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Reviewer: hayleyhoo (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 09:51 AM · On: Epilogue

Absolutely Loved This So Much ^_^ such a sweet ending :D x



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, hayleyhoo!

Thanks! I so enjoyed having you along with me.  Glad you liked the ending; I had fun with it. :)

Thank you for reading and your wonderful reviews! I so appreciated them!

LJ

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 09:39 AM · On: Epilogue

So about 30 years later and Sam is still phasing?  Who is in his pack?  I'm just courious....sorry! lol

I loved the story, thank you so much for sharing it with us.  I will miss it! 

Take care, Dixie

P.S. Are you writing another anytime soon?



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, Dixie!

Yep, Sam is still phasing -- no one will go through this alone again, as long as he can help it. I did not name any others in his pack. lol I suppose, shame on ME, I didn't consider that!

So glad you enjoyed this story. It was a blast for me.

And oh yes. I have a plethora of stories. LOL I have a short AH one posting here now and a one-shot in the queue as well (AU). There's a multichapter I will bring here shortly thereafter...probably early summer, followed by either an E/B AU or a Volturi AU. ;-) 

Yeah. The Dread Fanficker is still at it. LOL  If you don't have me on author alert, you might want to do that. 

Thanks so much for reading and the lovely reviews and ratings! It's been an honor.

LJ

Reviewer: BugRehsom (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 08:47 AM · On: Epilogue

I very much enjoyed this little journey.



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, BugRehsom!

Why, thank you. :) Thanks so much for taking it with me! :)

 

LJ

Reviewer: Curlykate (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2011 02:02 AM · On: Epilogue

Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.I have enjoyed reading it very much.

:)



Author's Response:

Good morning, Curlykate!

Thank you for reading! Glad you enjoyed it. (I still secretly suspect I probably got a bigger kick out of writing this than anyone has reading it. lol) 

Thanks for the generous rating!

LJ

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 07:10 PM · On: Epilogue

Short and sweet... thanks again for a wonderful "different" kind of tale - for you did an awesome job.  :-)



Author's Response:

Good morning, JRParz!

I know, right? I just needed to put a bow on it. :)

Thanks so much. :) I have so enjoyed having you along on the journey! Thanks for reading, for your thoughtful reviews and your stellar ratings!!

 

LJ

Reviewer: snarknsass (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 06:21 PM · On: Epilogue

Incredibly lovely and original story.  I half wanted her to stay with Levi but you're story is perfect the way it is.  Thank you so much for the enjoyment.



Author's Response:

Good evening, snarknsass!

I know! It is hard, you know, to write this kind of thing for Bella and Levi, KNOWING what I'm going to do to them.  Alas.

But I am so glad you felt the bond they shared as well as allowing her to move on, too. :)

Thanks so much for reading! :)

LJ

Reviewer: Bloo (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2011 06:14 PM · On: Epilogue

I've really enjoyed this story from start to finish, spanks for posting.



Author's Response:

Good evening, Bloo!

Why thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed this. It was such a joy to write. :)

Spanks, huh? Naughty, naughty.. lol

 

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: Screaming Mimi (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 09:21 PM · On: Adjustments

New reader checking in. Really enjoying the story and the dynamics so far.



Author's Response:

Good morning, Screaming Mimi!

Just sent the Secret Scene to you via the Twilighted PM system. Let me know if you don't get it, okay? :)

Thank you so much for joining me in this AU. Glad you're enjoying the story and its dynamics. I had tons of fun writing this.

Have a super day!

LJ

Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 01:03 PM · On: Stability

that wasn't nearly as dramatic as i was expecting =o this makes me somewhat sad :< but happy that things turned out okay :>

Author's Response:

Good afternoon, Nali!

Aw, I'm sorry.  I tried to achieve a happy place for Bella and Edward, here, while freeing her from her Protectorship.  That was my main goal.

Glad you think things turned out okay, even if not as dramatically as you were expecting!

LJ

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 11:35 AM · On: Stability

Hmmm...

So, Bella was able to expand her shield BUT not able to maintain it due to her distractions.  Thanks to Sam, and his element of surprise, the Cullens were able to turn that fight around.  They could have destroyed Felix BUT Carlisle wanted a diplomatic solution.  Aro only took it BECAUSE he had no choice.  At least Edward destroyed Alec - although Jane appeared to passive in her response to her brother's demise.

