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Reviewer: MerryCain (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 10:01 PM · On: Billionaire
Loved it
Author's Response: Thank you! I enjoyed writing it :)
Love BB
Reviewer: 2loveybunnies (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2011 08:11 PM · On: Billionaire
Oh my gosh, I totally loved this story! I think I say this about all your one-shots, but I wish you would write more!
I had a feeling Esme was related to Edward in some way, and I'm glad he turned out to be such a nice guy! I would love a follow-up to see what really happened to Edward and Bella after they disappeared.
Great job, thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
If you like my writing you may want to read Episode. It's my Work in Progress. I seem to write the oneshots to get through any small blockages when writing it. I couldnt imagine adding anything more to this story, or any of my other oneshots (apart from Extremities, which I hope to make into a multichapter one day)...
Thanks for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it :)
Luv BBxx
Reviewer: bella_babe (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2011 07:24 PM · On: Billionaire
Would love to have read the full story of this!!! It's still an awesome short!
Reviewer: Shortcake (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2011 07:45 AM · On: Billionaire
LOVE IT!
Reviewer: ObviouslyObsessed (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2011 05:28 AM · On: Billionaire
Loved this story. Australia is a nice backdrop ;)
Reviewer: emozing (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 09:07 PM · On: Billionaire
What a truly unique premise for a storyline for this fanfic. First story that I have read based on The Bachelor. Probably won't be long before something similar appears.
I enjoyed your writing abilities also. Sorry that it is only a oneshot. What do you think about doing a complete story with RPatz as the batchelor. The sky would be the limit.
Thank you for writing and hope to see more stories from you in the future.
Elaine -- sparkledamnu on twitter
Author's Response: Thank you so much! After I wrote this, a few people said they'd already read TwiFic's based on the Bachelor. Believe me, when I was writing this, it started getting bigger than any one-shot could cope with, but for me the object of the challenge was to write to complement the banner and keep it a one-shot, so that's why I did the little Wikipedia epilogue...as far as I am concerned it's done (but an RPatz version would be tasty to read).
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!
Luv BBxx
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 03:21 PM · On: Billionaire
Ok, i totally fell in love with that fic!! It was so sweet and I loved how Bella never gave in to the extravagance of her situation! You had a sweet and natural Bella and a truley loveable, although not so obviously genuine, Edward. I love that he met her at the hotel room! You saved my heart as i was crying by that point! I just wanted you to know i really enjoyed reading!!! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! I loved writing it! I was conflicted on how it would go, but I'm an Edward and Bella HEA gal, so it was inevitable. I'm so glad you enjoyed it and thank you for taking the time to review. Luv BBxx
Reviewer: sugar mama (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 11:32 AM · On: Billionaire
A great one shot and I realy appreciated the catch up at the end for I would have always been left hanging without it. Thanks for sharing.
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, I knew this would be a one-shot, and even though the contest didn't have a word count limit...the Wikipedia thing came to me as a way to ensure everyone knew they were together and they were happy - out of the public eye, like they both wanted! Thanks so much for taking the time to review, Luv BBxx
Reviewer: s3xyr0s (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 10:01 PM · On: Billionaire
love it! are you going to write a full story on this?
Author's Response: No, it was only ever going to be a one-shot, and the Wikipedia post script says all I needed to say, they are happy and living the life, out of the public eye...what more could be written? Although, I never say never, so one day...if I ever change my mind, I'll let you know. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing! Luv BBxx
Reviewer: RoseKelly1021 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 07:56 PM · On: Billionaire
Intriguing.
Reviewer: Blacklily (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 08:38 AM · On: Billionaire
It was not just the beautifully written, it was also clever and unique. I just think you end it a little bit forcibly. It would be even better as multichapter story. You write like pro. BTW: the image was also very very beautiful and complimentary to the whole story.
Author's Response: Thank you. I understand what you mean...once I started writing there was so much coming out...but I only wanted it to be a one-shot, even though I had enough material for a multi-chapter. I suppose you could say I forced myself to stop, intrigued that you are the first person to pick up on that (well apart from the people that have asked me to make it into a multi-chapter).
I'm glad you like my writing. I find it is improving by entering these writing challenges. Yes, the banner was spectacular, and the only banner in the 100 that were available that I wanted to write for... I'm very lucky that Belindella customised it for me :)
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Luv BBxx
Reviewer: nsturms72 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2011 07:25 AM · On: Billionaire
Really good!
Reviewer: juicybitkathy (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 09:17 AM · On: Billionaire
i want more ahhh!
Reviewer: bellybean (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 09:03 AM · On: Billionaire
Wow! I really liked it :)
Reviewer: roo135 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 08:39 AM · On: Billionaire
Love it x
Reviewer: HockeyChick (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2011 02:07 AM · On: Billionaire
Loved it! Loved the whole concept of the story :)
Reviewer: Robrator (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 10:08 PM · On: Billionaire
I think you're trying to kill me with thoughts of the pretty on a show like this.....I'm sure there would be NO shortage of contestants.....:)
Reviewer: elle12 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 08:42 PM · On: Billionaire
loved it & i dont read oneshots very often, i havent seen the batchelor but have heard of it, i liked the ending but really think u could have went somewhere with this story & made it a multichapter, i would have read it for sure lol, well done
Reviewer: VictoriaCullen (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 08:11 PM · On: Billionaire
I love that they avoided the lunacy. Great story!
Reviewer: Lowana (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 07:06 PM · On: Billionaire
Oh, sorry, I didn't realize this was a one shot. Oh well.....I was hoping for more. This was really great!!!
Reviewer: jend (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 07:04 PM · On: Billionaire
i really like it! i'm kind of sad it's just a one-shot, though.
Reviewer: whiteroses (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 06:58 PM · On: Billionaire
That was short and sweet!
Reviewer: bellobella (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 06:38 PM · On: Billionaire
well done!
Reviewer: RedDragonTattoo (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 06:16 PM · On: Billionaire
I never watched one single episode of The Bachelor, but I watched every stinkin minute of Outback Jack!
This was a damn good story.
Reviewer: brown0520 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2011 05:14 PM · On: Billionaire
This story was so freakin good. I loved every minute of it. I was great. I'm gonna look you up on ff.net and see if you have any other stuff out there. Great job!! : ) I love Belindella's stories as well and she did a great job on your banner it really was perfect.
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