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Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2011 04:09 AM · On: You and I
Maybe I'm being paranoid, but I can see some troubles coming up with the evening's activities :S
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: July 27, 2011 04:08 PM · On: The Climb
aaannnnddd.... the storm begins again hehe
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 11:21 PM · On: You and I
Surprise visitor was Edward. Bella just didn't recognize him right away. It was arranged by Alistair and Edward to surprise Bella. Mac picked Edward up at the airport. Bella not leaving regularly, but trying to avoid the press/paps just made Edward feel like she was trying to hide him. Embarrassed to be seen with him. Bella's opinion was that she didn't want the paps to follow him around and harass him. Follow him to Seattle and Forks and make his life miserable. Not that she didn't want to admit they are dating. The one thing I didn't agree with was Bella agreeing to go with James to the award celebration. Edward flew down to see her, she should have told him last minute I'm not availalble I already have a date. I'm busy. You'll have to go stag. But no she trust the man, I don't trust him. So she's out for the evening, the man's upset already that she has decided he's not able to handle the paps because he's with Bella (Izzy Dwyer). Now he is sitting at home with Mac and Tanya watching the game while Bella is out on the town with James at the awards thing and the party afterwards. Bella needs to put her priorities in order. If she is really in love with Edward then he priority #1 over James and his needs. Bella drives me nuts at times especially like this. No consideration for Edward who has traveled a long way to just be with her and she leaves to help someone last minute. I don't think so, what's wrong with sorry I already have plans for the evening I can't change. I'm not available this evening. Anything like that would have been appropriate when you have unexpected company from out of town. Especially when you don't know how long he'll be in town to be with you.
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2011 04:17 PM · On: You and I
Awesome chapter and I feel so bad for Bella
until next time
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 07:55 PM · On: You and I
I'm nervous about the award thing. Don't trust any of the 3 men she's going out with... Great chapter. Can't wait till next week. :-)
Reviewer: luvyateamedward (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 07:29 PM · On: You and I
She could have said no. It's like she dropped everything just because James called. Boo! I'm mad at Bella at the moment! LOL! Great chapter!
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2011 02:33 AM · On: You and I
No wonder Edward is upset. First Bella sneaks him out of the building and then leaves him to spend the evening elsewhere. I bet he expected a different reception. Annnd .... so far Bella hasn't told him about the stalkers new activities. THey have a lot to talk about to clear the air.
Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2011 06:20 AM · On: You and I
Is she really this stupid. Who would duck E for J and not even Consider his feelings? This is so wrong. Tanya and E Should tag along too.
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2011 05:02 AM · On: You and I
how sad for Edward, but i feel like i'm missing something, Did you tell us about what is so complicated in Bella's life already or is this a reveal we are going to see for the first time with Edward?
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 08:06 PM · On: You and I
Squee this si getting so deep and scary!!! I an't wait for more!! I mean James and B and E and B and when someone does see her in public with E their going to say that shes a cheater or something and cause a huge scene... But the stalker is still out there althoug I think its one of T's assistants... Post again soon so many possible ways this can go!!
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2011 07:42 PM · On: You and I
Poor Edward :( I'll keep him company...no problem.
Reviewer: Ebcheer4u (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2011 06:39 PM · On: Closer to the Edge
Ok so I haven't commented but I LOVE ur stories... I can't wait 2 see where u take this.. can't wait 4 the nxt chapter... :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: KEEGANN (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2011 11:10 AM · On: Closer to the Edge
cliff hanger : (
you workin' this story gurllll
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 06:22 PM · On: Closer to the Edge
uh oh! I don't like Alistair, and this cliffy is a bad thing! I wonder who it is?
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2011 04:31 PM · On: Closer to the Edge
My quess is it's Edward because the stalker knows Bella by Izzy. Right?
Awesome chapter and I can't wait for the next one!
until next time
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 08:21 PM · On: Closer to the Edge
Alistair is right. Since James was the one who wanted to get a new I Phone and change the telephone number and only a few know the number then someone she knows close to her is the person doing the harassing and the sending the flowers. Especially since the delivery boy brought the flowers to the recording studio today and hardly anyone knew she was recording. All the clues again lead to someone she knows who is in her close circle of associates. Now Mac has left to meet up with Tanya and Alistair has left her leaving her completely vulnerable. Since the tingling isn't delighting and exciting her I'm not getting a vibe that the visitor is Edward. So I am hoping beyond hope that Alistair will arrive quickly to rescue her and earn his income properly in protecting her. Too bad Emmett, Jasper, and Edward aren't around she wouldn't be unprotected at all. One of them would be with her all the time and no one would be able to reach her at all. I'm surprised Mac left without Alistair being around, did Bella tell her uncle about the unknown call and the flowers arriving without a card starting again since her return to LA? Isn't this one of the reason Mac came to LA with her? To make sure she was safe? To keep an eye on her and ensure her safety? Didn't he promise to watch her for Edward also? The fact she couldn't get a hold of Edward by phone today could mean he was heading down to LA he did say would be down shortly to spend quite a bit of time with her, but she's not feeling like she does when Edward is around.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: pamspastime (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 07:13 PM · On: Closer to the Edge
OHHHHH you leave us with a cliffie!!!!!!! I'm really baffled by who Bella should be trusting here I think she should pack up and move back to Forks,for good, with Edward. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 10:04 AM · On: Closer to the Edge
Oh shit...that'd BETTER be Edward!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: marie_cullen (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 09:55 AM · On: Breathe Me
HELL YEA!! Me LIKEY this Alistair!!! Mmm..mmm..mmm!!! ;)
Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 05:00 AM · On: Closer to the Edge
Seems like a lot of guys are into Bella. Who is the creep of creeps? Can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: beth42 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 04:57 AM · On: Closer to the Edge
Aaaaaaaa!!! Who is it? Cliffies are mean! :-( But a great chapter nonetheless. Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: twilightgma1954 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 04:16 AM · On: Closer to the Edge
body guard my ass how could he let anyone get that close to her alone enough to touch her i hope this is not to bad
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: krjemb (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 03:46 AM · On: Closer to the Edge
I thought it was Edward surprising her, but his kiss shouldn't send a chill up her spine. Does Alistair know about the freaky twins? They have access to her life through Tanya.
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: macfaerie (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 03:40 AM · On: Closer to the Edge
wholy FUCK!!! I say Surprise EDWARD is here!!!! but then again it could be "THE" stalker!!! AHHHHH!
Upate soon, dont leave bella hanging for long
LOVE MAC!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
Reviewer: Looby Luscious (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2011 12:14 AM · On: Closer to the Edge
Edward! It has to be!
Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your review! Next up for RH, we've got some Lady GaGa! As usual, the lovely MinaRivera makes our Picteases (hints to our chapter song are alluded to in it), which is posted alongside our story teaser on the RH Blog. RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com
The next chapter is in the queue as we speak! =)
♥ Shel ♥
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"Hey," she spoke softly in the unusually quiet night. Normally, the Beverly Hills air was a cacophony of noise, but it seemed as if tonight the hubbub was elsewhere. More than likely Los Angeles was a flurry of activity, where the crowds were gathering to catch a glimpse of their favorite celebrities.
He glanced at her briefly, turning back to gaze out at the bright lights of the city.
"You're still upset with me over earlier?" she mused.
Edward shrugged slightly, not trusting his voice at the moment.
"Edward, please," she whispered, her voice on the verge of pleading. "I love you, but I need you to understand. I'm not trying to hide this, I just want to protect you."
He turned to her, his eyes intense and burning. "You never learn, do you?"
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