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Reviewer: taintedangel30 (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2012 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 1
all i can say is wow!
Reviewer: k1942 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2011 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
Don't be bad-mouthing yourself, this story is definitely not ridiculous. It's cute, and sweet, and funny and sexy as hell. I loved it, so there! p.s. We should all have friends like Alice and Jasper.
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, this has to be one of THE best one-shots I've ever read...Very hot, very sexy... xoxo
Reviewer: 1918EC (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 1
Wow, this has to be one of THE best one-shots I've ever read...Very hot, very sexy... xoxo
Reviewer: mountainlion718 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2011 04:11 PM · On: Chapter 1
awesome 1-shot! very hot, got Edward out of his shy state real quick...lol
Reviewer: Iceangel7 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 1
Have to give Bella credit, that took alot of nerve to pull it off, but then again its Edward! Loved it!
Reviewer: Discordia (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 1
Ahhh so good! I loved it. Sweet sexy little lemon. Very well done and so original. I wouldn't mind hearing a little bit more about these two characters at some point.
Reviewer: Sheeijan (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 06:35 PM · On: Chapter 1
Very hot. Loved having both POVs, then the little extra of A/J POV in the end just for a bit of closure. I LOVELOVELOVE Shyward, he's possibly my favorite human manifestation of Edward.
Thanks for sharing with us!
Reviewer: jessicasheehan (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
Holy hell in a hand basket, that was hot. What a great story. Thanks for sharing.
Reviewer: Saydonee (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 05:13 PM · On: Chapter 1
very good!!! now where do they go from here? would love to read more of them after this first meet and maybe some from first sight ;-)
Reviewer: RedDragonTattoo (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2011 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 1
Um, that was really hot! And well written!
Thanks and may I have another?
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