Like any story telling in someone else's universe, you need to analyze the fight and ask one simple question.  Was the fight and the outcome plausible?  The fight was... the outcome not so much.  Unless you made your Aro more honorable.

The story is an awesome ride... and it was very touching between old Quil and Bella.  Well done!

Thanks again for sharing your wonderful talent and I'm assuming ther emihgt be a chapter or two to include an Epilogue.  :-)



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, JRParz!

Jane kind of lost her will to do anything after her brother was killed.  Grief can be like that.

I think that fights and their outcomes have the possibility to twist and turn and surprise even those who orchestrated them -- for better or for worse.  So it's entirely probable that an implausible outcome...happens. *smile*

I'm so glad you liked the time with Quil and Bella. :) I loved working with their relationship.

The epilogue is very short.So short, in fact, I had to add my author's notes to it to make the length requirement here at Twilighted.  I pretty much told the story I wanted by the end of this chapter. :)

Thank YOU for reading and for your insightful reviews and generous ratings!!!

LJ

Reviewer: twilightluvaX3 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2011 02:04 AM · On: Adjustments

Hi,

I love your story so far... I haven't read much of it though.

I don't mean to be rude, but I was wondering if you would please be able to send me chapter 4 (the one about Young Quil and Bella)... my computer wouldn't let me read it....

I would be very grateful,

Thanks.

 

P.S: not sure if you have access to this or not, but my email is brittanywatkins14@gmail.com

 

 



Author's Response:

Good morning, twilightluvaX3!

Thank you so much for your interest in my new AU! :)

I sent you the chapter about Quil and Bella (Violations) as well as the "Secret Scene" I am sending all of my chapter seven reviewers.  They went to your email. :)

Thanks for reading and for the shiny rating! 

LJ

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 04:01 PM · On: Stability

  'Bella trained him how to fight with tooth and claw. Edward, finding in the Quileute's mind his comprehension of the situation and willingness to learn, had served as interpreter.(...)       Edward still stiffened at the beginning of every training session where Bella taught him what Levi taught her. He relaxed though, each time, as he grew accustomed again to her throwing herself in the path of what his instinct perceived as an enemy.'       Vampires teaching a werewolf to fight vampires.  The world must be upside down.  Is it awesome or what?       :-P

    'Sam had come – on the day she had had to wound him and help him and reassure him, on the day he had phased for the first time – to develop a curiously strong bond with her. He had been in a position to wound her but he hadn't. And over the past several days, they had come to trust one another implicitly.'       Yep, be good with your grand-granny.       X-)

    'Edward's exasperated shout surprised Bella so much that she froze as Sam spun to knock her off balance. "Hey!" she protested, flying through the air to hit a tree.'       LOL!

  "Edward! You're not dead after all. I rather suspected as much."  Oh, CRAP!!

  'Black! Black and lethal and furry and leaping, all teeth and claws and power! Sam Uley emerged from the trees, his open mouth unerringly encompassing Alec's head, ripping it off with a horrific screech.'  And Sam Uley saves the day!       X-D

  "She has destroyed without provocation and allied herself with the enemy."  Yeah!  Without provocation.  Right!

  Hmpf!!  I think that burning Aro to ashes would be much better than banishing Bella from La Push.  Well, what one can do?       :-/

  Sincerely, I hope she sneaks in from time to time, to visit.  Who will tell?       :-P

  "So I guess I get to see you get married again, eh?"       "Looks that way. Can you do me a favor?"       "What?"       "Would you...would you give me away?"       Tears made a sudden appearance in the Elder's dark eyes. "I'd be honored."       Quil, be careful, man!  People may think you like her!       X-)

  And that is it!  *sigh*



Author's Response:

Good evening, Costa!

Yeah, I know, right?  I always intended for Bella to teach Sam. In canon, he's gone for "a couple of weeks" after he first changes into a werewolf.  Same goes here, more or less.  Except instead of spending the time trying to find his human form, he's learning to fight. I liked it. lol

Sam's a good guy. LOL

Yeah...Aro and the Oh Crap moment. I know. Don't you LOVE Aro's presumptions?  Sigh.

Ah...the visiting...well... I like epilogues *beams* This one's is in the queue.

So you liked that bit with Quil at the end?  I enjoyed getting them there.

