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Reviewer: Hazel Allen (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2017 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 1

Theme of your website is pretty simple and catchy and you don’t use more ads or creativity which might hide the slogan of your website. Another hand I also found the pretty impressive piece of work on website and the stories you share are interesting.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2012 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 1

I'm sorry, but oh man this sucked!! Perhaps it's because I find it hard to picture Edward like this, but I can't be sure.... Maybe I'm more symathetic to Bellan than most people?

Reviewer: LauraEmily18 (Anonymous) · Date: August 21, 2011 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

Interesting! I can't say I particularly liked the idea but it was written really well and explored what most people are afraid to. Good job :)

Reviewer: Maranda (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2011 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

I truly loved it but I wish you would've had Alice say something about how he was going to love her and what a mistake he had made.

Reviewer: Dava_Luna (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

Aw i want it to keep going! "Just the faintest hint of a pulse, I could save my soulmate. All I had to do was bite."

Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 11:21 AM · On: Chapter 1

That's awesome. The "road not taken"... 

Reviewer: kitkatr (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 11:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

Such a naughty edward!!! And alice must have been slow on the visions if edward could kill so many, so quickly! Very interesting story - enjoyed it!

Reviewer: GiftfromtheGods (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 1

You did a great job capturing the monster inside of him.

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