should be fun!!!

I'm of to next chap...hope real life is smiling at you.

Kisses.R.

Bella with Carlisle has her mind where she doesn't want Carlisle to follow.  Having him think she was intensely reading about the mucous plug.  Not an intense topic.  With all the emotions can understand why Edward walked into the kitchen and saw the two women crying. Esme is so overjoyed at how happy her son has become since falling in love with Bella.  Edward doesn't want to mention the engagement ring to Bella because of her feelings about getting engaged and married just because they are pregnant and they have to.  Bella wants to wait.  So Edward will hide the ring until Bella gives him the sign that she's ready for that step.  What a lovely surprise to come home and find the leacherous James laughing with your father in the office.  I'm surprised that Charlie didn't see James leering at Bella.  He wouldn't approve of that. I'm glad she mentioned the wild mustangs to put James on daddy's bad list.  Ha Ha.  Only that put Bella on James' "I'll get you list" so she'll be in danger from him.  Edward and Bones will be there to protect her as well as Charlie with his shotguns.  Bella knows how to shoot as well.  Bella I think over did the teasing to Edward for his drunken passing out at the moment.  After all she did have one, he didn't deprive her of having one, just stopping the one building.  It's not like he doesn't give her plenty every time they are together.  So having one slip by with the huge amounts of liquor consumed shouldn't have been such a big deal. Looks like Edward will be making it up to her a lot this evening for a start.

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Well, she knew it wasn't a huge deal, she was just trying to tease him a little. It could have been worse, but she's just not that kind of girl ;)

 

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When the bucket was full I turned the water off, picked it up and turned to leave the wash stall, only to be startled when I found James standing there watching me. The bucket was back on the floor, tipped on its side and soaking the concrete and my shoes, leaving me cold, wet and severely pissed off.

 

“What the hell are you doing here?” I demanded, righting the bucket so I could fill it again.

 

“It’s good to see you again too, Bella,” he said, probably trying to sound more playful than creepy. “You know, you could have gotten me in a lot of trouble.”

 

Laughing dryly, I shook my head and looked down at the water still flowing from the hose, unable to hold his menacing stare. “You can’t be serious?” When he didn’t say anything, I knew he was. Not wanting to get into it with him, I sighed. “What do you want, James? I’m trying to finish up here before locking up for the night.”

 

“Well, I was here to ask your dad about something but couldn’t find him.” He took a step into the wash stall and I grew a little nervous; it was almost like he was cornering me. My panic only seemed to rise when his eyes moved up and down my body as he took another step and licked his lips. “Maybe you could help me out instead?”

 

xoxo,

AG1981

Not pure fluff you had a very interesting moment with James there and I am wondering how that little tid bit will affect your story??  I mean James just doesn't seem like the kind of guy to go down easy I mean hell hes dealing with Wild horses!!!

Post again soon can't wait for more you tease

Author's Response:

The James stuff will be drama-filled, don't worry... but he won't show his true colours for awhile ;)

 

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When the bucket was full I turned the water off, picked it up and turned to leave the wash stall, only to be startled when I found James standing there watching me. The bucket was back on the floor, tipped on its side and soaking the concrete and my shoes, leaving me cold, wet and severely pissed off.

 

“What the hell are you doing here?” I demanded, righting the bucket so I could fill it again.

 

“It’s good to see you again too, Bella,” he said, probably trying to sound more playful than creepy. “You know, you could have gotten me in a lot of trouble.”

 

Laughing dryly, I shook my head and looked down at the water still flowing from the hose, unable to hold his menacing stare. “You can’t be serious?” When he didn’t say anything, I knew he was. Not wanting to get into it with him, I sighed. “What do you want, James? I’m trying to finish up here before locking up for the night.”

 

“Well, I was here to ask your dad about something but couldn’t find him.” He took a step into the wash stall and I grew a little nervous; it was almost like he was cornering me. My panic only seemed to rise when his eyes moved up and down my body as he took another step and licked his lips. “Maybe you could help me out instead?”

 

xoxo,

AG1981

No hate here!!! I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response:

So glad you're loving it!!

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When the bucket was full I turned the water off, picked it up and turned to leave the wash stall, only to be startled when I found James standing there watching me. The bucket was back on the floor, tipped on its side and soaking the concrete and my shoes, leaving me cold, wet and severely pissed off.

