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Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 05:46 AM · On: The House That Built Me

Great chapter. Such an easy romance to fall into. :-) Just genuinely sweet.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Also, the Parachute Victoria POV Outtake that I wrote for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence is in the queue here now, too!

For the Tsunami compilation, I decided on a Rabbit Heart Outtake of the pic that Edward asked about in the last chapter. So, we'll get a peak into Bella & Emmett's childhood! Several people suggested that, so I figured that we'd roll with it. Thanks to all of you who replied! =)

Next up for Rabbit Heart, The Black Keys.

♥ Shel ♥

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"What the-"

She peered over his arm and a smile quickly split her face. In his hands was a slightly beat up stuffed Scrappy Doo toy. Edward looked over at her and raised an eyebrow.

"Is this where your nickname came from?"

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

"No, it was actually the other way around," she giggled. "I started calling Em 'Shaggy' because he was tall and thin, with hair just like Shaggy's. In return, he started calling me 'Scrappy' because I was little and annoying. By no means did they start off as affectionate nicknames, they just evolved over time."

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 04:51 AM · On: The House That Built Me

OMG so excited this was a pretty great Chap spending some alone time with Edward watching his reaction to her for a change and then the way she feels although she refuses to aknowledge it is pretty amazing!!!  Post again soon!   <3



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Also, the Parachute Victoria POV Outtake that I wrote for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence is in the queue here now, too!

For the Tsunami compilation, I decided on a Rabbit Heart Outtake of the pic that Edward asked about in the last chapter. So, we'll get a peak into Bella & Emmett's childhood! Several people suggested that, so I figured that we'd roll with it. Thanks to all of you who replied! =)

Next up for Rabbit Heart, The Black Keys.

♥ Shel ♥

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"What the-"

She peered over his arm and a smile quickly split her face. In his hands was a slightly beat up stuffed Scrappy Doo toy. Edward looked over at her and raised an eyebrow.

"Is this where your nickname came from?"

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

"No, it was actually the other way around," she giggled. "I started calling Em 'Shaggy' because he was tall and thin, with hair just like Shaggy's. In return, he started calling me 'Scrappy' because I was little and annoying. By no means did they start off as affectionate nicknames, they just evolved over time."

Reviewer: laurell (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 01:57 AM · On: The House That Built Me

loving the story! can't wait to see what happens :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Also, the Parachute Victoria POV Outtake that I wrote for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence is in the queue here now, too!

For the Tsunami compilation, I decided on a Rabbit Heart Outtake of the pic that Edward asked about in the last chapter. So, we'll get a peak into Bella & Emmett's childhood! Several people suggested that, so I figured that we'd roll with it. Thanks to all of you who replied! =)

Next up for Rabbit Heart, The Black Keys.

♥ Shel ♥

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"What the-"

She peered over his arm and a smile quickly split her face. In his hands was a slightly beat up stuffed Scrappy Doo toy. Edward looked over at her and raised an eyebrow.

"Is this where your nickname came from?"

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

"No, it was actually the other way around," she giggled. "I started calling Em 'Shaggy' because he was tall and thin, with hair just like Shaggy's. In return, he started calling me 'Scrappy' because I was little and annoying. By no means did they start off as affectionate nicknames, they just evolved over time."

Reviewer: AnnaWinters (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:24 AM · On: The House That Built Me

God I love this story. Bella and Edward belong together, i can see it when the paparazzi find out if they kiss or something and she's morified when camera's and stuff flood the town XD

I love your stories!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Also, the Parachute Victoria POV Outtake that I wrote for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence is in the queue here now, too!

For the Tsunami compilation, I decided on a Rabbit Heart Outtake of the pic that Edward asked about in the last chapter. So, we'll get a peak into Bella & Emmett's childhood! Several people suggested that, so I figured that we'd roll with it. Thanks to all of you who replied! =)

Next up for Rabbit Heart, The Black Keys.

♥ Shel ♥

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"What the-"

She peered over his arm and a smile quickly split her face. In his hands was a slightly beat up stuffed Scrappy Doo toy. Edward looked over at her and raised an eyebrow.

"Is this where your nickname came from?"

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

"No, it was actually the other way around," she giggled. "I started calling Em 'Shaggy' because he was tall and thin, with hair just like Shaggy's. In return, he started calling me 'Scrappy' because I was little and annoying. By no means did they start off as affectionate nicknames, they just evolved over time."

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 11:15 PM · On: The House That Built Me

Bella definitly should have told someone what she was going to do, don't blame them for being upset. I am loving the interaction of Bella and Emmett!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Also, the Parachute Victoria POV Outtake that I wrote for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence is in the queue here now, too!

