Hi ... I've read your story and I like it very much.  I like the setting and the characters ... I hope you can go on writing this awesome story.

Author's Response:

I am finishing the story, but the remainder is posted on the writers coffee shop library. My pen is bekki.  hope you can find it there, if not let me know and I'll get you a link. Thanks for reading, b

Good Chapter....

Wow...a little disturbing...hell a lot disturbing, but I don't doubt it happens in their world.    Claire will be OK...scarred by her mother's sick actions, but she seems strong.   With Edward and Bella's guidance..I think she'll be OK.   It will take time...lots of time.     I wonder how it will affect Edward and Bella's dom/sub time.    I also wonder if Bella and Edward need to get married sooner to gain custody of Claire.    God I want to shake that mother and put her on the whipping bench.   Wellll...maybe she'd just like it since she's a sick and twisted bitch.     Love all of the close/romantic intimate times between Edward and Bella, and I can't believe he asked her to marry him.   I'm GLAD...just surprised.    He knows what he wants and he's not afraid to ask for it.      LOVED IT!   LOVED how they celebrated too!   Can't wait for more.  Write when you can!

Great chapter!!!  Love the story!!!  Update again soon please!!!  

well, because it is a seriously sore spot with me, I have to say "What an ASSHOLE!!!!!!" for 'forgetting' you have a daughter.  IT doesn't matter how crazy life is at the moment.

All those times where they were talking about open and honest relationships just screams in my head that he wasn't honest.  So I think he deserved to feel like shit.  He ought to feel ashamed of himself!

Now, that my rant is over.....hehe....I like what I have read thus far.  I am wondering if there is something more going on up in Alaska.....

I am looking forward to more family time.  Edward and Bella focused stories are great, but the other characters help balance out the story, plus it seems that Emmett is just as great as he usually is and Alice is just as crazy!

Thanks!

Teacher

I wonder if Claire is actually sick of if it is Carmen trying to keep her there longer. I hope Edward gets custody :)

Good chapter....

thanks good chapter

This is an interesting story.  The pace is very quick but I am intrigued.

Of course, who I feel sorry for here, is poor Claire.   As far as i'm concerned, Carmen is a bitch.  First, I don't fault her on being a Dom...that is not the problem...but a 15 year old boy...I'm not sure the Dom's of America would do such a thing.   Underage??   Second...to tell a poor child that her father is dead, when he isn't a rapist or anything.....sick sick sick!  Glad he found out.   And then...for that sick Subfucker to let her daughter see her lifestyle at such a young age....insane.   She needs to be locked up.   Edward is the best thing for her.     I hope he gets custory.   Claire deserves it!!!    I'm glad that Edward and Bella are working on their Dom situation, and everything seems OK, with her being his Submissive.    Love the collar...sounds impressive!!    Great writing!   Love it!   Hope to read update soon!   Wonder what his medical community knows of his lifestyle (if anything) and how she'll now fit into his life.   LOVE IT!

I think I've read this chapter before, but I never wrote a review.   I loved this chapter.   So hot and sexy.   How he is so worried about her, and yet wants to control her and she wants to be controlled.    I loved her text when she turned on her phone....it was perfect, lol.     When she called him my stomach jumped.   It was great.    I had a feeling he might show up, and when she said someone asked her to dance, I knew in my heart it was Edward.   It was perfect that they put on a little show, and I can't wait to see what he has waiting for her back at his room.   Hmmmm.

this is great please update soon...I can't wait to see what happens next please update as soon as you can