Thank you SO MUCH for reading this story and for all of your wonderful comments.  I have loved hearing from you.  

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Stability

I grown to love this story, this Bella, Levi, Quil, Sam and even Edward (even though he was a brat to start with!  lol) ....I will miss it.  :( sniff, sniff.

I'm so glad I found this story.  Thank you for sharing your gift once again.  You are such a terrific story teller.  I hope to read more.  I love Epilogue's too!

Take care, Dixie



Author's Response:

Hi, Dixie!

Aw, thank you. I love it, too.  :)

Edward was a brat, but he got a clue eventually. lol 

Thank you for your kind words about my writing. :) I try. lol  I've got the epilogue in the queue AND Phoenix Rising also validated the first chapter of my short AH Regency Romance here so that's going on now, too. Woohoo! lol

Thanks for the lovely reviews and ratings!

LJ

Reviewer: angelblue (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 12:50 PM · On: Stability

Wow.  over?  Sequil?



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, angelblue!

Yeah!  I've got an epilogue that I just slid in, but the story is over, yes.  

No sequels are planned at this time. I pretty much told the story I wanted to, right here.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing and for your scintillating ratings! I have so appreciated all of it!

LJ

Reviewer: hayleyhoo (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 12:48 PM · On: Stability

:O its the end but i have loved it :D such an amazing story :D x



Author's Response:

Hello, Hayleyhoo!

I just slid the epilogue into the queue... But the story is now over, yes.  

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. It was a joy to share.

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!

 

LJ

Reviewer: hayleyhoo (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2011 10:39 AM · On: Phase

AHHH Loved it :D such a good chapter and I hate Aro hehe :D but Sam's a wolf :D hehe x



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, hayleyhoo!

Great! So glad you liked it!

Aro ... is a horrible guy, here.  Despot.  Ew.  Sam is his awesome Alpha self.  I dig him as a wolf, gotta say it.  

Thanks for reading! Final chapter is in the queue!

LJ

Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 06:09 PM · On: Phase

That was pretty intense.



Author's Response:

Good evening, lilmissb!

Yep, it really kind of was, wasn't it? 

Hang on...almost done! :)

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: Nali (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 03:58 PM · On: Phase

So... Jasper did all this, then Edward will see it, and go to Volterra and blah blah blah...

How exactly did they keep the plan from Aro again? I'm assuming Jasper doesn't go because he's fully aware of the plan but... it's just kinda too confusing to me haha

Author's Response:

Good evening, Nali!

Ah...Bella is not a master strategist, though she makes a good effort.  Let us leave it at that, eh?  lol  We'll hear Edward's reaction shortly into the next chapter. Which is in the queue.

:)

It's almost impossible to get around Aro's gift. Mwahaha...

Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 01:27 PM · On: Phase

Ouch!  That had to hurt! 

So Sam is ok with Bella?  Will you describe in more detale what they did?  Will the Cullens go to Aro and show him?  How many more in the pack will phase?  I'm sensing a war between the Voulturi, the pack and the Cullen's with Bella teaching the new wolves how to fight.....

Loved the chapter, I want/need more (I know I'm greedy...sorry) lol!

Take care, dixie

 



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, Dixie!

YES, it certainly did hurt. lol 

Sam is okay with Bella...eventually. As you will see in the upcoming chapter.  You will have more of an idea of what happens between her and Levi's great-grandson.  Edward helps. :)

We haven't seen the last of Aro...

And...

That's all I can say about that! lol

Final chapter is in the queue! Yes, I did type that.

 

Thanks so much for your readership and the lovely rating!!!

 

LJ

Reviewer: Debbie1870 (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2011 10:09 AM · On: Phase

This disception is not going to work ultimately.  Aro will find a way and then all the Cullens will have their punishment served to them.  O.k. I'm hoping it does work - of course but when have Bella/Edward just had fun and happiness without a threat over their heads.  All Aro will have to do is touch Edward and BAM.  Yep, I don't really see this working out in their favor.  Keep writing cause I'm still reading.



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, Debbie1870!

Yep...the deception is not ultimately going to work. But Bella has to try. (I like this Bella, but she's not a master strategist. She is, though, a darn good hand-to-hand fighter. :))

Final chapter is in the queue! Thanks for reading!

