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Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 10
Did I review this one already?
My alerts are shitting me over.
& I have millions of these chapters to catch up on!
Which is bloody marvellous for me. :D
Thanks for udpating! - sorry I missed them - all!
Love ya.
xxxxx
Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 02:06 PM · On: Chapter 10
Did I review this one already?
My alerts are shitting me over.
& I have millions of these chapters to catch up on!
Which is bloody marvellous for me. :D
Thanks for udpating! - sorry I missed them - all!
Love ya.
xxxxx
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 02:04 PM · On: Chapter 17
Holy shiiiiiiiit (it´s ok to swear here, right? lol) Stupid Aro, stupid Jane, awesome Marve....I am literally on the edge of my seat, great chapter!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 02:01 PM · On: Chapter 17
So now he is going to take Bella??!!
Reviewer: Pastiche Pen (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 17
Ah, no! If it's good for Aro... My lingering thought is where is creepy Cauis lurking in this mess? I liked the reference to the Great Gatsby, even though I kind of hated the book (gasp, I know, I'm think I'm the only one right?) because I'm pretty sure Bella would have loved the book...
*Can you give me that?” I would give him anything.*
Those lines made me get all blinky eyed with the cuteness.
So, anyway, you rock and stuff.
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 17
Not a cliffie!!!!!
I need more of this story!
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 17
that.... was confusing... but i think i like it?
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 12:04 PM · On: Chapter 17
Dang it. It only took like 2 minutes for Bella to reveal herself. Can't wait to see what happens...
Reviewer: Tiggrmommi (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 17
Ruh Roh............dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuun.......
Reviewer: iwantedwardtobemine (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 11:41 AM · On: Chapter 17
Shit Bella, you should have stayed out of this. Well its not like they wouldnt have found out anyways. I cant wait to see if Bella gets to kick some ancient vamp ass! :D
Reviewer: jakeward (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 11:40 AM · On: Chapter 17
Oh no! What did she do?! Didn't he basically tell her to not act all immortal!? eeek. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Obsessedcullen (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 1
So far interesting. Excited to see where this goes.
Reviewer: silly sad sarah twilighted (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 17
too short OMG not fair. Sniffle I love your story and hope to read more real real soon!!!!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 17
Okay, this chapter was entirely too short. Need more! (enjoyed it nonetheless btw)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 10:25 AM · On: Chapter 17
Wow . More. Please More.
Reviewer: angel4ever (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 16
ugh. bb. this is still so good. I hate that you have had RL fail, but I feel you are challenging yourself here and i love it. You, as always, make me so happy.
Reviewer: Itz193 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 16
UPDATE! UPDATE! This is good!
Reviewer: southern cross (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 16
uh so that was a completely unfair and teh hot ending. love marcus' story. more assertive edward pretty, yummy please?!
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 16
Oh, the drama...it was so short though. :( Now I'm starting to get it. But I'm sorry you had to struggle through lately. Life certainly can = fail.
I'm pleasantly surprised that Marcus is one of the good guys.
Thanks for posting dear and keep it coming as much as possible. :)
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 16
This is getting good. keep writing
Reviewer: Sumsums (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 16
MORE!this is very good!
Reviewer: xcmuchip (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 16
OOOO! So bad to leave it there! Next chapter...hurry!
Reviewer: radiant_being73 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 12:15 AM · On: Chapter 16
Fantastic Update!!! I can't wait to see what happens next!!
Reviewer: Saphie1990 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 16
DUH DUN DUH!!!! Wow I just read all 16 chapters and I gotta say this story is very very very different from what I thought it was going to be. I love it!!!! Please update soon!
Reviewer: LovelyLola (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 16
Ok I'm caught up now and LOVING this story! I'm so glad I finally got a chance to read it. Cannot wait for your next update :) I actually have a question...Since Bella can hear Edwards thoughts...does that mean that she is constantly hearing them? or does it just happen every so often? Because she hasn't mentioned it much and when they are talking and she is waiting impatiently for him to continue with whatever he is trying to say, I figured maybe she could just hear what he was thinking... I don't even know if what I just said made sense lol
Author's Response: It does make sense, and it's something I'm working on trying to build. She's kinda getting flashes of everyone's thoughts. She's got a weaker version of his power and she doesn't really know how to work it yet. It'll get clearer as time goes on!
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