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Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 06:58 PM · On: Chapter 15
wow this is getting good. didnt expect marcus to show up and speak with bella. cant wait to read more!!
Reviewer: TaylorLynn (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 15
I predicted that Catherine Hardwicke would get booted for New Moon. I predicted Virginia Tech would beat Boston College and Florida State would beat Alabama. (I should have placed some money on it, but alas... I didn't) And for the first time with your stories, I predicted Marcus would should up. But it was probably obvious. lol I'm on a roll, I think. It's pretty sick that Aro actually killed Marcus' mate. I think instead of acting like a vegetable, I would have kicked his ass...
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2008 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 15
OMG! I am so excited to see where this goes from here!! A double cross or a double-double cross?!?!?
Reviewer: booksgalore (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 03:58 PM · On: Chapter 15
ooooh I love the addition of Marcus
Reviewer: IntoTheTwilight (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 15
Oooo interesting. I'm looking forward to what happens next.
Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 15
Ohhh!!! You are not fair...I was so excited to find this update and low & behold, the biggest cliff-hanger ever...dangling me over the edge of curiosity...Cruel, cruel, cruel...but in your customary fashion you have completely bewildered me with your magnificent story telling...can't wait for the update!!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 15
Yikes! And don't worry about slow updates, it's fine not treating often.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 15
Yikes! And don't worry about slow updates, it's fine not treating often.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 15
Frustrating. Fascinating. I need more!!! Its so intoxicating!!!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 01:43 PM · On: Chapter 15
Yeah, I read Marcus' story on Stephaniemeyer.com, its pretty twisted. Aro is really an evil man. Killing his own sister to try to keep Marcus around is just wrong.
Reviewer: GothicTemptress (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 15
Such a great story, with interesting twists and turns!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 15
Hmmmm.... MORE!
Reviewer: Devlin (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 15
I love that after resolving the 'edward doesnt love me anymore' and the 'edward wont change me', everything is still screwed, because it always has been. I also love spine-ful 'Would you like to enlighten me?' Bella.
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 15
Marcus, in white? Interesting, I can only imagine him gorgeous. Stupid, annoying, circle-talking vampire. I loved that! Now my boss is looking at me like I am crazy cos i am laughing at no one(well she thinks). I cant wait for more!
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 01:15 PM · On: Chapter 15
ohhhhh didn't think it was possible to get MORE interesting! I mean seriously it was super interesting before...but now...WOW... SUPER anxiously waiting for more!
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2008 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 14
I can only hope that they can find a way to get thru all of this. How is Jasper holding up? The others? I cant wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: infernalheart (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 14
With all the other drama going on I kind of forgot these two have barely consumated their marriage. Sweet B&E chapter!
Reviewer: Cavriola (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 03:35 PM · On: Chapter 14
Captivating. Well-written. I like Bella's voice, the flow of the narrative. The plot did eventually make sense, as promised (though not knowing what's going on became tiring), and is pretty inventive. I still don't understand why Bella is such an unusual kind of vampire, but I liked the sound of "unlife threatening situation". On a side note, yaks don't even live in Africa, do they? Which would, of course, be fine if the excuse was supposed to be transparent from the beginning.
Reviewer: Chandler (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 14
Fabulous, as usual. Marve, your a warped, eccentric genius. Can't wait til you post again.
Reviewer: McKenzieMac (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 14
Uh oh. That doesnt bode well for our young hero and heroine.
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 14
what happens next?!?!?!?!? Marve for reals this story is just so interesting! You are seriously keeping me on my toes!!! i can't get enough!
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 14
Oh. My. God. Could things BE any more tragic for them? The visit from Volterra should be interesting (and scary). Thanks for posting and as always, I look forward to more.
Reviewer: limona (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 14
I've been meaning to start this one for a while...And I can now officially said, I'm hooked.
Reviewer: xcmuchip (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 14
I love this story. I wish the chapters weren't so short. Can't wait to see what Bella can do.
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 14
Wow. Fascinating. You still have me on the edge of my seat!!!
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