Yay! Marve has a new fic! You know I totally googled produttore. Dying to see where you are going with this.

Ok so I'm confused. Intrigued. Curious. Drawn in...and confused! I have so many questions - have all the events in NM and Eclipse occurred? What altered so that Edward refused to change her? Whats up with the lack of physical contact? I would ask why Bella is so insecure and so quick to believe that Edward no longer loves her but I think the refusal to change her and the lack of physical contact kind of answers that question. What are the Cullen's hiding from Bella? If Bella is still human why isn't she at College? (So I'm not actually expecting answers - thats the point of the story! - more like pointing out the things that really caught my attention).

Google tells me produttore means producer in Italian and that has me even more interested to see what it means in the context of this plot and where you will go with this story. The idea of exploring the consequences of not changing Bella especially on her and Edward's relationship has me hooked and I'm looking forward to the next update already! (I need something to tide me over seeing as Twilight isn't released until Christmas in NZ!!!).

 Thanks for sharing :)

Author's Response:

K, without giving too much away...

Everything from NM to Eclipse has happened, and then more that will be explained.  The next few questions I can't answer without giving away too much.  Bella is insecure because she is true to cannon Bella (New Moon).  And produttore means producer, but is slang for writer.

 I underestimated y'alls ability to use google.  I got all sneaky on altavista.  Now I have one irrelevant chapter.

Also, hello NZ!!!  What's the weather like there?

I'm so confused!  But that's not something new.

For some reason I thought Produttore meant "Product" or "Producer"? in Italian, but I'm probably way off base.  I dunno.  I'd like to think it's someone's name, and that it's not what Bella is thinking.

I'm sticking with this story like white on rice until I get confirmation that Edward and Alice aren't doing something hinky together.

Author's Response:

produttore does mean producer, but it's slang for writer.  I have typed that so many times tonight!  And I'm glad everyone is confused.  Heck, I am too and I've written the whole thing. 

And also... ew.

There is no Ed and Alice.

 

Ew.

Oh fascinating!  I can't wait to see what comes next!  LOL

Very intrigued but also confused--although i think I'm supposed to be. Produttore means "producer" in Italian, right? (I used google.) So the Volturi are involved... keep it coming!

Author's Response: produttore does mean producer, but it's slang for writer.  Can't say anything else without giving the story away.

Ohhh this sounds interesting!!!! Time for me to look up a word!! LOL. Love it when you write marve!!!