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Reviews For Sins of the Father
Reviewer: Purrrrrrple (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Early Mornings and Sleepless Nights...

Love it plz update soon!!!

Reviewer: Disneyvampire (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Early Mornings and Sleepless Nights...

Love it, so far. We need more story so we can REALLY determine if we love  it or hate it...(heeheehee), that is just a way of saying, Please write more chapters. This looks to be a great read and I am looking forward to more of it. Post an new chapter soon, please? :o)

Excellent writing skills, a somewhat mysterious and murky plotline so far, (which is great, we don't want to knoe EVERYTHING right away) with just enough information that we understand and see what is going on in the lives of the characters.

I can sense BIG Edward moments coming sometime in the story! He and Bella...? This looks to be one of the more interesting stories here, so I am hoping for an update really soon.

Write on, my writing fanfic friend! We readers of this wonderful tale of yours are waiting for more! MORE! MORE! MORE!

Excellent story so far. I love it!

Disney Vampire

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: February 25, 2011 01:59 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Early Mornings and Sleepless Nights...

Looking forward to more

Please, no hook ups with Jake and Bella

 

Reviewer: SnowWhiteQueen (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2011 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 1 - Of Early Mornings and Sleepless Nights...

im going to give you a review sandwich: (something good, something that needs work, something good)

something good: i love how you really capture alice's bubbly side

something that needs work: there were areas that didn't seem to flow; for example, "I fought the urge to blurt out yes, but the words caught in my throat as she unveiled an impressive buffet..." there's just something there that doesn't seem to flow.

something good:definetly a good start to the story :)

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