 

“What the hell are you doing here?” I demanded, righting the bucket so I could fill it again.

 

“It’s good to see you again too, Bella,” he said, probably trying to sound more playful than creepy. “You know, you could have gotten me in a lot of trouble.”

 

Laughing dryly, I shook my head and looked down at the water still flowing from the hose, unable to hold his menacing stare. “You can’t be serious?” When he didn’t say anything, I knew he was. Not wanting to get into it with him, I sighed. “What do you want, James? I’m trying to finish up here before locking up for the night.”

 

“Well, I was here to ask your dad about something but couldn’t find him.” He took a step into the wash stall and I grew a little nervous; it was almost like he was cornering me. My panic only seemed to rise when his eyes moved up and down my body as he took another step and licked his lips. “Maybe you could help me out instead?”

 

xoxo,

AG1981

James gives me the creeps, I hope he doesn't hurt anyone.

Author's Response:

James is a creep, for sure!!

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When the bucket was full I turned the water off, picked it up and turned to leave the wash stall, only to be startled when I found James standing there watching me. The bucket was back on the floor, tipped on its side and soaking the concrete and my shoes, leaving me cold, wet and severely pissed off.

 

“What the hell are you doing here?” I demanded, righting the bucket so I could fill it again.

 

“It’s good to see you again too, Bella,” he said, probably trying to sound more playful than creepy. “You know, you could have gotten me in a lot of trouble.”

 

Laughing dryly, I shook my head and looked down at the water still flowing from the hose, unable to hold his menacing stare. “You can’t be serious?” When he didn’t say anything, I knew he was. Not wanting to get into it with him, I sighed. “What do you want, James? I’m trying to finish up here before locking up for the night.”

 

“Well, I was here to ask your dad about something but couldn’t find him.” He took a step into the wash stall and I grew a little nervous; it was almost like he was cornering me. My panic only seemed to rise when his eyes moved up and down my body as he took another step and licked his lips. “Maybe you could help me out instead?”

 

xoxo,

AG1981

Good Chapter.....

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Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Here's your teaser!

 

 

When the bucket was full I turned the water off, picked it up and turned to leave the wash stall, only to be startled when I found James standing there watching me. The bucket was back on the floor, tipped on its side and soaking the concrete and my shoes, leaving me cold, wet and severely pissed off.

 

“What the hell are you doing here?” I demanded, righting the bucket so I could fill it again.

 

“It’s good to see you again too, Bella,” he said, probably trying to sound more playful than creepy. “You know, you could have gotten me in a lot of trouble.”

 

Laughing dryly, I shook my head and looked down at the water still flowing from the hose, unable to hold his menacing stare. “You can’t be serious?” When he didn’t say anything, I knew he was. Not wanting to get into it with him, I sighed. “What do you want, James? I’m trying to finish up here before locking up for the night.”

 

“Well, I was here to ask your dad about something but couldn’t find him.” He took a step into the wash stall and I grew a little nervous; it was almost like he was cornering me. My panic only seemed to rise when his eyes moved up and down my body as he took another step and licked his lips. “Maybe you could help me out instead?”

 

xoxo,

AG1981

Thank you!

Author's Response:

Anytime!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! Here's your teaser!

 

 

When the bucket was full I turned the water off, picked it up and turned to leave the wash stall, only to be startled when I found James standing there watching me. The bucket was back on the floor, tipped on its side and soaking the concrete and my shoes, leaving me cold, wet and severely pissed off.

 

“What the hell are you doing here?” I demanded, righting the bucket so I could fill it again.

 

“It’s good to see you again too, Bella,” he said, probably trying to sound more playful than creepy. “You know, you could have gotten me in a lot of trouble.”

 

Laughing dryly, I shook my head and looked down at the water still flowing from the hose, unable to hold his menacing stare. “You can’t be serious?” When he didn’t say anything, I knew he was. Not wanting to get into it with him, I sighed. “What do you want, James? I’m trying to finish up here before locking up for the night.”

 

“Well, I was here to ask your dad about something but couldn’t find him.” He took a step into the wash stall and I grew a little nervous; it was almost like he was cornering me. My panic only seemed to rise when his eyes moved up and down my body as he took another step and licked his lips. “Maybe you could help me out instead?”

 

xoxo,

AG1981