I actually like this version of Edward coming home to Bella - it seems more organic.  And even though there is still a lot of emotional drams going on we don't have the extra heavy drama of the Voluturi.  Of course Rose is going to be furious at Jacob because of the abuse.

I totally understand your need for Edward to be calm here, but I can't wait for him to go all bad-ass vamp on Jake...

O.k., I love the story - but Victoria in the sames woods as Edward and she didn't know it?  That doesn't sound like her - maybe she was so focused on Bella she let her guard down? 

write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Keep writing!  Great stuff.   Wonder what happens when Bella goes shopping....hmm.,

really good. write more please!!

I loved it. I like the whole jacob is bad card. i want to see how charlie would react if say bella told him she called alice and them back here to get edward back because of what jacob has been doing to her. ... or something along those lines. My main curiosity is where will charlie place his loyality?

Ok now for the ""if i cant have you no one can" how does the rest of the pack feel about jake physically abusing bella, i mean they would know becuse of the mind link think?? right? and how far will this go?

Also what about the sex? baby or no baby? oh and i just kept thinking of the whole imprint thing ... poor baby NO jake please! I think you get what i mean. Ok that's it. please update soon. I love this stroy.

LOVE MAC!

Wow, Jake is definitely showing all symptoms of stalker abusive boyfriends who end up trying to kill their girlfriends and then themselves. AWESOME! I can't wait to see Edward get the beat down on Jacob and good luck keeping the dog away from Charlie! And pretty pretty please, don't kill Charlie. He's too much fun!

This is a great story, I enjoying it a lot. I really like how you portrayed Jacob, some people may not like it but I feel it fits with him being a werewolf. 

ready for more

Bella REALLY needs to tell everything to Charlie.

AH!!! I so love this story i dont know if i tell you that enough! I wait with baited breath for your next update, I wish i had this in a book and could just sit and loose myself in it. You have captured the characters so well and while reading this chapter i asked myself more that once, what if SM had delayed her writing and had Edward gone a little long how would things have played out? I cant wait to see where you are going with this, will there be a wedding and a baby, will Jacob try and redeem himself, will he die for his trasgressions against Bella .... OH I JUST CANT WAIT!!!!!

LOVE MAC!