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Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 07:04 PM · On: Animal Cruelty
Hmmm, if edward 'keeps it up' [lol pun intended], Bella will be a vampire by june regardless. LOL. Seems like everything about her sense are improving, now she has picked up some agility and speed in the process.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 06:44 PM · On: Threats
Wait a minute... Last chapter Edward was doing everything he can to make sure the treaty wasn't going to be a prblm for bella's change. They were trying to find loop holes to avoid the 'biting' issue. Now he is back to not wanting her changed?, w/ no reason why back tracked in your writing. Im confused!.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 05:31 PM · On: 8: Can't Bluff Your Way Out
Wow... that is one flimsy loophole. But w.ev's.
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“Damn it, Esme. Where are the scented candles and incense? Those two are sexing up the house again!” -Emmett
LOL.
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Good Chapter. Need more drama.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 04:42 PM · On: 7: SINGS
Yea, thats how you 'reclaim' your woman after another man tries to steal a kiss on her neck.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 04:04 PM · On: 6: Switzerland Takes a Stand
Why did bella get so defensive about going to the rez?. Edward had a valid point. It is currently dangerous to be there w/ so many out of control shifters. They are extremely volitile and it would be more prudent to stay away till things get under control.
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 03:02 PM · On: 5: Suggestions
There is no difference to me btw soulmate and imprint. They can call it whatever they want at this point. But as per the wolves knowing Edwards and alice's tricks...Bella really needs to stop having diaherra of the mouth. Those are 'family' secrets. Secrets like those keeps you alive, and the more ppl who know about it shortens you lifespan!. Bella is bound to blow her own cover sooner or later w/ them. Then they will 'act' betrayed, blah blah...
Reviewer: Trillion (Signed) · Date: May 07, 2013 11:45 AM · On: 3: Satisfying
The Leah Jacob imprint, is always how it should have gone. Any other way was stupid. I really ''dislike'' all these twifans that support jb/renesmee nonsense for no other reason than the fact that it was written by SM's. There were a 100 things wrong with that relationship. But the nimrods just accepted it as the one and only thing and have been drooling for more nonsense since.
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I really like the fact that Bella is ''getting hers'' on a daily basis. I like that there is no more confusion w/ jb in the relationship department. She has in Edward everything she needs, to get her daily dose of vitamin V!. LOL. She must be full to the rim w/ the stuff. LOL.
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I like the fact that the wolves get along w/ the cullens without so much animosity. It definetely not a love relationship, but they are more tolerant of each other spaces. The wolves don't just 'come over' whenever they feel like. They are atleast acknowlegding the importance of the treaty line. Its about time a fanfic made note of that fact. I hated that the wolves always seem to be on the steps or in the house of the cullens, without even a ph call to say they were coming. Like seriously, the living room of the cullen home is not the only place where you can discuss things. If that's the case, what was the point of the damn line in the first place? was it just a ''suggestion?''. How about meet at the 15 mile long treaty line?!, thats seems like a good spot. Especially for those w/ ''sensitive'' noses.
Author's Response: I sometimes think the writers that accepted the JB/Ren thing don't have a daughter so they wouldn't realize HOW wrong it was. I always felt bad for Leah and how things went with her/Sam so why not give her the new pack leader. Take that Sam!
I thought calling it vitamin V was creative and funny but also vague to the unknowning.
There seemed to gaps in SM's treaty story. Like why no wolves until the nomads appeared...hadn't the Cullens been there or a couple years already?! Hmmmm... I fixed it!
Reviewer: turtle1954 (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2013 06:21 PM · On: History
good story
Reviewer: karenlillie (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2013 09:01 PM · On: Animal Cruelty
“What if your boyfriend was a wolf?” Not that I want her, I’m just curious. Seeing as I haven’t imprinted yet.
Ok I'm confused *scratcies head* I thought Jake and Leah imprinted? I've also noticed quite a few minor spelling errors... I love your stories and I think you're doing an awesome job but I'd be glad to help you out with that! I've read this whole series, up to date, in about 2-3 weeks time! I like that its different from SM's version!
Author's Response: OMG! You're right. I knew it was this story that was Jake/Leah. Downside of being away from writing for so long. I've fixed it. Thank you for letting me know the oops which was a BIG one too.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2013 11:50 PM · On: History
More right than not I'm thinking. A short history lesson is never a bad thing, especially if you have some time to kill before your hot fiance gets home from hunting!
Author's Response: Oh yes, have to kill time while waiting for your very hot fiance I agree. Plus I had my own few little twists to the history line. ^_^
Reviewer: Sarsacia (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2013 07:59 PM · On: Animal Cruelty
I'm really glad you are back. Good luck with the house and baby - practice sessions can be such fun ;).
