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Reviewer: Phb4367 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2016 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
I thoroughly enjoyed this delightful story
Reviewer: Aluap07 (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2012 05:35 PM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
Excellent !!!
Reviewer: Shazarabbit (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2012 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
This hit a little close to home for me, I have a brother with autism, real autism not the label that gets slapped on kids whose parents don't control them and the mannerisms were so similar that I got caught up in the story.
This was beautiful.
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2012 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
this is a beautiful story!
Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2012 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 4-Meeting
this is very cute
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: March 05, 2012 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
Loved it!!!
Reviewer: star_66 (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2011 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
This is one of the best stories I've read in a while. You are an excellent writer.
Reviewer: Syndi-Dowell (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2011 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
That was such a heartwarming story.:)
Reviewer: leeseeq (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2011 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
What a fantastic idea for a story! I loved it- thanks for writing!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it!
Reviewer: twilight-love323 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
Good story I'm sad it over.:( Are you going to right another story?
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it! I'm not sure I will write more Twilight fan fiction, I do have a couple of ideas...right now I am in the process of completing a novel I have written, so when I'm done with that, who knows?!:)
Reviewer: idealskeptic (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 04:22 PM · On: Chapter 12-Play Date
It's over?! Too bad, but either way it was a truly beautiful story! Thank you for sharing it!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it! I wanted to keep it short, like most children's fiction. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: idealskeptic (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 11-Invitation
I adored this story. It's like nothing I've ever read in fanfic before and it's a perfect child's view about something very important. Please keep writing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I plan to!!
Reviewer: potterfan922 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2011 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 11-Invitation
Sweet chapter! It was nice to see Bella in it. I'm a little surprised that the humans weren't shying away from her.
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 9-Confrontation
Told you Edward...you don't stand a chance!
You did such a good job of describing Braeden's thought processes...and again, I am so glad to have found this story...
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:51 PM · On: Chapter 11-Invitation
The only thing I don't like is that I have to wait for updates now :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 10-The Gift
I LOVE it! I keep saying that, but you provide new reasons to love this story with every chapter :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:45 PM · On: Chapter 9-Confrontation
Told you Edward...you don't stand a chance!
You did such a good job of describing Braeden's thought processes...and again, I am so glad to have found this story...
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 8-Daddy's Visit
I did not see that coming...I was actually staring at the screen open-mouthed!
Oh, I hope Braeden is ok. I am dying to know what he is thinking!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:34 PM · On: Chapter 7-Braeden and Autism
Oh honey, Edward will figure it out :)
I love it, and want to go slower so the story will last longer, but I am just SO excited to see what happens next!
I am interested mainly to see what Edward sees in his mind. I know good and well lots of stuff is going on, they just can't express it!
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 6-Katie
I love all of the context clues Renesmee uses to figure out the general connotation of the word retard. I love how she is intrigued by the sandy-haired boy :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 5-School
You do a very good job of describing first day jitters. I found myself getting a bit nervous for Nessie :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 4-Meeting
Hahaha, Nessie goes to school! I think a funny outtake would be them shopping for school supplies haha :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 3-Proposal
And so it begins...Edward does not stand a chance when the girls in his life gang up on him haha :)
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:17 PM · On: Chapter 2-The Mall
Aw, I teared up when you described the puppy trying to play but being ignored. I think I would have snatched him right up :)
Poor Nessie...I really feel for her.
Reviewer: Eoin Cullen (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2011 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 1-Nessie
I like this! I don't usually go for Renesmee stories, just because I am always hunting for Jasper. However, when I read the summary for this I just had to read it. I have such a soft spot for kids with difficulties, so I can't wait to see how you write this.
I especially like how you've written Nessie POV. Seems she has had good practice with using her words :)
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