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Reviewer: aimacullen (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2013 11:29 AM · On: Chapter 1

WRITE MORE GOD PLEASE OMG

Reviewer: rhaginglover (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2011 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 3

Please, please, please tell me you are going to continue with this awesome story. I am seriously hooked.

I'd love to see Rosie get a hold of Charlie. What is Bella doing outside? She was handcuffed and chained to the bed and now all of a sudden she's outside in the rain. Okay, I'm confused.

Waiting and hoping and praying for an update and explanation.

Thank you for sharing.

hugz

Reviewer: forevercounts (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2011 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 3

wow that was SOME cliffhanger! u cant do this to us!! u NEED to update!! oh my! poor bella, what happened? did she try to run? is that why they found her like this? god! so many questions...!

Reviewer: redauntie1 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

Crap what did her dad do to her.

Reviewer: Karsha (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 1

Pppppplllllllllllleeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeee update soon!! *gives puppy dog eyes*

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Reviewer: OonaCullen (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2011 02:17 PM · On: Chapter 3

Just found this story, so hope you update soon, it's very good.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2011 05:15 PM · On: Chapter 3

please update soon i rea;;ylike this one

Reviewer: anothertwilighter (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2011 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 3

I really like this story. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2011 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 1

oh please update soon

Reviewer: Borax (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 12:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

Nice chapter!

You made a very chilling description of the situation with Charlie, and his psychological as well as physical abuse.

I don't quite get how Emmett and Rosalie, supposedly watching over Bella, could miss that she had been tied up to her father's bed, but I'm glad they found her, even if it's in that state and in the woods. Did Bella manage to escape before her father got back to her? I do hope so, now the Cullens can move her to their house and never need to let her go back to Charlie's.

It's ironic that Rosalie's plan to get to know Bella better and ultimatelly save her backfires and gets Bella in such a bad situation with her father. Hopefully, things will be better now!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: krayana (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

This is fatastic! please do keep writing :)  I like how you're writing Rosalie; I imagine she could be more like this in cannon if she weren't quite so bitter/didn't cling to the past quite so hard.

Reading Bella's after school/getting home routine was brutal, topped only by what happened when Charlie, the bastard, got home.

this is my first review here on this site, so I'm not sure if I'm doing this quite right, but I wanted to let you know how much I liked the story.

Reviewer: Borax (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 2

Very nice chapter. I really liked Edward's interactions with Bella–the way he took care of her was very tender, despite what he says about not wanting to be with her. I also believe that Alice has started to suspect something, too. After all, she isn't stupid, even if she didn't react at the clumbsiness thing.

There were two small things that bothered me, but they're minor so don't worry. When you write Edward's POV, sometimes I don't get the feeling that he's reading people's mind (for example, you described all the changes in expression with Rosalie, but I believe he would note the thoughts behind the expressions more). It's hard to do, though, because it's hard to make a coherent storyline when you have people's thoughts popping in.

And then, on a very personal note, I don't like it when Rosalie calls Edward "Ed". On the other hand, we never heard Rosalie interact with Edward much in the books, so maybe she does call him that, even if we never see it.

I realize my "negative point" paragraphs are longer than the positive, but that's just so because I want to be clear and hopefully you won't take it badly. I really like this story!

Reviewer: Borax (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 1

Very interesting start. The abusive Charlie isn't the most original, but I like your take on Rosalie and how both she and Esme reacted to Alice's information. Rosalie is a lot less self absorbed as in canon, and it's really nice to hear the story from her POV.

And I agree with Rosalie, if Alice hadn't been prying in Edward and Bella's future, they wouldn't have noticed anything was amiss. Of course, there's Edward's stalking, but if Bella's smell hadn't been so alluring to her, would he have done that? If her mind had been open, would he have figured out what would have happened?

I'm off to the next chapter!

Reviewer: pinklady34 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 09:01 PM · On: Chapter 3

wow...that is just crazy!  but how did bella get in a pile of leaves?  and where is renee?

Reviewer: lanigirl95687 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 3

well i cant wait to see what happens next 

Reviewer: PPV123 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

Update soon!  The cliffie is great!

Reviewer: JennyS3637 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 3

Great story so far! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 3

Omg! What did he do to her???? Well at least Jacob isn't all lovey dovey over her.....Charlie is a sadistic sick piece of sh!t!!!!! Please let Rose and Emmett just take her away and to their house, she can't take any more...

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 3

Jesus, Charlie's scary.

Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 02:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

Really intriguing to have Rosalie champion Bella in this fic. I'm enjoying her having a more pronounced part.

Reviewer: JavaMasta (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 3

I really like your portrayal of Rose in this story, and can understand why she feels a bond with Bella.  Makes you wonder how far Charlie has to go before the courts can actually do something.

Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 3

UPDATE ASAP!

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 11:48 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh, deary me. Charlie sure is beyond butthole in this story. He really needs to get his just desserts.

Reviewer: delilah69 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 3

will they be able to help her? will she spea out against her abuse? how could anyone do that to a child, to another human being? and why is she outside freezing to death!?

Reviewer: IssaBissa (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 2

An interesting story so far! I am looking forward to reading more soon!

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