For the Tsunami compilation, I decided on a Rabbit Heart Outtake of the pic that Edward asked about in the last chapter. So, we'll get a peak into Bella & Emmett's childhood! Several people suggested that, so I figured that we'd roll with it. Thanks to all of you who replied! =)

Next up for Rabbit Heart, The Black Keys.

♥ Shel ♥

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"What the-"

She peered over his arm and a smile quickly split her face. In his hands was a slightly beat up stuffed Scrappy Doo toy. Edward looked over at her and raised an eyebrow.

"Is this where your nickname came from?"

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

"No, it was actually the other way around," she giggled. "I started calling Em 'Shaggy' because he was tall and thin, with hair just like Shaggy's. In return, he started calling me 'Scrappy' because I was little and annoying. By no means did they start off as affectionate nicknames, they just evolved over time."

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 10:21 PM · On: The House That Built Me

Bella was told by Mac that he saved some of Charlie's things for her.Still  a lot of memories flowing through her now that she's back in Forks.  Loss of her dad, her extended family, etc.. She told Mac was going for a walk.  the path led her to her old house.  She knew Edward was there by his truck.  she was going to knock and then decided against it, but Edward opened the door and invited her inside.  she mentioned the boxes in the attic.  Bella went through the boxes with Edward.  Stories flying back and forth.  The comfortable way she felt around him was so strange.  He invited her to lunch when her stomach growled embarrassing her.  She remembered Alice and declined.  Edward said Alice has approached you right.  Bella nodded.  Friends go to lunch.  In the diner she ran into Cora who babysat her when the guys went to fish.  She was welcomed home again by Cora and Waylon.  It's so sweet how everyone is welcoming her back home.  Missing her and her dad.  Isabella Swan not her alias Izzy Dwyer.  Eventually arriving at the bar with an upset Emmett because Mac was worried about her.  Bella has to realize with the threat and stalking in LA her extended family are still worried she might still be in danger.  Who knows if she was followed when she left in the night.  I don't think she'll have a problem until she contacts her so called friends in LA.  Bella will need to keep Em and Mac informed that she is safe whenever she leaves either Mac's house, the bar, etc...  Just being considerate to them since they know about all the trouble she's been in and notes.  They are going to worry, if they don't know where she is they can't protect her from possible future harm.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Also, the Parachute Victoria POV Outtake that I wrote for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence is in the queue here now, too!

For the Tsunami compilation, I decided on a Rabbit Heart Outtake of the pic that Edward asked about in the last chapter. So, we'll get a peak into Bella & Emmett's childhood! Several people suggested that, so I figured that we'd roll with it. Thanks to all of you who replied! =)

Next up for Rabbit Heart, The Black Keys.

♥ Shel ♥

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"What the-"

She peered over his arm and a smile quickly split her face. In his hands was a slightly beat up stuffed Scrappy Doo toy. Edward looked over at her and raised an eyebrow.

"Is this where your nickname came from?"

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

"No, it was actually the other way around," she giggled. "I started calling Em 'Shaggy' because he was tall and thin, with hair just like Shaggy's. In return, he started calling me 'Scrappy' because I was little and annoying. By no means did they start off as affectionate nicknames, they just evolved over time."

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 09:31 PM · On: The House That Built Me

Loved it! :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review of the last chapter! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

Also, the Parachute Victoria POV Outtake that I wrote for the Fandom Against Domestic Violence is in the queue here now, too!

For the Tsunami compilation, I decided on a Rabbit Heart Outtake of the pic that Edward asked about in the last chapter. So, we'll get a peak into Bella & Emmett's childhood! Several people suggested that, so I figured that we'd roll with it. Thanks to all of you who replied! =)

Next up for Rabbit Heart, The Black Keys.

♥ Shel ♥

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"What the-"

She peered over his arm and a smile quickly split her face. In his hands was a slightly beat up stuffed Scrappy Doo toy. Edward looked over at her and raised an eyebrow.

"Is this where your nickname came from?"

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

"No, it was actually the other way around," she giggled. "I started calling Em 'Shaggy' because he was tall and thin, with hair just like Shaggy's. In return, he started calling me 'Scrappy' because I was little and annoying. By no means did they start off as affectionate nicknames, they just evolved over time."

