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Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 2
jesus christ, i just wrote you over thirty reviews! that's more than i wrote for all the other stories i've read put together. lol. little bit embarrassing, i'm gonna try to give a fuck tho.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 1
perfect song though
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 6
okay, still with u, but a bit weary. just please, please, please, don't let them be happy in love in three chapters, alright?! and i really hope jacob is in this? but i won't stop reading if he's not.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Chapter 6
oh my god she doesn't even answer his question! best thing you could ever do with that!
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 08:01 AM · On: Chapter 6
oh my god you with that paragraph of when he's apologizing to bella. you managed to do what stephenie meyer couldn't do in what like ten pages?
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 6
thank you god edward didn't argue with her for wanting a beer. i think that i might've stopped reading the story if that happened. lol but maybe not.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 6
oh my god she wants a beer. swoon. LOVE IT!
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
love how she's not hungry. people don't realize that when you the longer you go without eating, the less you want to eat and the harder it gets to eat. lol i probably sound totally anorexic, but i got insomnia and it's hard to eat when you can't sleep.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 6
lol i'm starting to think you could never disappoint me, it's weird, like things i thought i wouldn't like, i'm really likin. :)
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 6
lol maybe just a little crazy. oh and i haven't slept in a over twenty-four hours but please do not think that oh my god this girl only likes my story because she's crazy from sleep-deprivation! no, absolutely not. love this story. i have a case of insomnia. and twenty four hours without sleep is nothing to me, just start worrying if i get to three days. lol. nah i'll probably pass out right after i check you out.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 6
ok haven't finished the chapter yet, but as soon as i'm i'm gonna click on your name. i'm kinda scared to, don't wanna be disappointed, like if you have another story, which isn't i don't know how to explain it. annnyyyways, back to story.
i know i sound crazy. but i promise you, i'm not. just very impulsive.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:43 AM · On: Chapter 6
love that edward uses the word creepy! i don't even know why but love it!
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 6
love the paragraph that starts with it's broken. true love right there.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 6
she was cold again, all the progress of today obliterated. god don't you just love that word? obliterated. gaw. love that word. great line.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:35 AM · On: Chapter 6
lmfao would you, for the love of god, just stop following me. oh my god i think i love you.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:33 AM · On: Chapter 6
shut up! lol love love love when she tells him to shut up.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:29 AM · On: Chapter 5
last two paragraphs! LOVE IT!
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 5
how he'd always pulled away, rejected me while i laid everything i was bare before him. no words.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 5
love that she thinks he's lying and that the reaction would be wanting to get away from him. i think that that's very realistic.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 5
he was so heart-achingly beautiful. this paragraph.... hold on let me get a thesaurus............ dynamite and divine. i don't think i need to go on.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 5
don't tell me what to do. finally the exact same thing that she should've told him in the books countless times!
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 5
loved the pain pills!
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 5
there was no way to ignore it. or to get around it. lol, don't know if this is a jab to stephenie but i like it.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 5
i walked out of the kitchen and up the stairs again. end of that paragraph, bloody hell, that was so good im speaking british. i could just kiss you.
Reviewer: twilightroxhard (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2011 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
sorry lol meant the next three sentences.
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