Like the story, but bella should have never forgiven jake. sry. If you ever got beaten down physically and emotionally for years in a relationship or watch it happen and was powerless to stop it, you would understand then. Its not 'them' that needs forgiveness, its yourself. They can go 'F' themselves. Again, If it happened to you, you wouldn't have wrote what you did. I know you as writer just wanted a 'happy ending' all around, but you were wrong when you forced jake back into her life. If you can... change it. Much more realistic 'adult' version.

As per everything else. Tanya didn't need to be killed that part you did a good job on. But she seriously needed more than a punch!. That was Bella's moment to 'braid tanya's hair' [LMFAO!!!] and it was missed!. The highroad is pretty, but it makes for shitty unrealistic writing, and poor entertainment value.

Its good that Demetri wasn't a total douche. Points there!.

I liked Anna, Feel sorry for Jessica Stanley, Don't know why you made her dropout of college and settle for reservation life. Im not even a female and I know that they aren't just put here to cook and have babies. She was a promising student w/ an actual future, and i don't know how she can see all that's going on with the Cullens and not want some measure of success for herself. Now... what does she have to look forward too? They day quil gives up his wolf?; then what?. Her staying in college was what was need to really setup a 'home' and family, with real income.

I don't know WHY you did setup a better relationship w/ seth. He was the 'good guy'. smh.

I liked what you wrote and will be looking forward to your other stories.

Im glad that bella told them about the wolf senses. Its only payback for her telling the pack about the cullens.

I like the part where she told edward, that she got hit by jacob because she told him that she will always love edward.

Update POR FAVOR!!!!.

Author's Response:

HEY NOW... lol.

 

Always knew jake would try to 'take it' by force.

Seriously, Bella of course was right, Edward needs to stop lying to himself and her about 'his' definition of forever. Jacob may have been abusing her physically, but edward has the emotional toture down pact.

 I love the way bells stood up for what she wanted, and how she debated her views.

Finally, some disclosure. its about time she told them about the drama she was facing.

Edward is a true Fool. What.an.idiot!. A true cullen

#cullensareidiots.com

This is the jake that I always saw!. I knew the relationship would be JUST like this if these two ever got together. He was WAAYYY too pushy in its initation.

 

Jake could do no wrong in my dad’s eyes. He considered Jake a part of the family already. - bella

The reason charlie doesn't know jacob is beating on you is b/c you keep it a secret. (foolish) Please don't make 15 more chapters of this chick roling over!.

 

Just tell me that Edward will get SOME revenge against JaCob!

How can you leave it there?! I cant wait for an update, how often? Definitely the best fanfiction ive read. :) 

When is the next chapter? Can't wait! Sooo good

Ok love the story and now I want to see where it will end at.  PLEASE UPSATE SOON!!!!

Thoroughly enjoying! What a way to end this chapter! Looking forward to more bad Jake!