I'll have to head over to the other site to catch up on Everlasting. Can you ask your Twilighted beta why the chapter is getting rejected?
sar
Author's Response: I'm glad to be back also, thank you. The beta just says there discrepincies (sp?) with past and present text. Not much help!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2013 04:18 PM · On: Animal Cruelty
Wonder why you're having trouble with the betas rejecting your chapter? Doesn't make sense! Jake was funny in this one, the swelled headed pup! I am puzzled at Bronte's actions, I thought she was getting along okay with Edward now? The fuss over those bikini shots of Bella was a little silly, too!
Author's Response: Bronte is still leary whenever her master is gone, any devoted pup is. I figured Bella and Renee went to all that trouble to take the photos in New Moon, why not let Edward reap the rewards. MWAHAHAHA
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2013 04:14 PM · On: Threats
I'm just wondering how long it will take for Bella and the Cullens to figure out why her things have mysteriously disappeared. Good to have you back, long time no see! So sorry to hear about your loss, but happy that you are in a really good place in your life! See you again!
Author's Response: Hmmm. they'll figure it out soon. Yes, I'm back and I feel absolutely great to be writing again. Thank you.
Reviewer: djwolf55 (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2012 07:43 AM · On: 8: Can't Bluff Your Way Out
Great story!
Author's Response: Thank you very much.
Reviewer: melanieds (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 05:28 AM · On: 8: Can't Bluff Your Way Out
I liked how you brought the syringe from BD into this story. It was funny that it was funny that Esme was the one to think of it. Looking forward to the rest of Dark Sun. You are a talented writer and I love the humorous slant to your works.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I love humorous twists to stories.
Reviewer: mrsaustin07 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 09:33 PM · On: 1: Imprint
Thank you for writing! I am new to your stories and I have enjoyed your writing very much. I started here on this series and got swepted away in your "re-telling with a twist." I was so caught up in the series that I didn't notice that the updates had come to an abrupt halt ( I normally only read completed fics for my own well being). When I did the investigating I noticed that all your updates had come to a halt. I am very sorry to hear the RL drama that turns our lives upside down. I know it is painful. I just wanted to wish you health and life while you go through this trying time. I will anxiously await for you to be able to start writing again. I think I will read Hidden in the meantime. Again, thank you and hope you will be well soon!
Reb
Author's Response: Thank you. I have actually writen alittle of the next chapter of DS. I'm hoping to get a house soon and will have more time for writing. Enjoy Hidden. ^_^
Reviewer: Sarah1987 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2011 11:16 PM · On: 8: Can't Bluff Your Way Out
I read the first 2 stories in this series, and I wasn't aware that there was a 3rd until today, so I spent the day reading it! I loved it, and I don't think he was forcing her either! Please update soon! I favorited this! I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Surprise! Thank you, and I will be rewriting the 4th book also. Just so you know ahead of time. ^_^
Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2011 08:39 PM · On: 8: Can't Bluff Your Way Out
Another great ch.
Author's Response: *bows* thank you ^_^
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 11:04 AM · On: 8: Can't Bluff Your Way Out
I love this story please update soon!
Author's Response: I'm working on it. RL has a nasty way of interfering unfortunatly.
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2011 02:16 AM · On: 8: Can't Bluff Your Way Out
I'm with Esme, all those medical degrees and no one thought to just inject the venom? Can't see the forest for the trees, I guess, it was too easy. Jacob shouldn't really be so surprised that he's the alpha of the pack and future chief. After all, he's the hereditary chieftain, thanks to his dad. In an odd way, I don't blame Edward for testing Bella, it's juvenile to keep threatening to withold sex to get your way. I don't think it's fair, either.
Reviewer: dephenrhea (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 01:45 AM · On: 6: Switzerland Takes a Stand
Reviewer: Smily13 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2011 11:09 PM · On: 7: SINGS
Hey when's the next one gonna be done
Author's Response: As soon as my last chapter is validated I'll post chap 8 of this one. ^_^ Thank you.
Reviewer: TheColdDamsel (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2011 12:15 PM · On: 1: Imprint
Dx I so disagree with octoberland, by having them both itialsized its now going to be confusing who is who when talking. Also disagree on the quote marks, even if its someones thoughts its still them talking, thus the use of the quote mark to differentiate from the narration/POV :(
Author's Response: Thats what I thought but if you've read Midnight Sun, the thoughts are writen out with just the italic. I was having issues with twi'd getting this book validated, changing the thought quotes helped.
Reviewer: smartin47 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2011 01:32 PM · On: 7: SINGS
PERSONAL EXPERIENCE....HMMMMM
I love this story please update ASAP!
Author's Response: Well if I can relate to the character/experience, doesn't it make make it more believable. I'm writing as fast as I can *cries that about not having more fingers* lol
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2011 12:39 PM · On: 7: SINGS
Well, Bella's certainly getting used to the idea of no real privacy hehe :)
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