I'm not even going to attempt to guess what is going on here. I love your writing so I can't wait to see where you go with this. *sits on the edge of her seat in anticipation and enjoys the ride*

AaaaaarrghhhH!  Cliff hanger.  You were right, we are definitely in the meat of it now.... great twist that I didn't see coming.  I can't wait for the next chapter.  Please update as soon as humanly possible!

What the hell?!?!  I am dying to know what the heck is up with this!!  ARGH!

Alright, you have my complete and utter attention.  Just keep it coming dear. :)

I'm so glad you're doing another story because you know I'll read anything you post.  You are the queen!

What I find very canon here is the playing off of Bella's established insecurities and Edward's typical God complex of "I love you and do what's best."

 That being said, typically this Bella can be irksome to me, but here she actually has gained my sympathy. Perhaps it's because Edward isn't just leaving...he leaves and comes back and has odd tendencies that cause him to leave Bella hanging.

I really want to ask what's going on, but I refuse. I want to read as it comes.

My fav part of this chap:

“Bella it’s not like it seems,” Alice says as she follows me around the kitchen, getting in the way of my hunt for chocolate.  “Please don’t make that decision.  Please.  You’ll really regret it.”

 

And I blush because I’ve just decided that the best way to get over a man is to get under another one, and she probably just saw me wincing under Jacob’s skin.

Oh so now he's going to ALASKA??? WTF??  Stupid Edward.

And Alice, come on!  Now she's staying at home to babysit?  I just don't get why they don't just tell Bella what the deal is.  It better be good... 

At any rate, I'm not sure who had the bright idea to take Bella to Italy for the honeymoon but I'm thinking that was a big mistake....

i love the story update fast!

It's really different from your previous works, but enjoyable as much (as far as angst is enjoyable to read ;)

Gah, Marve you're killing me! But in a really good way- so please carry on.

I can't believe that these people, who claim to love her, would let her suffer like this while he runs like this.  And they haven't consumated yet?  WTF is his deal! 

 So I read the summary and I thought it was alluding to an Edward/Bella story and I was like 'What?' But because its you I thought that there has to be more than meets the eye. So already I'm completely intrigued and my heart is just breaking for Bella. Please update again soon.

I am so intrigued by this story.  I am both anxious and eager to see how it progresses.  Keep it coming, please!