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Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 09:08 PM · On: Chapter 19
Yeah an update!!! Great chapter!!!
Reviewer: DazzledLamb (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 19
OMG I've missed this story!! Yay! Go Bad Ass Bella!
Reviewer: buffylvr (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:30 PM · On: Chapter 19
Are u freaking kidding me! I wait months (well maybe not months) for an update and u leave me with a cliffhanger like that!!! Are u freaking kidding me?
This is one of my fav stories and I really hope there aren't anymore cliffhangers like that one (unless u start updating sooner).
Ok, I'm calm now. Please update I really love this story, especially because of the way u integrate the Volturi.
So keep it up, and quicker updates please.
Reviewer: superstarrh (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:10 PM · On: Chapter 19
Okay, now I must go back and reread the previous chapters but happy to see you back. You should make your notebook sparkly so you will never lose it!
Great job...blah blah blah. You've heard it already, you know I love it so hope you get to update again by my birthday (Nov 4th so you have some time!)
Jaime
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ohhhhh nice cliffie Marve! And WOW it's good to have ya back here!! Can't wait for more!!!
Reviewer: AcidAngel (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 18
So much tension! I just read straight through and I'm really, really enjoying this fic. Hopefully you are still updating it? Your writing is gorgeous.
Reviewer: dracomusca (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 18
Awww, cripes! I was so hoping this was complete. I should have checked.
Please don't stop there.
It's great.
Reviewer: Rochelle Allison (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 03:12 PM · On: Chapter 18
oh my. this story had been recc'd to me a few times but i finally sat down and read it today. brilliant! unique. i loved how bella was changed...with the lovemaking, edward naming the 3 things he'd promised... i love the way you write....i had known that i enjoyed your writing from reading your other stories but this one is so different. i'm just really impressed and inspired. i look forward to seeing what happens.
oh, and, i'm glad edward and bella are really together. they feel genuine..no angry hissy fits or overcoddling. it's a good medium...it rings true.
Reviewer: jace (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 18
Ack!
Seriously, ACK!!! I find this story, read it all at once, and you leave it here????
Umm, okay, I'm just going to sit here hitting refresh until you post again.
Amazing story, great imagery, scary Volturi, twists and turns that make me think. Really nice work.
Reviewer: searchingforstories (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 18
Hate you. hate that your so good. Hate that you have me addicted....again. Stop with your treacherous mind. You are too good. I must back away from this addiction.
Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2009 05:04 AM · On: Chapter 18
*beats you with a stick* Goddang it. Why haven't you updated? *cries*
Reviewer: missloonylovegood (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2009 01:11 PM · On: Chapter 5
Okay... I just started on you fic... But this line made me laugh almost hysterically... Just from the mental image.
I know it means producer, but what the hell is being produced? Is Edward suddenly investing in seedy Italian porn?
An image of him with a mustache, hairy chest, open shirt and gold chains flashes across my face and I almost – almost – giggle. Ridiculous.
I hope you have more lines like that ^.^
Reviewer: lostinthought (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2009 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 18
oh my god, this story is so captivating. i need more!
Reviewer: Devlin (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 18
I love a trixxy Alice, and I love a Bella that takes charge, and I love the clusterfuck train of thought that is Bella's. And I love you.
Reviewer: Kyrene (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2009 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 18
I don't know what it is about this narrator, but I love it. Sounds like something I would narrate in a way. Something about this story is very appealing and quite addicting. I can't put my finger right on it yet but it's captivating. Especially in the very beginning. Edward's responses to everything and Bella's narration when she thinks he doesn't love her anymore. So...not pathetic. Edward doesn't love me therefore I return to the cliff, logical and not whiney. I loved that.
And Edward is in a bit of a bind....Because wouldn't Edward be in more danger than Bella? They want Bella...I suppose the question is who they want more. I have a feeling it's Bella. Although I have one critisicm...Aro should be cooler. Kidding kidding, I just love Aro. And his snarl wasn't what I expecting. Marcus was perfect, hope to see more. Very worried for Rosalie and Emmett, I hope they're doing just fine.
Reviewer: radioActive (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2009 09:47 PM · On: Chapter 18
enjoying this...thanks.
Reviewer: hus8 (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
What an engrossing plotline!! I can't wait to read what happens next
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Chapter 18
Noooo! You cannot leave it like that! This is an awful cliffie!
I need more. RIGHT NOW!!!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:27 AM · On: Chapter 17
Bella no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Chapter 16
Oh how sad :( I didn't realise that Marcus never knew the fate of his wife until Edward. It makes an interesting twist.
And I hope you arenae sick of my ramblings. I don't know if you even read the reviews, but this is just me rambling on trying to figure out what's going on in your mind. Once I'm caught up to everyone else, I think I might just have to head over to the forum and find your thread.
Author's Response: I do read the reviews, and I love your ramblings! Thanks so much. My thread is mostly dead now since my posting has been so sporadic though :(
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 15
Ok now I know why Marcus is there. He is out for revenge? Or maybe not revenge but perhaps prevention is a better word. He doesn't what happened to him to happen to Edward?
Oh you are killing me marve!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 14
LOL "the walk of shame" why do I suddenly find myself thinking of the classic "Porkies"?
And things are beginning to make sense to me....
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 13
K this shocked me. I found this to be a very cute chapter :)
I liked the playfulness of Bella's first lesson to fight.
Hmm deep down it scares me though as you are really evil and twisted.... I'm not sure what you are up to.
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 08:09 AM · On: Chapter 12
Wow, I hadn't thought of that, the whole "if he hadn't left...." scenarios. What a domino effect that one decision had...
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:57 AM · On: Chapter 11
I'm captivated, still loving it although this tangled web you have weaved has me trapped and I have no clues where this is going, but I keep spinning, getting more and more tangled....
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