Reviewer: romancaholic (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Believe

Bella being taken away from Forks upon Charlie's death by her mother.  Leaving the only home she had ever had.  Leaving Emmett and his dad behind with no further interaction.  all her letters were never sent by her mother and all their letters were intercepted before Bella received them.  Renee had cut Bella off from her past life.  Renee pushed her into show business.  Bella was adopted by Phil.  Her name was Izzy Dwyer with a great singing career.  Renee and Phil were killed and Bella was all alone.  She continued to work, but the stalker was getting too close.  Letters weekly, then daily with information about what she did that day, clothes she wore, etc...  It would freak me out also.  Then to come home and find his last letter lying on her bed.  Who is he/her?  Whoever it was got in in spite of her additional security.   Bella snuck away from her house.  Trying to keep her identity hidden to escape LA.  She wanted to return to Forks to Mac a second dad and his son Emmett her brother.  Bella was afraid someone who recognize her or that her previous family wouldn't accept her.  She was surprised when she was not only remembered, but welcomed home like the prodigal daughter.  Both Mac and Em were so mad at Renee.  Happy moment was when Mac told Bella he bought Charlie's house when Renee sold it.  Keeping it for Bella when she returned to Forks.  Currently being rented out to Edward, Alice's brother.  Alice is married to Jasper Whitlock.  Jasper is Rosalie's cousin.  Rosalie is Em's wife.  A very close family and friend unit and they have all taken Bella under their wings.  Protection is foremost in Em's mind.  Rosalie had heard so much about Bella from Em already loved her sight unseen.  Alice's rage statement about Bella not getting involved with Edward because of Angela (model) breaking his heart by up and living each time her career called.  Left him high and dry without even a good bye.  It's a shame that Angela has changed so much from the shy girl she was in grade school Bella remembered.  Already appears that Edward and Bella have a small connection.  I can understand Alice not wanting Edward hurt any more and Bella doesn't know where her life is heading.  Eventually she will have to return to fulfill her contract and commitments, but also to decide if that is what she still wants to do.  If not, then needs to sell big house in LA and wrap up all the loose ends in LA to remain in Forks.  Still wondering who the stalker is though.  Has to be someone close and trusted to get by the security men.  Looking forward to more of the mystery of who it is and why they are so adamant to get with Izzy.



Author's Response:

{I think that's the longest review that I've ever gotten! Thank you so much! It feels great when someone really gets what you've been writing! <3}

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 03:24 PM · On: Believe

Wow, I have to say I though Bella woudl loose it in the bar! Good on Em for getting her out of there! I so wanted to smack Alice in the face for how she said what she did to Bella. I understand where she is coming from though. I would be concerned as well if I were her. LOVED the song you had for 'Izzy's' song :D



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: ZaHL (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Life Starts Now

Awwww :D

Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 09:19 AM · On: Believe

Great Chap and great cause to be working for!  I can't believe we meet Mike and Jacob all in one chap and get warned about backing off Edward holy crow what a chap!  Post again soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: mysticfighter (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2011 12:40 AM · On: Believe

Looks like Bella is THE attraction in Forks. I'm sure Jacob will put the moves on her, just like Mike. Alice went a bit overboard with her protectiveness regarding Edward's love life. Loads off possibilities how this story will evolve - can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: ratqueen (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 05:05 PM · On: Believe

Great chapter. I love the brother/sister interaction with Bella and Emmett 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: Sophia (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 05:00 PM · On: Believe

holy poo, justin bieber's her stalker, isn't he?! :O

just kidddinn' ;)

this is really good.

please update!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: lil_jess (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 03:59 AM · On: Rabbit Heart

I am loving this story. I am a fan of Parachute and your writing so I was exciting to read something else of yours. 

I was captured by RH in the first chapter. Had me in tears. I really like what you've done with all the characters. I'm intrigued by Jacob now. Waiting for the shit to hit the fan and her to be found. I love her growing relatoinship with Edward and can't wait to read more. 

You've got another hit on your hand, no doubt!!!

Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 01:35 AM · On: Believe

Loving it :) I like how you dirted up Angela's usual goodie goodie image. Poor Edward.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: MarieS (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 10:37 PM · On: Rabbit Heart

You got me interested.

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 08:07 PM · On: Rabbit Heart

Interesting!

Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 07:42 PM · On: Believe

Hmm, this chapter wasn't quite what I expected.  It was good, just not what I'd pictured. 

I loved getting some of Edward's backstory.  Poor boy.  And Alice's over-protectiveness was understandable, if way too heavy handed. 

I'll be curious to see where you're going with the Jacob thing.

Rosalie's pets cracked me up!  Loved that little touch.  And I am really looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 07:25 PM · On: Believe

I fine it kind of funny that you used Katy Perry as Izzy Dwyer are you always going to make Izzy's songs Katy's? And don't get me wrong I love Katy Perry's songs, lol, I just thought it was funny!
Another thing I thought was funny was how you made Angela the slut, I mean really?...., lol not lauren. I love it though, lol!
well until next time
and i can't wait for the next chapter

Author's Response:

{LOL! No, not all of Katy's songs will be Izzy's. In fact, I'm pretty sure thet Firework is the only one I'll be using.}

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 07:07 PM · On: Believe

Lovin this story. Funny to read the different Rose and Angela stuff. It's a nice change.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can!

RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I'm excited for the next chapter, we get a little E & B interaction! =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Well then," he smiled as he let go of her hand, "friends go out to lunch with their buddies all the time. So, let's get some grub, okay?"