LJ

Reviewer: Costa (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 09:45 PM · On: Phase

  Hi, LJ!

  Aro's letter.  What a liar snake!  :-/

  Bella and Douglas.  I'm sure Jasper will make a joke out of it, if he comes to know.       :)

  '"They're your family too, Bella." She did not entirely trust that, yet, but they were being patient with her. She couldn't put a finger on what it was that didn't seem to click for her.'       Hmm...  I would like to know that one too.  Seems meaningful.

  'The form of a tall man grew in visibility. She recognized him. "Hello! We don't see too many folks up this way." Sam Uley.'       Hel-lo, grand-grandson!       :)

  'She brought her entire focus on the muscles that rippled under Sam's skin, on the way his odor suddenly spiked. Mangy fur, rotten meat, old milk and vinegar. It was exactly the same. Stronger since she hadn't been used to smelling it. Not for decades.       Oh no. Damn it!'       You took the words out of my mouth, girl.       :-]

  Ouch!!  I bet this is not how Bella envisioned her first meeting with Sam.  That leg must hurt...       :-{

  Holy...!  The things they have to do to take Aro out of their trail!  But I don't get it.  How will Aro see these gruesome memories?  If he touches Jasper, he will see everything, the fact that it is all a ruse included.   :-/

  Whew!  No doubt an intense chapter!      ;)



Author's Response:

Good morning, Costa!

LOL Isn't Aro FUN to hate? Oh my yes. 

It'll all click for Bella eventually; that much I can tell you.  Remember she's been on her own a loooonnng time.

And no, this was NOT how Bella saw things happening for Sam.  She's rather sad about it, after all the effort she made over the decades to keep the young men safe.  

Heh...and yes.  i like this Bella, but that doesn't mean she's a master strategist, even if she's highly effective at hand-to-hand combat.  

Glad you found this chapter to be intense! It's almost the final one. 

Thanks SO much for your lovely reviews and sharing the quotes with me AND for the shining stars!

LJ

Reviewer: JRParz (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 06:04 PM · On: Phase

Solid chapter!  The letter was awesome... words I could picture Aro saying exactly.

Bella and Sam's interaction - spot on.  I think you captured Sam perfectly and I loved the way Bella handled him.

Jasper and Bella's interaction - and the comments regarding how Edward was going to react when he got wind of what Jasper was agreeing to do - SPOT ON!  I love it!

Like usual... enjoying... still quite intrigued as to how this will all play out.  Look forward to when Bella is living as a Cullen - and takes the Cullen name.  :-)



Author's Response:

Good morning, JRParz!

Thanks! Wow,such enthusiasm. It's almost as good as coffee! :D

I loved writing Aro's letter. So fun. lol  

Glad you enjoyed Sam's appearance and phasing.  

I had fun with the Jasper part, too.  He's a terrific character.  Not gonna give away the ending in the next chapter, but...I hope you like how I wrap it.

Thanks for your smile-inducing comments and all the shiny stars! :)

LJ

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 07:02 PM · On: Treaty

Damn Italian Vamps what do they want now?!?!  This story is so good, great teaser I can't wait to find out who or what it is!!!!!

Take care, Dixie



Author's Response:

Hello again, ma'am!

I know...the Volturi NEVER DIE. lol

Thank you so much for your kind words. I have tried to make this a story worth reading. :D  Next chapter is in the queue!

Thanks, as always, for your lovely stars that fly across the screen! :)

 

LJ

Reviewer: dkgors (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2011 06:25 PM · On: Bond

Oh no not Thomas!  So sad :( 

I'm happy for Bella.  I love how you described the pull they feel toward each other.  I loved the reaction from the family!  lol

I missed one update so yippy skippy I get to read another chapter!

Dixie



Author's Response:

Good morning, Dixie!

Yeah...I did that to him. I am NOT a nice person; surely you've noticed? ;-)

Glad you like how I'm working with the mate bond. I had FUN with that!

AND glad you get to catch up on the other chapter...I better go chase you!

 

LJ

Reviewer: hayleyhoo (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 09:22 AM · On: Treaty

Oh No not the Volturi :O haha loved the chapter :D x



Author's Response:

Good afternoon, hayleyhoo!

Oh yes, the Volturi!  lol  In all their radiant darkness. Or something.

Glad you enjoyed the chapter! :)

 

LJ

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