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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 10
Why is Jasper in a cage? Where is Alice? And why doesn't Bella feel the need to feed? Can she still eat human food? And why is she lying to Edward?
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:34 AM · On: Chapter 9
Wow... (sorry I have no words)
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:27 AM · On: Chapter 8
Well I'm glad you warned me cos I sure am confused as hell.
She's changed, but she's not? Is she somehow a half-breed? She has to be, how else would he say "You're alive?"
Oh you are an evil genius with your mind games, you know that right?
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oooooh too much too much.
Finally! I'm glad that Bella and Edward finally got around to bumping uglies ;) and I liked that this was the point he decided to change her.
But how evil can you be? No post coital hugging? And now, as Bella begins to change she knows her family is in danger? And who will go and who will stay.
You're killing me marve!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Chapter 6
What? My theory was right? Or are you about to pull the rug out from under me?
Another well written chapter..... movin on...
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 5
Well crap! Now that you have Bella thinking along the same lines as me, and I know how sick and twisted you are I know my theories are wrong!
Damnit all to hell! Now I need to start again and my brain hurts!
Arrggggghhhh, you are making me nuts! Again!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh hell. You have made me an addict. I hate that I haven't figured it out.
But my latest theory is that the Volturi are making him change others, trying to breed someone that has the same abilities of edward...right?
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow, I wasn't expecting that! So God complex and red eyes huh?
What did Edward agree to do for the Volturi that would keep Bella safe?
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 06:55 AM · On: Chapter 2
Holy shit marve!
I think you need to put a wee disclaimer at the top of your story when it's chapter you shouldn't really be reading at work because it's going to break your heart and then folk are going to look at you like you have lost it for sobbing for no reason.
And you owe me a box of hankies!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 06:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
Hmmm, very interesting beginning. I fell in love with you when I read ladders and just had to keep on going.
Yet again you have suckered me into your mind games. And I need to read more.
What a strange word to use. I know it's italian but producer? manufacturer? cause? How did you mean the word?
Arrrggh you are killing me...again...and it's only the first bloody chapter.
I hate you! well ok I don't but it felt good to say it....
Reviewer: Siamecho (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Chapter 18
I like this story! Can hardly wait for the next update :)
Reviewer: MyCullen893 (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 18
ahhh you have indeed returned. Ive missed you. its a good story and my heart was sad when it wasnt updated....buuuttt not that its back..im totally elated!! whoot whoot!!:) im very happy. I cant wait to see what Bella does next. Update soon please!! =D
Reviewer: Melolabel (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 18
oooh mysterious. Can't wait to find out what happens...
Reviewer: tiffanyanne3 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 18
Hooray for the return of marve! I still don't have a clue about what's going to happen here. But I sure have missed me some awesomeness!
Reviewer: blue2185 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 18
hmmm i wonder what caius power is? do you know how to pronounce his name? lol cant wait to read more. this is one of my favorites!!
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 01:13 PM · On: Chapter 18
Welcome back! I have missed this story. I can't wait to read what happens next!
Reviewer: Nissa (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 12:37 PM · On: Chapter 18
Tibicle Bella. She trys to save everyone else. I'm interested to see what happens though.
Reviewer: ashtong21 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 18
WHAT???!!! if i was edward i would be like heck no! you're not going anywhere with him!!
haha i wouldve been so pissed off if you wouldve left us w/ this cliffhanger for like a month...lol update soon!
Reviewer: historicvampirelover (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 18
WHOA
First of all, worth the wait.
Second of all, SO SHORT! Just enough to tantalize, and then it's over :(
I missed you! Update soon please?
Reviewer: Chiefco34 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 18
Oh. My. Gawd! This is getting soooooo good. It has been a long time, but I don't care as much as long as you keep posting and getting through it. So are we going to find out what Caius' "talent" is? I'm dying to know now. :)
More. Soon. Please?!
Reviewer: Morrigan728 (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 18
OK, you know I have been faithful in loving this story, simply for the intrigue - but I am starting to feel like I am trapped in one great big episode of Lost. More confusion, more layers, no real answers. I think I am going to give up reading this until it is complete. I am sure you are headed somewhere wonderful, but I am not good at having patience.
Reviewer: Itz193 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 06:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
I wanna know what happens next, please update soon. And where is Marcus' help?
Reviewer: PawntoQueen (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 04:30 AM · On: Chapter 18
I wonder what she has up her sleeve..?
Reviewer: Emmy (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 18
Damn Marve... I still don't have a freaking scooby!!!
But great chapter... Loved it! So great to have you back.
I really liked her wanting to be protected, when she despised it before...
Hope your christmas & new year were fabbio.
Love ya
Emmy
XXXX
Reviewer: MyBrownEyes (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 18
I'm so glad your back! I've missed this story, but UGH!...a cliff hanger! So it seems Caius has a secret power no one know about...hmmm? And Aro still can't hear her thoughts...and Jasper and Alice are working for them, but maybe not it seems like! You seriously have me screaming at my computer screen right now! I'm intrigued to see where your going with this! Please update soon!
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