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Reviewer: casket4mytears (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 8
Confusing? I'd say! But beautifully done and definitely intriguing!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
Hmmmm.... OK? More.. I need to understand.
Reviewer: tigerlily3489 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 8
Yes that was definatelty confusing... in fact the story so far has been one huge enigma! Please, I'm begging, give us a clue as to what's going on! Update again soon please, and bring more of that angsty Edward with you :)
Reviewer: xcmuchip (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
These are waaaay too short. You love to torture us. This is a great story. I hope the daily updates continue.
Reviewer: Vullen (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 8
so..they are on esme isle, and she has the ability to read minds. eh?
Reviewer: ashtong21 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 06:57 PM · On: Chapter 8
it actually wasnt all that confusing. but it was so good! I added this story to my favorites...update soon!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2008 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 8
OK, I am getting that Bella must have inherited some form of Edwards mind-reading... but why can't Esme smell her? What are Carslile and Alice in Voltairre? WHAT THE HELL!?!? You are driving me crazy, but not so crazy as to abandon your great plotline!! ARGH!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2008 06:51 PM · On: Chapter 7
WHAT?!?!? JASPER?!?! EXCUSE ME?!?!? You are not screwing around with anything are you??? I am so confused!
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 06:31 PM · On: Chapter 8
I love how mysterious you're keeping this. Awesome work!
Reviewer: zess (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 8
That was...disorienting, which is probably appropriate. :)
Reviewer: kaimelar (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow, what a thrilling chapter. I love how you can just feel the confusion radiating out of Bella, how we don't learn what's going on until she does. Well done. I'm starting to wonder why Rosalie and Emmett took Jasper! Ack! You are the master of suspense in this story. Everytime a question is answered, twenty more pop up! Great job!
Reviewer: Kim620 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 8
You keep sucking me in further and further. Excellent chapter. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: amandasaurus (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 05:09 PM · On: Chapter 8
Really good chapter, update soon?
Reviewer: XShear (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 1
Slightly confused... but beautifully written. You put my writing to shame. <3's.
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 8
Another excellent chapter. Poor Esme. :)
Reviewer: sarcasticcheese (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 8
Updates to this story make me very, very happy. And I missed the last one, so I was really confused when I read this one. But then I went back and saw Chapter 7 and was even happier. If I haven't told you lately, ilu and your stories sfm. Seriously.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow. I love this crytic, engrossing, hypnotic story. I need more. I NEED it!!!!
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 05:01 PM · On: Chapter 8
Wow. Ok, I do question why he said "It worked, You're alive".... Another well written chapter! Definitely needing more!
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 8
Yay! Vampire Bella is here! I'm guessing they're on Isle Esme, which makes sense. But wow, Bella's different. Well, we knew she'd be different somehow, but she's really different it seems. I'm wondering if that's Bella's power, being all warm and non-smelly and calm, and all. But she also hears thoughts (poor Bella, I wouldn't wish that power on anybody). I can't wait to see what happens next, but the way this chapter ended I'm afraid we're not going to get any celebratory vampire sex now. After all the waiting Bella has done, it doesn't seem fair!
Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 8
OOh! Cryptic! I love it!! So she has his skill - which is what the volturi wanted when Edward changes anyone? Does he know that he has done that with Bella? I hope you appreciate - I have buggered my eyes wtih Dettol - so everything is blurred & painful to look at - but I had to read this! The tension!!! GAH! & when she first heard him, I was screwing my eyes up trying to focus, to read their reunion. My heart melted a little at their reunion. He was so desperate for her. Aw, gorg chap babes, gorg!! Yet still cryptic. & I wonder what the sig of Esme's thoughts & Q's are. . . Shame they won't get a chance to have any Island fun on Isle Esme. Thank you! Em. xxxx
Reviewer: AndImaVirgo (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
This story is fricking fantastic, kudos!
Reviewer: diamondtopaz (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 8
So I'm guessing that Bella got some of Edward's power because she can...hear voices?!? You're right, this is confusing, but I still love this! Please update!
Reviewer: stavanger1 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 8
Nope, not too confusing. I like it. She has a cool gift, doesn't she? Great job!!!
Reviewer: jakeward (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
Well, didn't see THAT coming! LOL, love it all the same! I see car washing in my future.....lol.
Reviewer: angel4ever (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 7
WHAT THE FRACK?
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