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Reviewer: sheba (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2011 02:40 AM · On: Chapter 5
I think Alice could get Charlie to almost anything!
Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
Nice chapter. Jake coming next ?
Reviewer: tatie1970 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 5
Nice chapter. Jake coming next ?
Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 08:19 PM · On: Chapter 5
Another great chapter....loved hearing Charlie's reaction to Alice....and I am anxious for Rose and Emmett to get back......please post soon!!!
Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 5
Love it!
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 5
loved this chapter. I read a theory of Bella's in another story - Jasper has such a hard time resisting since he has his own bloodlust but also has it amplified by the bloodlust of those around him - double whammy!! While it is good that Bella told Edward that she loves him, I was glad to see her with a little more backbone and not just brushing what he did under the rug.
Reviewer: coloradowoman (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2011 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 4
I hate Jacob. He is always such a pain in the ass, whining and moaning all the time.
I wonder what Edward will do now.
great chapter!
Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2011 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 4
Excellent chapter. Can't wait for Edward to kick some ass.
Reviewer: Curlykate (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2011 10:28 AM · On: Chapter 4
Really enjoying this! Please write more. Poor Bella seems to be blaming herself for being abused which is so sad as she does not deserve to do so.
Reviewer: rachel49 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2011 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 1
I'm interested in seeing Esme's and Rosalie's reaction to Jacob's abuse.
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 4
Good chapter! I like the part when Bella explains to Edward about how he underestimated her feelings. I felt that she should have made that argument in New Moon.
Reviewer: xiolaperry (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 4
Fantastic story- I love it! I can't wait to read more. I'm a sucker for 'Edward's return' stories & this is the best one I've read in a while. I'm so glad she didn't pursue a physical relationship with Jacob.
Reviewer: roslyn (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 1
i likee !! (: waiting for edward... ! haha
Reviewer: lpeaz814 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 4
another really great chapter, I can't wait to see things being to get back to "normal" for bella and the cullens
Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 4
Hm. Complications, complications. Methinks neither Jacob NOR Edward realizes how much each of them has broken her. Time will tell.
I hope Charlie learns or figures out what's going on with those bruises. I'd really like to see him kick some tail.
Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 4
Amazing! Edward needs to get aggressive with that stupid dog. More reaction from him! Love this Bella and adore this story. Can't wait for an update! x
Reviewer: 10of15 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:39 PM · On: Chapter 4
great story so far! Jake's not going to be a happy camper!
Reviewer: Arabella_ (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 4
Liked the chapter, though I thought Edward would be more mad...does he understand what she's telling him?
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 11:55 AM · On: Chapter 4
I'm glad Bella came clean about Jake hurting her! She really needs to tell Charlie what Jake has been doing.
Reviewer: Cathrine1604 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2011 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 3
Absolutely amazing story! :-) I almost wanted to punch the screen when the chapter stopped. Hope Edward gets to kick Jacob's ass. Poor Bella - but acting so strong for so long is unreal for everyone. Hope they pull through.Please update soon!
Catherine x
Reviewer: Amber20 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2011 11:47 PM · On: Chapter 3
Awesome!! Please keep writing. You have some talent!
Reviewer: ITRomantic (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2011 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
Enjoying the story. I wonder what will happen next?? I think it is safe to say that if Edward does figure it out, he won't be too happy. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: sophielynn31 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 3
What a sweet reuinion. What will Edward do now?
Reviewer: newmommyak (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:53 AM · On: Chapter 3
I like where you are going with this. Keep it up!
Reviewer: sain84 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2011 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 3
Great read! I usually don't read stories that have less than 50k words because it's just to frustrating to wait for chapter, but your story is great. Thank for writing. I look forward to the next chapter.
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