Reviewer: nicoleraychelle (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 23: Fight or Flight or Fall
Damn damn damn! No!!!! Good chapter!!!!
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 23: Fight or Flight or Fall
oh come on! you can't stop there! This is getting soooo good! Just keep it coming and soon. It's making me nuts to stop reading in the middle of one of the best parts! lol!!!
Keep up the great work! :)
Reviewer: Twilighter21 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 03:30 PM · On: Chapter 23: Fight or Flight or Fall
Love the story! I can't handle the suspense so update soon please!!
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 23: Fight or Flight or Fall
Oh man, good chapter! :)
Reviewer: nicoleraychelle (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 21: Seeing in the Dark
Good climax!
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 23: Fight or Flight or Fall
Ahhhhh, another cliffie! Wow, this chapter was so intense. Nessie bitten?! Oh no...
I love the frequency of the updates. :) Great job!!!!
Reviewer: twilightfan4ever2009 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 22: Suffer No Fools
Dont stop now. i hate clifhangers. keep going please.
Reviewer: NicoleRea (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 08:31 PM · On: Chapter 22: Suffer No Fools
Oh man, how is Nessie going to get out of this situation? Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 22: Suffer No Fools
Oh shoot...Jake's gonna be one mad shape-shifter when he finds out about this.... Can he and Edward pull apart and burn Olivier together??? Some father in law, son in law bonding, perhaps?!?!
Reviewer: Eternity Defined (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 02:33 PM · On: Chapter 21: Seeing in the Dark
I stumbled on this story by accident, but I am so glad that I did! You have the perfect amount of Jake and Nessie's relationship and suspense! Also, your character's that you added in are believable and actually make the story better! All in all, I love it and I can't wait for the next chapter! Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: KianaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 21: Seeing in the Dark
I loved this chapter. Please write more soon.
(:
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 21: Seeing in the Dark
Eek! Scary! Great cliffhanger! Can't wait for more! Olivier is so twisted!
Reviewer: lullubylover (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 21: Seeing in the Dark
creepy but intriguing
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 1: Schooling a Half-Vamp
Poor Edward and Bella. They have enough to deal with between Ness and Jake, but now a crazy vamp and a hybrid too?! Ha I love the conflict here. Wonder what will happen next? If you post soon, we'll be able to find out.... Another great job!
Reviewer: red delicious (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2008 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 21: Seeing in the Dark
hmm.....this is one of my favorite stories. when i logged on to find that there was another chapter, i clicked on it and chapter 21 is not there.
my heart is breaking. i love your story../any way to post more asap??? it's making me crazy to wait. lol!
Author's Response: Okay, I posted last night right after I got the email alert to post the new chapter, and I think things were still messy, because when I previewed everything was suave and then it totally refused to post. But now it's up and fixed! Yaay! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: yourbrandofheroin (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2008 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 21: Seeing in the Dark
Hmm...the text didn't show for me. Hopefully it's just a glitch and I'll be able to read it soon. :-)
Author's Response: It was a glitch. It's fixed now though. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: Bellas Humanity (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2008 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
wow this is incredible! please please pretty please update soon!
Reviewer: lullubylover (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2008 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
I love the jealousy between jake and ness, It's adorable! and post more soon- I want to know what the text says!
Reviewer: KianaCullen (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2008 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
Please please please please. Write more. Its great (:
Reviewer: notmyself (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
No!!! Evil cliffhhangers. Argh! I am so thoroughly entranced by your story that I don't know what to do with myself. It is beyond good, and I am vibrating from needing more right now. I don't think I can adequately express how very much I am in love with this story. If I had my druthers, you would be locked away, chained to a computer to write this and more stories like it until my eyes exploded from overexposure to the computer screen. I adore the humor, the threats are chilling, and the drama is griping. Not to mention the hot sexing. You have captured everything in this story with a perfection that I am astounded by. Despite dealing with mythical creatures and fiction, everything seems real enough to touch. You are amazing, and I love you. Want to marry you and have your babies, etc. And now I have both threatened you and proposed. I'm really not crazy. Just obsessed. Sorry.
~Mia
Author's Response: LOL. Wait, no. LMAO. Thanks for the fantastic review! Since Twilighted is takin' awhile to get the server served up, you should go over to FanFic and catch up on the rest of the story (same author name). I should be adding a new chap this weekend, too! Thanks for reading.
Author's Response: LOL. Wait, no. LMAO. Thanks for the fantastic review! Since Twilighted is takin' awhile to get the server served up, you should go over to FanFic and catch up on the rest of the story (same author name). I should be adding a new chap this weekend, too! Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Marjojo (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
All right! This is getting really juicy! You've done a good job with all the original characters in this story. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: starcrossdlover (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
oh oh oh...so evil to leave it there...but i do the same thing in my story so i cannot be too upset about it...i will say that i absolutely love this story and cannot wait to read more :) excellent job...every chapter is intriguing!
Reviewer: IngenueFatale (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2008 08:50 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
Nahuel and Jake just made my morning. Oh, boys. And IDK -- I am loving Estela. She's a little firecracker. Sorry I'm not more coherent this morning, but I enjoyed reading this chapter... And the end? Dun-dun-dun. ;)
Reviewer: simply_obssesed (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2008 05:14 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
im totally digging this story! i love the choice of "Afgan Girl"'s eyes. They so look like vampire eyes. Hmm.... anyway. cant wait for the next chapter. totally excited.
Reviewer: JLBMOctober (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 20: The Wolf and the Jungle Cat
Oh yes...this chapter with Nahuel vs. Jake (part one of many in the life of poor Ness, I'm sure) was worth waiting for! :) All I have to say is: MORE MORE MORE!
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