She laughed and shook her head, realizing that he had her in a corner. "Fine," she sighed playfully, "but I buy next time, understood?"

His eyes caught hers, just as surprised as she was to hear the mention of a next time come from her mouth. His lips curled into a crooked smile. "Fine, Miss Bella, you can buy our next meal together."

Edward picked up her jacket and helped her shrug into it. "Shall we?" he asked as held his elbow out for her to take.

She eyed him carefully, before making the decision to go with the flow. She linked hers though his and rested her hand on his forearm.

"Yes, we shall."

Reviewer: ElektraLane (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 02:41 PM · On: Life Starts Now

The haircut and color is the first step in the right direction. It'll be interesting to see how things go. I am very intrigued!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can! RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I've been working on a rough outline for Rabbit Heart. I *think* it'll end up around 20-25 chapters, if everything stays on track. =)

See you Friday!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Do you want something for breakfast? Or do you want to grab something on the way?"

"On the way sounds good. Give me twenty minutes to grab my clothes from the laundry room and shower."

"Sure, go right ahead. I need to walk Joey Mac before we go."

Bella laughed, still finding the dog's name hilarious.

"Hey," Rose mock-chastised her, "no making fun of the dog. He's my baby."

"Along with Jon, Jordan, Donnie and Danny," Alice giggled, causing Rose's cheeks to flush lightly.

Bella raised an eyebrow and looked at the Amazon curiously. She huffed and folded her arms across her chest.

"Okay, fine. We have a cat named Jordan and three fish named after the others. I may have been a bit obsessed."

Reviewer: Kuuipo (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 07:40 AM · On: Rabbit Heart

I am hooked on your story.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can! RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I've been working on a rough outline for Rabbit Heart. I *think* it'll end up around 20-25 chapters, if everything stays on track. =)

See you soon!

♥ Shel ♥

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"Do you want something for breakfast? Or do you want to grab something on the way?"

"On the way sounds good. Give me twenty minutes to grab my clothes from the laundry room and shower."

"Sure, go right ahead. I need to walk Joey Mac before we go."

Bella laughed, still finding the dog's name hilarious.

"Hey," Rose mock-chastised her, "no making fun of the dog. He's my baby."

"Along with Jon, Jordan, Donnie and Danny," Alice giggled, causing Rose's cheeks to flush lightly.

Bella raised an eyebrow and looked at the Amazon curiously. She huffed and folded her arms across her chest.

"Okay, fine. We have a cat named Jordan and three fish named after the others. I may have been a bit obsessed."

Reviewer: JuliannaOphelia (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Life Starts Now

love it!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can! RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I've been working on a rough outline for Rabbit Heart. I *think* it'll end up around 20-25 chapters, if everything stays on track. =)

See you soon!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Do you want something for breakfast? Or do you want to grab something on the way?"

"On the way sounds good. Give me twenty minutes to grab my clothes from the laundry room and shower."

"Sure, go right ahead. I need to walk Joey Mac before we go."

Bella laughed, still finding the dog's name hilarious.

"Hey," Rose mock-chastised her, "no making fun of the dog. He's my baby."

"Along with Jon, Jordan, Donnie and Danny," Alice giggled, causing Rose's cheeks to flush lightly.

Bella raised an eyebrow and looked at the Amazon curiously. She huffed and folded her arms across her chest.

"Okay, fine. We have a cat named Jordan and three fish named after the others. I may have been a bit obsessed."

Reviewer: mbellaandedwardm (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 07:44 PM · On: Life Starts Now

that was cute lol and i can't wait for the next chapter : )
well until next time
question did rose get raped and beat up in this fic?

Author's Response:

{Nope! No harm has come/will come to Rose in this story.}

Thank you so much for your reviews! RH's Sunday teasers are up on the blog as we speak, so check them out if you can! RabbitHeartff.blogspot.com

I've been working on a rough outline for Rabbit Heart. I *think* it'll end up around 20-25 chapters, if everything stays on track. =)

See you soon!

♥ Shel ♥

O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O_o_O

"Do you want something for breakfast? Or do you want to grab something on the way?"

"On the way sounds good. Give me twenty minutes to grab my clothes from the laundry room and shower."

"Sure, go right ahead. I need to walk Joey Mac before we go."

Bella laughed, still finding the dog's name hilarious.

"Hey," Rose mock-chastised her, "no making fun of the dog. He's my baby."

"Along with Jon, Jordan, Donnie and Danny," Alice giggled, causing Rose's cheeks to flush lightly.

Bella raised an eyebrow and looked at the Amazon curiously. She huffed and folded her arms across her chest.

"Okay, fine. We have a cat named Jordan and three fish named after the others. I may have been a bit obsessed."

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