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Reviewer: lobsters4ever (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 4
This is such a good story. I am completely sucked in. I am eager to see where this goes. Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: obsidian (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 4
ack! what the hell is this all about?! i love this story though. it's so different from all the other normal angsty stories that i'm kinda sick of. write more and PLEASE get to the plot faster than New Moon pace!
Reviewer: Bailing1521 (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2008 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 4
Why is a tortured Edward so delish? Sigh...I do really feel bad for Bella, but my curiosity is getting the better of my emotions and I find myself craving details, details, and more details! No theories. I think it would exhaust my brain trying to figure out the significance of Edward's change in eye color and what he means when he says he is being forced... Excellent ability to draw in your readers, btw. I know you have a huge fanbase--and deservedly so. There is just something really captivating about your writing. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Reviewer: Willow (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
Lovely. Just ... lovely. I'm astounded by your eloquence. :)
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 25, 2008 10:05 PM · On: Chapter 4
WHAT. THE. HELL. I am so off kilter reading this fic. Must be a small tad of what Bella would feel not knowing which way is up. When I read it, I feel like I am in that black water, being tossed around and not being able to figure out where the surface went. I cannot wait till my head breaks through the waves!!
Reviewer: ClumsyBeyondBelief (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
what does Produttore mean?
Reviewer: mikrro (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 4
jesus, marve... you are the queen of cliff hangers. keep those chapters coming! who is making edward feed on humans? and why are none of the other cullens filling bella in?
Reviewer: kelseymarie33 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 4
WHAT THE HELL! Gah.! I am soo confused. I even tried to look up produttore on dictionary.com. Please update soon!!!
Reviewer: venomousgal (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
Interesting....I am curious to see where this ends up
Reviewer: OzzpupRocks (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 4
What does produttore mean? I looked it up and it said producer. Is that right? Otherwise keep the updates coming. I really like it.
Reviewer: Vullen (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 07:40 PM · On: Chapter 4
No. No. Unexceptable. I AM SO CONFUSED. *cries* THIS MAKES MY BRAIN CRY. Please, please make sense. Soon. I love it though, even though I am clueless.
Reviewer: KissinCullens (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 4
I am soooo confused!! I have no idea where this is going and that is rare. Your story actually produces an emotional response from me and i cant put a name to it?!?! Even my body is confused =D
Reviewer: thebluejayway (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 07:08 PM · On: Chapter 4
Love it! It sounds just like something Edward would do with a little bit of force....the whole denying affection thing I can't wait for more!
Reviewer: missjanelle (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 06:47 PM · On: Chapter 4
oh man. i have no idea whats going on! more soon! i want bella to knock some sense into edward stat!
Reviewer: dazzledbride (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 4
GAh! I love this story so much and I'm so happy you're updating frequently, but seriously WHAT THE EFF is the damned Vulturi doing to this poor boy?!
Reviewer: badgergirl1999 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 06:02 PM · On: Chapter 4
Marve, I love this. It's so unique and different and I just can't wait to see where it is going...even if I'm not clever enough to have a prediction. I have about thirty million different maybes floating around in my head...but I like that I will likely be wrong with what I am hypothesizing. Yay!
Reviewer: Avalonia (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 06:00 PM · On: Chapter 4
I have no idea what the hell is going on. And I love that because generally I can smell a plot twist a mile away. Love the way you wrote this, how realistic Bella's reaction was and Edward's pain. I don't want to be annoying and say update soon but seriously...update soon. ;D
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 4
Hmm. Lots of hints here, obviously. I've got some ideas but nothing SURE. But now I'm starting to feel a little sorry for Edward (and the impossible becomes possible after all)!
Reviewer: Katrina (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:21 PM · On: Chapter 4
Yet another awesome yet mind boggling update. I am amazed at your ability to wring emotion out of a scene -Edward's anguish is so palpable that I literally had a burning sensation in my stomach from the tension while reading this chapter! Hmmm. So a little more is revealed...and I'm updating my guess: We know how interested Aro was in both Edward's talent and his control in NM, so I'm guessing that when Edward went to the Volturi to plead for Bella's humanity they decided to use it as a way of controlling him. So now he is being made to turn people (amongst other tasks they want carried out) in exchange for Bella's safety. If this is the case then Bella will still be furious because if she was changed the Volturi wouldn't have leverage over Edward and dammit she wants to be changed! Lol. Well thats my current theory at least - I'm not expecting any comment as to its accuracy its just fun to speculate!! Thanks once again for the super speedy updates :)
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 4
What does it meeeeeeeean??? Jeez I'm impatient. Thank you so much for the brisk update schedule...I think I'd go nuts if I had to wait too long between fixes--er--I mean new chapters.
Reviewer: ashtong21 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 4
love it!! volturi maybe...? idk..but keep going!
Reviewer: sherryg (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 4
Wow! This story is amazing!!! I can't wait for more!! I literally am on the edge of my seat. I was holding my breath. I hope the next chapter's up soon!!!!!
Reviewer: Jencrane (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
This is really interesting. I am dying to see where this is going to go. Even if it was crap I would still read it because I worship at the alter of Marve. But you are an amazing writer. Update soon.
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 04:27 PM · On: Chapter 4
Bahhhh keep going!!
Reviewer: TaylorLynn (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2008 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 1
you just literally killed my theory. seriously. I'm sure all will be revealed soon enough though. Glorious chapter! Keep'em comin'!
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